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Excellent chapter. I hope that Chipper does win the Voice as it will be the best opportunity to get a great deal of things to happen in order for him to truly make it into the music business. If he does win he would have to get an agent or a manager very soon after winning the competition so he doesn’t get into a mess like he almost wound up in with Nalbo.

I cried when the attack happened and Barega , Akama and Jarra were thrown to the ground from Jarra’s personal carrier after they were shot at. Barega was killed by a bullet and Karmai was grazed by a bullet on his arm. I’m in agreement with everyone else that said Mirri sang a very sad song showing that he understood that Barega wouldn’t be waking up, up until that moment he had always sang happy songs to show his happiness. Akama is very strong for the way that he took charge when Karmai passed out from exhaustion because of the fact that he carried Barega on his back even though he had been shot as well. I hope they get everyone involved in the attempt of kidnapping Jarra and causing the death of a 11 year old boy who was a friend of Jarra and Mirri. I’m glad that Yirgy was able to get a signal through to Jarra’s infopad warning him of the abduction plan.

I have to agree with CG the more I read about Jarra, Mirri and Yirgy and the interaction between them is very, very, very exciting. Jarra and Mirri go on the adventures and with the help of their commpatches Yirgy is able to be a part of the adventures as well. They remind me of the trio from Attunga and all the things that they did both before Sonic and after as well. Akama was so interesting to see as a young boy who spent a lot of his time in the area where they had the welcoming and leaving ceremonies for Baradin, and the rest of the family members who were taking three weeks to spend in the area outside of Carnarvon and then Jarra and Mirri also spent time with Karmai at Monkey Mia to see the dolphins. I’m glad that this story was recommended as one to read as I haven’t been let down yet because it seems like there’s always something going on with the characters and I find it very nice to read about and to feel like I’m a part of the story as well.

For Jarra being 14 he seems to be very intelligent and he has a great understanding of maths and science, I’ve noticed a few times when Darri is talking to Barudin he tells him that once Jarra gets an idea into his mind he goes after it with all his abilities and he makes Darri think he’s the one who can’t understand what he’s doing even though he has 3 degrees. Jarra needs to find a way to include Mirri more now since he’s having classes at the university Mirri feels left out because so much of Jarra’s time is taken up by his workload from his classes. I thought it was great to see that even though it’s a hundred years before Attunga the Marine Research centers are already working with the dolphins. I’m glad that Jarra has been able to go on these adventures with him having his health issues with his muscles and it seems like he’s gaining a little more time to do things with Mirri before he gets to tired from over stimulation.

I love how Mirri has taken on the job of brother to Jarra, especially since he was welcomed into the family in the old way of the people. I especially love the way that Mirri chased away the boys from Jarra’s old school after they started calling Jarra names and saying things that provoked Mirri so much that he gave them a look and they took off. I’m glad that Jarra has some great new friends and they have even had some more adventures. It’s great that Baradin has been so instrumental in getting better help for Jarra and making it possible for him to work with a scientist and engineer from the power company as well as the doctor who is going to help him get his muscles to work better than they are now. Jarra and Mirri are going to be a great team of explorers if they keep going they way they are.

This was a very fantastic story and I enjoyed it very much. The characters were so real to me. I just wondered how old the trio was during the story? I’m glad that they are finally able to make the move that had been planned for a long time. I hope that K74 is completely gone after the things that they were doing against the AI’s, at least the Cadre and the Rogue need to be history so that the people can have a better life than they had before.

This was a very interesting chapter. The trio did what they had to do in order to save the habitats from destruction by the asteroid under the control of the Cadre and the Rouge. I kept thinking that something was going to happen to either the trio or Sonic. Thankfully that didn’t happen.

Awesome chapter. I’m glad that Kipling did not allow the crew to sneak anyone on board as that might have cost him his job. The 2 crewmen that did try didn’t get much sleep because they had to report to Kipling at 0600 in order to clean and the main area they’re cleaning up is the helipad. I wouldn’t doubt that they might also be cleaning up some vomit since they’re cleaning up a really messy area after Kipling went to the local fishery and got some really messy things that they had to clean up. Just as he finished sending the 2 crew members to their job the captain said he should look at who’s coming toward the Researcher, I can’t imagine who it could be.

