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  1. Parker Owens
    I think anyone who knew the boys even tangentially would ask them "Are You Sure?" But that doesn't make it easier for Andy to hear it all the time. Andy certainly isn't lonely any more, is he? His Italian Grandmother wouldn't hear of it. I hope you enjoy what's left of Andy's journal, and thanks so much for reading!
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    I'm so glad you liked this chapter. Grandmother Costanza was a fun character to write. Andy seemed a little overwhelmed by her welcome. Finally surprising Mrs. Marjorie must have been a very satisfying moment. The constant 'Are You Sure?' drumbeat has got Andy anxious and unsettled, too. Hope you like what's left of Andy's journal, and thanks very, very much for reading!
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    Well Andy sure has anxiety big time, and the 'Are You Sure' question isn't helping. The introduction to Nonna Costanza was a wonderful moment to write; she's a character I know from many observations. Finally surprising Mrs. Marjorie must have been a big score for Andy. Love KarmaPoints! Where do I sign up? Thanks for your review, and for reading this chapter of Andy's journal.
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    March 21 – Tuesday So. It's official. Zander and I are getting married! Really. Yesterday, Father Brewer called me on my cell in the middle of Physics lab. He left a message for me to call him, which I did, during lunch. I took my phone outside the building, so I could have some privacy – and so I could avoid the assistant principal, who constantly reminds everyone of the no-cell policy. The good news: we can get married. The harder news: the earliest date Father Brewer could give us was st
  5. Parker Owens
    Two cheers for David...new advanced social studies class!...kept iron control with his ghastly mother...But his advice to Chuck, while very sound, may not be right for Chuck if Matty presses him ( literally) too far. Great chapter, and of course, I want more...
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    Gary, what profound expression of love and loving. The images and the tempo had me swept up in the passion of the verse. Perfect.
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    I your are not turned away by the emotions you feel. I am glad you have been reading and enjoying Andy's journal. Hope you will continue to read what remains. Thank you so much for you kind words.
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    I am so very glad you liked this chapter. Eustace was clearly glad to see Andy again, and Andy must have been pretty anxious to watch Eustace meet Zander. That Zander should be anxious and vulnerable himself is understandable. Eustace is pretty much a live and let live kind of fellow, and it showed perfectly here. Thanks for your comments, and I hope you like what remains of Andy's journal.
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    I'm very happy that you enjoyed this chapter, and that you thought it struck the right chords. It was a fun chapter to write, as it felt good to put these characters who love Andy so much all together. And yes, the old man got to see that he boy he'd become attached to was safe, sound and thriving. Thanks for your thoughts, and I hope you like the parts of Andy's journal that remain.
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    Andy's life is far different to Stefan's. How good it is to see how far he has come. I am glad you liked the reunion with Eustace. It was both exciting and tense for Andy to see Eustace and Zander together. This was a fun chapter to write. Thanks for your comments, and as always, thank you for reading Andy's journal.
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    I remember the Narnia books from when I was a kid, and I vividly recall the line "His name was Eustace Clarence Scrubb, and he almost deserved it." Perfect. I wanted an old fashioned name for the farmer Eric would encounter, and I thought of that one. I have never known a real-live Eustace, myself. I am glad you enjoyed seeing Zander meet Eustace. Andy enjoyed himself, and must be very relieved that Eustace seems to like Zander, too. How very kind you have been in your remarks; I am very happy. There will be more to Andy's journal - I just hope you enjoy it.
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    This was a chapter that felt good to write. The barriers between Andy and Eustace could be dropped. It's plain that the two still feel a deep affinity for one another. Eustace seems to be a fellow who can admit his mistakes, and he did so admirably, this time. That Zander should feel insecure and vulnerable is understandable - events have been rapid and unsettling - and now Andy gets to see Zander in a new light, and he seems to love him all the more for it. Glad you feel some issues that bothered you have been resolved. I know it took a long time to do so; sorry about that. I am grateful for your kind words and your insights into the story. Hope you like what's left of Andy's journal.
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    "Awakening Your Muse" hits it perfectly. Really like the images that come to mind as I read it. A muse awake is indeed finer than gold. Great idea for "The Hanging." I've had a very hard time with this prompt - can't settle on a point of view. But you've done this marvelously. Congrats!
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    You have my sympathies on the lost first draft. That has happened to me a number of times. I am very gratified you picked up on the evolving shift in the boys' relationship. Now Andy is seeing Zander can be as vulnerable as himself; that the Olympian Zander can hurt, too. This is healthy for them both, I think. Thank you for your very kind words (you can insert a blush here). Hope the remaining chapters of the journal make you smile...
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    It was good to write a chapter in which Andy and Eustace could ignore the barriers that existed between them during the summer. Andy's anxiety was always a lens that colored their relationship back then. Zander's vulnerability may have been unexpected, but it was good for the boys to talk it out. Thank you for your very kind remarks. Hope you like the remaining chapters in Andy's journal.
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    Blood Brothers

