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I hope that Henry and Phil are cautious about their surroundings and they don’t get sucked into this adventure before something happens to one or both of them. If I remember rightly Elijah is Gavin in spirit form, I just hope that his presence isn’t an omen of trouble coming.
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Very good story. I hope that those students will start paying more attention to their training and less time harassing people on the street after getting the notes from Mitchell on their drawings and also for having some of them shown up by an grade 11 student whose drawing got a B+ from her. The way she was talking about the assessment of the drawings she wasn’t too pleased by some of the students work ethic. Great story, I would also like to see a book 2 story so I could see if Tobias ever has any type of relationship with his mother and siblings, also what happens to the step father for the assault on Mitchell. Thank you for the great story.
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Poor Julian he has a hard decision to make about the love of his life Glenn before his transformation is complete. The power of their love for each other has caused a huge problem with Glenn instead of becoming a regular vampire he is becoming a Nosferatu which is a bad thing to happen because of the constant need for blood. The people who are in charge of the sanctuary told Julian he has until midnight the next night before they come in and bleed Glenn and then put his body out in the sun to take care of his body. I hope that Julian makes the right decision for Glenn instead of thinking with his heart.
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Maenyl has recovered his memory and is on his way back to the palace along with the Otterman family members who were the ones who took care of him after his fall. Sibyl Otterman is the widow of Karl Otterman who was a junior science officer on the Star Voyager along with Maenyl’s father. Maenyl was trying to avoid the ceremony at which he would be formally recognized as the Crown Prince when he took off running from rooftops and then fell before he was able to get to the other roof.
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I’m glad that Mason was able to get his memory back after looking at the picture on the wall. It was very nice that he was able to stay with Isnyl and his mother while he was recuperating from his fall and losing his memory.
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Fantastic chapter. I’m glad that Grant & Troy are getting along so well together and as they said New Beginnings, I believe that they are going to have some great times together. It begins with thanksgiving dinner at the home of some friends that Troy and John had before John passed.
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Although I agree with the others I also want to know more. I’m satisfied with the weekly chapter. I thank you for the great stories you write for us to read.
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I think I know how Deke feels trying to get his uncle back home from the bar after he’s had a bit too much to drink. I’ve had my share of dealings with drunk family members and sometimes trying to get them home like Deke and his friend trying to get Buster home. I’m glad that he has a good friend that is willing to help him with Buster, even though it’s more work just trying to keep him upright and moving forward. I’m not sure what to think about Deke and the fire he lights to let Colby know that he’s out there waiting for him.
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I feel bad for Drew and Ethan especially now that someone is starting to play the stupid games with him. Ethan got to school and found that someone has wrote the derogatory term on his locker. When Drew got there and finally saw what was on the locker he tried to get Ethan to stay away from him until things returned to normal and Ethan wouldn’t hear of them being apart because of the way that people were. Drew made him promise that if the teasing got too bad and he wanted to break up with him all he had to do was tell him and they would go their own way.
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This is going to be a very interesting story. I don’t understand how they can keep Julian locked up in a room and then not let him go see how his boyfriend Glenn is doing since he was in the middle of his crossover when they had to find new shelter.
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I’m glad that Troy took Grant’s offer to rent the other bedroom for $500.00 a month. It gets Troy out of his homelessness situation and back into his old home that he lost when his boyfriend died in a car accident. Although Troy doesn’t know that Grant found his journal in the fireplace when he moved into the house, it was actually how he found Troy to do the fence job and then the furnace installation. Now Grant has been on Facebook and sent a message to a friend of Troy’s who has been looking for him since John died. Troy is also able to get his van fixed which he was dreading due to the money situation he was in. I’m glad that you’re posting the story here even though I’ve read it before I’m enjoying it all over again and always look forward to the next chapter.
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Great start to a interesting story. The images of the 2 cousins standing together at the bathroom mirror shaving after getting out of the shower together was quite good. Although the one cousin is gay him being naked with Dante made no difference to him. He said it was like being attracted to a woman it didn’t do anything for him.