The thing about this story that I like is that the dolphins are so well cared for and they have special abilities and now there’s a very special dolphin who has taken a liking to a trio of boys who have been together for years. Sonic came up with the idea of helping the dolphins on earth after he learned that a lot of them had died due to the fact that some people don’t like the idea of dolphins having special abilities. Sonic and the trio went to earth to help save the dolphins who are being protected at the Marine Research Stations as well as others who are considered wild along with their Mentor, the Honored One Akama who was asked to lead them all in a blessing. Before that happened Sonic and Calen went into the ocean to call as many dolphins as they could get to come and be a part of the blessing as well. Dolphins have always had been thought to be very smart and I see that shown in the story and it makes it even more interesting to read and be part of the story itself. I love the story more and more with each chapter because of the interaction between the trio and the dolphins on Attunga.

It sounds like Ezra is up to something that has to do with Artie, I hope that he doesn’t try to get Artie to start doubting himself now after he’s come so far since arriving in San Francisco. He’s playing baseball and enjoying the game and the joking around with the team. Ezra needs to but out and leave well enough alone instead of trying to make him feel like he’s doing something wrong just because he’s living with Adam in California which is what his mom wanted and she even said so in her will. I’m glad that Sadie said something about the phone call she got from Ezra, I just hope Artie will keep his positive attitude throughout the weekend so his team can win the playoffs and then go on to regionals and then they can go win the state championship game.

It seems that the 3 boys are going to have a major change in their lives all because of one little dolphin and the studies that Calen has been doing along the lines of dolphins. The day that Sonic was introduced to the people who were attending the viewing of the newest dolphin baby, the trio was told to wait until everyone else had gone then Gelar took them to the dolphin enclosure where they were able to swim with Flute, Puck, Sonic and the rest of the pod. The trio was given the opportunity to become part of the people who look after the dolphins and living at the dolphinarium so that Calen could be the one who worked with Sonic and his pod and they jumped at the chance to do it. Since they were not finished with their schooling their Mentor was able to arrange the move for them after learning that Calen was chosen as their own link to the rangers who were charged with the care of the dolphins. To me if they don’t accept this generous offer they may never get another one like it ever again.

Fantastic story in the life of Joel during his first semester of college. I love the interaction between all of the characters of the story, especially between Joel, Peter and Martin to start. Then you add Sam, Phillip and Joel’s mom to round out the characters. This was a very laid back story about the young man who is starting college and the first day he’s there with his guide while eating lunch Peter and Martin come out the door hand in hand trying to get a rise out of Joel by acting like a couple of gay guys who are out for a stroll around the campus. Before long Peter and Joel become a couple and have a few adventures with their friends as well as swimming every day then at the end of the semester Peter and Joel go back to Joel's hometown of Tittybong and the 3rd day they're there after do the stocktake of the store that his mom runs she tells him that Peter is great for him.

I think it’s becoming easier for Joel as his classes go on because of the help he gets from Peter and Martin.

I think that if it hadn’t been for the combined power of Kieran and Ranevargar’s the defeat of Maynor wouldn’t have been possible. Thanks to the combination of their powers and the control of Ranevargar they are now heading to see the High King to let him and the full court decide the fate of Maynor since he took Ranevargar captive with no regard for his status as a fellow Realm Lord and threatening to destroy his realm just so he could become the High King. I’m hoping that Alargon will give Kieran the choice to return to the human world or to stay and be a Realm Lord in his own Realm possibly even in Maynor’s realm. I’m not sure if he would even want to do that.

Great chapter. I believe everything is going well so far and the volunteers will be a great help in clearing away the destruction and then the new fishing shacks can be put in place as well as the new jetty’s. Now that they have the new yacht they’ll have a place to live as well as a way to get supplies to the MV Researcher during this time. I hope everything goes as planned without having any issues arise that will cause further problems with the project.

I feel bad for Robbie because it seems like Nicola had set him up, after he and Stephanie get Nicola carried up to her room and he gets back down to the basement he tried to explain to her about his problems and winds up having sex with her. That was 2 too many siblings he had to take to their rooms, first was Amy who he had to change after she fell asleep and spilled her drink all over her soaking her gown, after he got her changed and into bed, he took one of the viagra that Nicola gave him and then Stephanie comes down to the basement while he was watching a video of Nathan and jacking off, she said something about having to help Nicola get inside because she couldn’t get her in by her self.