    Parker Owens commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Blood Brothers

    Don't blame CJ for getting touchy about Owen, but that just shows how much his emotions and thoughts about Owen are in conflict. Agree with Tim that CJ is being clueless about Owen's feelings at best, cruel at worst. Brett and Cesar have managed to talk more evenly with CJ about things since Chicago, and I agree with Tim it's time to do it again. CJ having Chipper as a blood brother will be good for CJ - a brother closer than Thiago or Harley, even. Someone he can trust for plain unvarnished truth.
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    Your comment put a smile on my face. Thank you! Hope you continue to enjoy the remainder of Andy's journal.
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    I'm so glad it worked for you. This and chapter 58 clearly go together, but were too long for one installment, I think. Andy must be a writer - he can't sleep unless he gets everything out in the journal first! Thanks for your reaction.
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    Chapter 59 Eustace

    Parker Owens posted new chapter in A to Z

    Entry for March 19, Sunday, continued…. Zander and I watched the grey police sedan back out of the driveway. Monica and Garrett sat in the back; they would see Allan off at the airport, and then drive with Ambrose back to the Whitley farm. I think they had a lot they wanted to talk about. I thought it would be fun driving with Zander to Eustace's. He had the license and was a pretty good driver. We'd be on our own, and would have some time alone together. But once we got onto the interstate h
  20. Parker Owens
    Matt and Parker together at Disney World! Wonder if anything quite like that pair has ever hit Orlando. Perhaps they'll give a new meaning to 'magic kingdom."
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    Late December

    Parker Owens commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in Late December

    I feel for Toph on New Year's Eve. That Steve was drunk is not a great explanation, and I doubt Toph will go for it when the clear light of dawn hits. He was actually falling for Steve, too. Will he see this as catastrophic betrayal, or will he be able to find a path to forgiveness? Looking forward to the resolution of that question. Toph clearly hasn't forgiven his family or Gary, either, so he may have real trouble with Steve. Not a good way to start the year...Wonderful chapter, SD!
  22. Parker Owens
    Welcome to GA, Mark. You have hit on a great reading and writing community. Glad you are here.
  23. Parker Owens
    Agree with Tim in that I want more, like seconds and thirds on crawfish boil...so good for Clayton that he is recognizing what he feels for Ryan is something bigger and better than mere dating...all that news Clayton gathered must be good for something later...waiting for you to put some of these pieces together...like how about in the next hour or so?
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    Once he played the field, but now Clayton is a different story altogether. That pretty much sums it up. You describe so beautifully Ryan's attraction and his growing attachment to Clayton, along with his frustrating ardor. Very artfully written. What a pity I wasn't invited for dinner, too!
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    Philip

    Parker Owens commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Philip

    This is both painful and hopeful at the same time, something that can be very tough to pull off. You've done it beautifully here, Tim. Tait's hurt and despair is his own burden. Philip can't carry it for him, not really. You make it so crystal clear that Philip hurts with him, though, and that he'll do whatever he can to help make the burden lighter or easier to manage. This is what makes me hopeful. We should all be so fortunate as to have friends like Philip in our lives. Thank you for this story, and for this chapter.
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