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I’m glad to see that Justin and Taryn are back although their wanting to go out for the night didn’t seem to work out the way they expected it to. I hope that the security detail gets told to leave the guys alone or else they might be in need of medical attention because of a severed limb or a hole through the middle of them. They should know by now that Justin will do everything in his power to protect Taryn.
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Another awesome chapter. It appears that everything is going well with the school taking over 2 buildings in the complex for the senior classes of the grammar school. The only problem is the media getting in the way trying to ask questions from anyone entering the complex. I’m glad that Mitch hired security guards to keep the media out of the way.
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Great beginning to the story. It’s great to see how the characters have aged since the original story. The family has been summoned to the capital near Jupiter for a ceremony and the parents are not telling the boys what it’s about.
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I’m glad that Cheryl won’t cause anyone else any trouble since she’s now dead. I’m sorry that Jenny took matters into her own hands to prevent her from feeling the pain of loosing her mate after Cheryl dies. One thing that Kitryn has to look forward to is the fact that Jenny has bound her soul with Fran and she will be able to train her until she reaches maturity so she will be able to touch her and talk to her.
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Fantastic chapter and story. It’s getting hotter by the chapter with a sex scene from the soap getting leaked to Pornhub and then episode 3 airs with a couple of sex zombies going at it which in turn got Lupe horny and he took William to his bed and rode him to a strong finish with both being very satisfied.
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I feel bad for Yuli because I think he got the worst injury that any male could. Although I’m glad that he was able to help put his attackers away even if it meant coming out to his parents and the police captain. Yuli found out that his parents suspected he was gay for a few years and they thought Willem was his boyfriend. I’m glad that he didn’t out Roman since he’s not ready to be out yet, I’m also glad that his balls still work after his injury.
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It’s to bad that Tobias had to be subject to the arguments all over again after leaving his parents house because of the constant issues there. I don’t understand why Xavier is so upset because I figured he would understand why Tobias was living with them.
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It looks like Tobias is settling in at his uncles house which has been great for him except for the incident which Xavier was angry and put his hand through a window cutting his hand bad enough that he had to go to the hospital. Xavier had to have surgery on his hand and would be there for a few days. I’m glad that Tobias, Kyle and Mitchell went to the Sunday service at the school chapel especially after Mitchell said he was a former student of the school.
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Fantastic chapter and story. I’m glad that Tyler had the idea of buying a farm for his parents close to his home on the Isle of Wight in the UK he also purchased a pub for Lucas’ parents to manage for him. The reason for the purchase of these properties is so that they could be close to him and Lucas as he starts to get an idea of what he is expected to do as the Earl. After a thorough cleaning and some painting as well as purchasing new glasses for the bar as well as new plants for the beer garden the pub was reopened with new hours. With most of the former staff were rehired for the pub and the temporary manager was terminated for cause and the other staff coming back to work along with Mr and Mrs Carrington settling in to the apartment over the bar area I think things will get better and run smoother than it was under Derrick’s management.
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Great beginning to the story. It seems that the young man is going to be better off now that he’s out of the control of Addison. I have a feeling that the trust fund set up for him by his father has been gotten funds taken by Addison for himself. I’ hope that he finds it to be a very different life now that he’s with his uncle and his partner. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
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Awesome chapter and beginning to the story. I’m thinking that I’ve read this one before because I started reading the chapter and it brought back the characters and story line that really seems like I’ve read it before at some point. I could be mistaken although I’m not sure if I am or not. Thanks for the story anyway, I’ll continue to read it.
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This was truly a fantastic story, the work that the guys put in their training and preparation for the draft was great. I’m truly inspired by this fantastic story and who knows it just might happen that the NFL would come around and have one or two openly gay players. Thanks for the great story..
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Excellent chapter. I think Tyler, Lucas and his parents are going to have their hands full trying to get the pub back into shape after the former manager let most of the staff the boot and then reduced the hours of those who were still there. I hope that they get it cleaned up and back open soon.
