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  1. Tessa left Halcyon. She couldn't stay inside and see another companion erased. Her only logical course was to become an advocate for their right to be seen as more than a toaster. Ben's family has transformed more than I could have hoped in such a short time Thanks for another great story!
  2. The revenge of Marcus. Jason becomes a churches. Andrew and Jason bond as personas non grata of the sanctuary. Both leaving for what they see as the best solution.
  3. drpaladin

    Fast Cars

    Bentley maybe. An '80's Rolls would be a Granny car
  4. Delicious, permeate chaos.
  5. drpaladin

    Fast Cars

    Cars? Of course there would be absolutely ridiculous cars.
  6. Fe-Fe is wrapped entirely too tight. He's getting a liberal dose of Ryder to unwind his coiled springs.
  7. You do realize you've made me hungry?
  8. drpaladin

    Chapter 18

    So there is the possibility to live a long happy life together. Would one want to break the cycle is the question? Even for the one who dies, it is still a form of immorality.
  9. You have to feel some sympathy for those who seek unity and are ravaged by all sides.
  10. Tarquin seeing Andrew under the desk is bound to come back on Andrew at some point.
  11. What the text doesn't make clear, and I looked back to Andrew's meeting with Catherine, is why Andrew arbitrarily chose midnight to get into Alistair's study when his wife told him he would be tied up at the meeting until midnight.
  12. drpaladin

    Chapter 29

    Lucas, the Trickster. Since Eeca created all the paperwork making Andy his son, I guess he's the billionaire now.
  13. Wren wasn't a joyful songbird, and not an empathetic Tessa. He was a Gray Man in a gray corporate suit. Tessa, bless her, beat the deadline by minutes and Julian is safe.
  14. drpaladin

    Chapter 17

    For now the pleasant part of the past is synced with the present.
  15. Ben used the reason and shame option and stopped short of the nuke. Whatever works.
  16. To be fulfilling, life needs purpose.
  17. drpaladin

    Chapter 28

    Oh Esca. Only those sparkly Twilight vampires live in those glass houses. Sparkly you ain't.
  18. I was still making money off of pay phones then.
  19. Despite all the resources focused on retrieving them, Peter rescued Jason and himself on his own. He overcame Marcus and opinionated floors. Both Will and Peter are capable of being scary.
  20. Restoration of the natural order at GA has been achieved.
  21. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    So many different lives and memories. The only constant is the belonging and Marco. This unsettling flood of recall would be hard to bear.
  22. The looming terror of loss of all he is, all the memories he has carefully curated in his short, but eventful existence. It's like teetering on the edge of a cliff and there are no handhold. They can only maintain and hope.
  23. drpaladin

    Chapter 27

    Joy to the World
  24. drpaladin

    Chapter 27

    But Loki is there somewhere. He was the coyote. Esca has spent a fortune to trap Lucas and the real Loki is free, and presumably pissed at his arrogance.
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