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  1. drpaladin

    Chapter 29

    Lucas, the Trickster. Since Eeca created all the paperwork making Andy his son, I guess he's the billionaire now.
  2. Wren wasn't a joyful songbird, and not an empathetic Tessa. He was a Gray Man in a gray corporate suit. Tessa, bless her, beat the deadline by minutes and Julian is safe.
  3. drpaladin

    Chapter 17

    For now the pleasant part of the past is synced with the present.
  4. Ben used the reason and shame option and stopped short of the nuke. Whatever works.
  5. To be fulfilling, life needs purpose.
  6. drpaladin

    Chapter 28

    Oh Esca. Only those sparkly Twilight vampires live in those glass houses. Sparkly you ain't.
  7. I was still making money off of pay phones then.
  8. Despite all the resources focused on retrieving them, Peter rescued Jason and himself on his own. He overcame Marcus and opinionated floors. Both Will and Peter are capable of being scary.
  9. Restoration of the natural order at GA has been achieved.
  10. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    So many different lives and memories. The only constant is the belonging and Marco. This unsettling flood of recall would be hard to bear.
  11. The looming terror of loss of all he is, all the memories he has carefully curated in his short, but eventful existence. It's like teetering on the edge of a cliff and there are no handhold. They can only maintain and hope.
  12. drpaladin

    Chapter 27

    Joy to the World
  13. drpaladin

    Chapter 27

    But Loki is there somewhere. He was the coyote. Esca has spent a fortune to trap Lucas and the real Loki is free, and presumably pissed at his arrogance.
  14. Marcus, I think it would have been better for you if you'd left Peter in the drug haze. You are so screwed.
  15. August's pa seems to have a clone. Regis and Darnell were desperate enough to do almost anything, but they're good boys at heart. I hope we see them again. At least they know Runyan got away. Now they only have to worry about Willy James.
  16. It was a weakness Dylan exploited. To be fair, in his position in IT he could have corrupted data on the server too.
  17. They were out then. I had the 2.0 drives in mind and they came out in 2005.
  18. It's good advice, but what were the instructions he was operating under? Total secrecy? We also have to remember a lot of tech we take for granted wasn't there in this time. This is before usb flash drives.
  19. I believe they see Julian as something they can easily be rid of and go back to the status quo. Giving them the hard punch on the jaw is the way I would go.
  20. drpaladin

    Chapter 15

    So Marco isn't being reborn and remembering, he is immortal and forced to endure this grief over and over.
  21. drpaladin

    Chapter 14

    The one I mentioned is a short piece by W. Somerset Maugham. https://selfdefinition.org/afterlife/articles/somerset-maugham-appointment-in-samarra.htm
  22. It was the calm before the storm. I'm not sure how Ben will handle it, but I'd use the nuclear option. Retract it or forget I exist.
  23. drpaladin

    Chapter 26

    Senior was proudly observing discretely.
  24. Chaos is action without direction.
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