I loved all of the other comments on this chapter and I enjoyed your response to them as well. It almost seems like Ranevargar is preparing Kieran to go up against the High King at some point especially when they go to the Construct (dragon) where he might just learn how to control it as well as he has the other animals they have met on their journey. Fantastic story, I can’t wait to read everything that goes on in it.

Such a great beginning to the story, this chapter was so awesome.

Exciting story as the Discovery Project began to take shape. I’m really glad that Hunter came up with the idea after his son Jonah went missing and his ex-wife failed to inform him for more than a week. Jonah got ahold of him and he went and picked him up and then he, Jonah and Nathan began the building of the project in the first warehouse. It’s been a rocky road for the staff as they began taking in the homeless children in the area with some work on the part of the staff and the junior staff members they have seemed to work everything out as the situations arose. The project has a very good board of trustees that oversee the project finances and they get weekly reports on the project. I’m glad that Hunter went to see the Magistrate after Toby was assaulted by a member of the gang that he used to belong to when he was sentenced to 3 months in a juvenile detention facility for his part in the fire that was in the third warehouse near the other two that Hunter already owned, it turned out that she had gotten a bit of information about the project from Mr Gantry who is the lead for the board of trustees. The magistrate said that they were friends and she had been at his home for dinner when he let it slip, Hunter told her that the project is a NGO or Non Government Operated youth facility and the purpose of the project and she then amended the sentence for Toby and he would go back to the project after he was released from the hospital. She turns out to be a great supporter of the project and she’s like an aunt to Charles who is the son of the Gantries. Thank you for the great story, I think it would be a great idea for something of this nature to be done to help the homeless youth around the world.

Exciting time for Chipper winning a slot in the next stage of the competition. I’m sure he was on a good high over learning that he was moving forward. I hope they can do something about Mr Nalbo before the press gets ahold of the pictures or someone in the Voice organization, Nalbo is using them as blackmail to get Chipper to sign on with his company for management of his career. This Nalbo needs to be buried under tons and tons of red tape and lose his license for the nasty ways he forces his clients to sign with him, only Chipper was way ahead of him because he has a lawyer (aka friend) on speed dial, and he’s going to help Chipper by putting him on a conference call with an additional lawyer who’s in Los Angeles where Chipper is filming the Voice.

Fantastic chapter. A lot going on for Kipling and his family between the two stations and that the other couple that takes care of Pyramid station are in Perth after he was released from the hospital after he broke his leg. Now Kipling is going to be helping out with whatever needs to be done at the Abrolhos Islands after they sustained heavy damage from the cyclone that just passed through the area.

Kieran is definitely growing in his abilities every time he’s tested by his father and the others who are working with him he always comes out ahead. It brings him and his friends closer together as they adapt to every situation and overcome the issues that they were up against. I’m glad that he has his friends with him to help him with the attacks that keep happening.

I find it very sad that the entire crew waited until the captain was almost at deaths door before Deke went to get him and then they look at him like he’s the enemy. Yes Kohen broke the bond he had with the captain but it was only after he found out that he had been lied to especially by the captain. The bond has been reestablished so now it’s a waiting game to see if the captain survives or not, if he doesn’t it’ll be partly the fault of the crew as well.

This story is fantastic with Kieran learning more and more how to use his abilities with the opal that was given to him when he was at the Valley of the Eagles. I’m glad that he has Rhys with him again since he’s able to help ground Kieran so that if he passes out he can massage his temples and wake him up. I have to agree with everyone else that Geston is getting help from the elves which is allowing him to resist Kieran when he uses the Medusa look on him. I think that if Kieran were to intensify the power of the look with the opal he would be able to break through whatever influence the elves have on him. I hope the program goes well for the guys as they have been practicing like crazy to get ready for the dance they’re going to do. Thanks for the great story.

Fantastic chapter. I think it helps to have a police officer on your staff for a project like this. I’m glad that Ezekias was smart enough to call Hunter to inform him that their was a reporter and a photographer talking to and taking pictures of the underage homeless young people. Hunter told Ezekias that Julian would be notified and would be there shortly but to keep the van out of sight for the time being. I’m glad that Julian was able to work quickly enough that he prevented the reporter from getting information about the project which would be a bigger problem to deal with then because the site would be compromised so they wouldn’t have the secrecy they need in order to help these young people get back on their feet so they could have a better life than they have now.