Hey Ron,
I've been a silent reader so far, but your work I've read is gorgeous!
I just wanted to drop you a note saying how much I enjoy reading your stories.
The reason I speak up now is that I found two instances of confused names for the twins in this chapter. Normally, the context makes such mistakes meaningless, but in this story they feel quite important with the characters being twins and looking alike.
Hope you don't take my being silent or my speaking up now personally, I really like your writing style and will continue to follow your work
Best,
Nina