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clandestine - Word of the Day - Friday May 22, 2026
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Governments tend to be overly fond of being clandestine -
Position, position, position He took vows to follow rules and didn't. He could have left the order and preached his message. He boarded a bus and tried to drive it. All in all, it didn't end as badly for him as it could have
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As brutal as the siege and fight to take the city has been, now it gets worse. More mouths to feed and they have to try and keep it
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Yes, I'll lay you 20 to 1 that phone's not working
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Second Times Are Sweeter
drpaladin commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Second Times Are Sweeter
Lawrence is letting himself get too involved with Bastien. Instruction sounds daunting.- 29 comments
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I had doubts about the plan before Denir said it wouldn't work. I wonder what he has in mind?
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There are also the Power Rangers.
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What are the chances of Aris meeting Agent Kol?
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We all have our priorities.
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How does Dio know Rikard is head of the Hegemony?
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Lukas has discovered truths about himself and Eriks. Now what will he do with it?
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Sticking a finger in a light bulb socket is a less than ideal way to get power
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No Grey Alien wants to be stapled.
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Restraint and cautious guidance insure peace is restored. Dogs bark in the night, but the caravan moves on
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Walo was a fool. He imagined the enemy followed rules. But the Governor is a fool too. I've been waiting for Ashot's moment of glory.
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Varilik is entirely too good of an actor. At least Ain is free and his powers are working. Now to get the others out.
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They are building a fort to blockade that gate. The city had six gates and the Crusadees had difficulty covering all of them.
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Chapter 7: THE KILLING GROUND
drpaladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 7: THE KILLING GROUND
The enemy Raptor was shadowing the freighter. They were expected. This reminded me of Elias' escape from the Lion's Pride. -
strategy - Word of the Day - Wed May 20, 2026
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Sometimes I get the feeling people are learning strategy from comic books. -
It's nice to know who to blame.
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Where I live we have a saying. If you want different weather, wait for tomorrow.
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Benedetto's stones are no longer being dropped in the pond and the ripples are stilled.
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Chapter 6: THE EXTRACTION
drpaladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 6: THE EXTRACTION
Everybody works for Enarbrem. -
Right or wrong, Benedetto is part of the church and is using the church as his personal shield. He knows very well his church does not and would not sanction his impromptu sermons. He was trying to game the system to push his own personal agenda. The problem here is there is no Church of Benedetto. Then or now, you can't co-opt a church for your own goals.
