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    Chapter Two

    drpaladin commented on Mike Carss's story chapter in Chapter Two

    Laird might be top notch in reading people, but he's lousy in the field.
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    Always start with big plates.
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    But where's the fun in that?
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    Chapter Two

    drpaladin commented on Mike Carss's story chapter in Chapter Two

    Isn't being a bumbling dickwad enough?
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    Chapter 12

    drpaladin commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Chapter 12

    River is jerked out of his carefully orchestrated plan to mentally and physically prepare for his first Kenji date to pull Alec out of one of his spirals. The description of Alec's spite house was a depressing relevation. It was an expensive prop. River is taking a leap into the unknown. It's very brave.
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    They left out the "for now." It's a clear threat.
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    Chapter Two

    drpaladin commented on Mike Carss's story chapter in Chapter Two

    Nope. I am glad it's chopped into smaller bites, but really one of the characters should have pointed out these were the guys who got away.
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    Chapter Two

    drpaladin commented on Mike Carss's story chapter in Chapter Two

    Sorry, but it doesn't come across in the narrative as it was the same group. I stick with my not switching stories.
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    Chapter Two

    drpaladin commented on Mike Carss's story chapter in Chapter Two

    After already being attacked twice on the journey, it makes no sense to cut the protective force in half just to deliver a body, and of someone they didn't really know. It's a one person job and the principal hasn't been delivered safe yet. I wouldn't have switched stories, no matter how good. Better to be suspected of lying than proving it. I guess we'll see how it sorts out.
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    When someone punches your God's lights out, you better listen when they speak.
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    Considering he created around 1,700 words, Shakespeare can slide on reusing some.
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    Nope. My Mama told me never volunteer.
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    Chapter 1

    drpaladin commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 1

    More than a fan. I knew him.
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    Chapter 1

    drpaladin commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Ever seen Raoul Duke lurking around?
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    Methinks @Myr what we have here is more than simply deja vu. I know methinks is good, but...
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    Chapter 3

    drpaladin commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 3

    The replay Peter did of his life vrought the emotional release he needed and at the best time.
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    Chapter 2

    drpaladin commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Carl is so stupid I doubt he's learned a lesson.
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    Chapter 2

    drpaladin commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Ever see a flaming asshole have gasoline liberally applied? I have. Luckily for him they only threatened to flick a Bic.
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    Chapter 1

    drpaladin commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Well, I guess we couldn't expect perfection. Like most bullies, I am expecting a blindside beat down from a gang of cretins.
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    Prologue

    drpaladin commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Prologue

    This is as good the second time around. Peter is fortunate he is very mature for his age and that he has an escape route. I hate to contemplate the trauma if it was otherwise.
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    Chapter 14 S2

    drpaladin commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 14 S2

    Naa. You can never watch too many. They say I read too much too.
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    Perhaps dessert would soften her up some more.
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    Chapter One

    drpaladin commented on Mike Carss's story chapter in Chapter One

    And those tingles and a coin will buy a spot on a lotto board. They can still explain their skills, Brohm's father trained him to be a soldier and Nathan's was a master archer. No mysteries to solve there. They only need to remain calm and not act guilty.
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    Chapter 14 S2

    drpaladin commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 14 S2

    The tasks are simple, 1- disable 4 Runner (i..e. chew wires, ideal for raccoon or squirrel), 2- disorient and overpower bad guys, 3- rescue damsel, and 4- disappear with an 'Aw shucks ma'am, 'tweren't nuttin.'
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    Nightcaps, such as the one Scrooge wore, are floppy with a tassel on the peak.
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