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Seems like if Corey was not four hours late, he could have made it home before dark lol.

I have enjoyed this story, and always look forward to new chapters but ... MY WORD, if nothing else Dani is consistantly a puss. The scene just is sad for someone that has the ability to manipulate energy 😑😞 lmbo.

I am probably the only one, but ... I do hope Jonathan does not attend; just out of respect for himself at the pettiness of that invite... well, the non-invite lol.. Or show up and look so dashing that he becomes the center of attention. Petty for petty?? 🤣🤣🤣

Yeah, agreed. I've grown so bored lol. I read the first two or three lines and skip to the comments. Just no point in reading it. The story does not seem to go anywhere lol.

same lol 41 chapters and it feels the same as chapter 10. I just glance over the chapters and read the comments lol.

@Kristamy only question .... when will Jackson get to top Luke? 🤣🤣🤣

So, is his issue... being right that the boy he turned his life upside down for is in fact a cheater?? 🤣🤣🤣🤣.. Kidding, just wanted to put that out there!!!

I'll admit I kind of skim, if I read this story now... just came too much of a soap opera and reminds me of what I assume the brain of a toddler is like ...... however, wouldn't this make Joey correct in his assessment of guys around Jack and Jack himself .... not making Joey out to be the jealous and controlling type; but instead having decent discernment?

Bloody hell, does someone always have to be mental or in a crisis?? Almost redundant, probably just me though lol.

Rubbish ..... Im glad Joey stood up for himself! Dislike me for it, I am ok with that. Did he have to break Shaun's nose? Probably not but finding out you cannot trush someone who is supposed to be solid for you can be devastating, especially for a teenager. He allowed both of his "so-called" friends to disrespect him on multiple occasions, and even took one to the chin from Dean but there was no outcry over that lol. Often the initial wrong is overlooked, when that should be the main focus so everything else does not splatter. Shaun, regardless of the hookup story, has been manipulating those around him from the jump and Jack's misplaced anger is disappointing, as he makes it seem as if he knew Shaun was interested in Joey. Just odd he would try to pursue Joey only to easily let Shaun have him??

By my count, that is two people Shaun's gone after that has ties to Joey, I do hope that is NOT in the cards. Cannot respect him as a friend, dang sure not going to respect him as a boyfriend lol.

Sooooooo both of Joey's so called friends hookup with people he is either interested in or interested in him?? Some friends, seems the only fool is Joey. Regardless, you'd think they would show some form of respect to him. Kind of sad honestly...

I agree.. it is sad however... it seems that is often how the justice system works. Less about the surrounding facts and more of what you can convince is facts lol.

I am so glad Puppy is surrounded by people who care for his well-being because he obviously does not give much concern for his own mental nor physical well-being lol. Just as a rapist is a rapist, a thief is a thief; a cheater is a cheater and an abuser is just that, an abuser. I do wish I can say I feel for Hunter but I am only saddened for the position he put himself in but I will applaud him for being the mature young man, because Puppy is not, in telling Puppy the truth and also trying to convince him he deserves better. Unfortunately, Puppy lives up the name Puppy .... @James Matthews extol to your ability to keep people interested. I am sure I do not need to voice this but you are indeed a talented writer with impeccable creativity. *salute

I believe @James Matthews just likes rape lol! Just enjoys writing those slighty rape situations! 🤷🏾 Which to some it is rape and others it is fine. Awesome job once again lol!

I was thinking similar thoughts about reading it some place before!

🤣🤣🤣 everyone will think I am rude or mean for this but I am seriously cracked up at this chapter. I am not sure if it is because the majority knew this situation would occur or that Puppy is reaping his rewards of the decision he made to ignore those around him that tried warning him of Hunter. I want to feel bad for Puppy but when someone tells you and actually shows you who they are and you refuse to believe them ... well, you wanted all the smoke lol. I guess I assumed Puppy's desperation for love and sense of belonging was more filled when he found, moved in with his dad and became family but I guess having your butt hole beaten trumps real love. Crazy good chapter @James Matthewsmay creativity continue to flow out of you!

Hmm, Puppy being basically raped kind of makes one believe that all the hype concerning Hunter is indeed valid. Being innocent and uninformed does not really excuse the behavior and actions of Hunter. However, Puppy is a walking stereotypical gay teen or gay stereotypical gay man, moving on and busting nuts with whomever; well at this point it seems that is his destination. Steven is the epitome of entitled but definitely has a heart of gold. What was so good and warm-hearted has definitely turned into a classic soap opera lol. It has been an interesting read for sure!

Personally, I think Nick is letting Cyan off too easily. Cyan is supposedly his "friend" whom asked for his help and in return never takes notice that Nick's body is possessed by Malachy; then sleeps with his boyfriend and does not tell him, letting him find out through a painting. Cyan could not feel too guilty painting the portrait as a remembrance. I may have missed a lot of the build up and dynamics of the situation/story due to the fact that I no longer read the chapters, just skim them lol. I think you are an awesome writer, I just lost just about all interest with the heavy success of Malachy; which seems to follow the same path as all movies and stories that have dealings with an evil of some sort!

Maybe I just bored really quickly but the Malachy bit just seems to drag out the story considering the story no longer mentions Nick, to whom I thought the story was about? Or am I lost and this is just about the wolves and Malachy?