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drpaladin

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  1. All there is here is circumstantial evidence, bur they've already made up their minds.
  2. Owen is still the,boy he described to Ellie, but there is no comforting hand to clasp.
  3. The life Caleb describes is a living hell.
  4. Shades of Twin Peaks and Laura Palmer.
  5. A showman without flourish isn't a showman
  6. drpaladin

    Chapter 3

    Does he Lance A Lot?
  7. drpaladin

    Chapter 3

    But it has two edges
  8. drpaladin

    Chapter 3

    Morwena's weal point is the sword. She has to have it to work this magic.
  9. drpaladin

    Chapter 3

    A father manipulates a son, and the father is manipulated by an evil witch witch weaving vines of blood magic throughout the kingdom. Wylan has seen it and she has seem him. Lothar, the Duchy of Loathing
  10. Constant nagging or making puppy dog eyes provide the grease on which promises move.
  11. A promise, even fulfilled late, is still kept
  12. drpaladin

    Chapter 2

    We know the fate of witches who middle on Wylan's turf
  13. drpaladin

    Chapter 2

    Well, Libbet could have stood on her head and opened wide
  14. Perhaps omniscient in this case?
  15. Harley?? Probably a Honda.
  16. Owen is pathetically passive and needy. Maybe he needs to be enslaved.
  17. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    Upon finding the man dead at the base of the stairs, the coroner ruled the death accidental. "But Fred, he's been shot," pointing at the revolver on the floor. "He dropped it and it went off." "Six times in the chest?!!" "Everytime it hit a step, it went off." * This actually happened here. *
  18. Margot shouldn't be a journalist. Her talent is more toward fiction.
  19. drpaladin

    Chapter 2

    Poor Atreus. He sees a wonderful new sword and not the weight of its meaning.
  20. drpaladin

    Chapter 2

    And less passion than some handshakes.
  21. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    Some problems fix themselves while others must be managed. "He fell on the bullets." Now this was a very artful fall.
  22. drpaladin

    Prologue

    Once triggered, status flags have to be manually changed
  23. drpaladin

    Chapter Eleven

    Dame Shirley Bassey?
  24. drpaladin

    Chapter Twelve

    They want to escape, not come back
  25. drpaladin

    Chapter Twelve

    Speaking of @mastershakeme Where she be?
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