Butcher56

I really loved the chapter, I'm kinda sad for Liam as baseball has been a dream of his for years and now because someone had to be stupid and beat Liam severely that he now has trouble with his pitching arm and he knows that he'll never be able to pitch a full game much less be able to get through the game without severe pain. I'm sure Will knows what Liam is saying is a fact and that he has to be able to decide if he continues to even pitch in a game for the school. I hope that they can find a way to make sure that Liam doesn't lose his love for baseball, it's going to be a very hard decision to make, Liam can only be the judge of his pain level. I love Benny he's a great kid, and he has great taste in music especially if he likes Wagon Wheel and Clint Black. I can't wait for Noah to start crawling and trying to get anywhere he can to do what ever he happens to think of.

Poor Anton he's having a rough time right now and then his brother Neale has a possible ruptured spleen. Anton has instructed the ambulance crew that Neale is to be taken to the medical center where he will undergo emergency surgery to repair or remove the spleen. I hope that everything will be alright and that all of this is happening when his grandfather has decided to make an announcement of some sort. I think this will delay it for a better time.

I'm glad that the 5 boys who were the cause of the injuries to Anton's brothers were sent to court and that instead of a Justice of the Peace they lucked out and got a Magistrate to oversee the hearing. After reading all of the supporting documents and listening to the senior officer about the abuse handed out to the Neale and Jedd, the Magistrate ruled that there was more than enough evidence to support the charges. The Magistrate ruled that all 5 boys would serve a term of 3 months in a juvenile detention center and there would be no early release for any of the 5 boys, also the families must pay all the medical expenses for each Jedd and Neale and also each family must pay each boy $1500.00. The mother's of the boys cried that this was wrong. The boys will be returning to school in a week and will be where Anton could be around to watch over them.

Wow talk about your twists of the story, dragon turns out to be Vlad the impaired or as he' also known as Vlad Dracula. I'm surprised that dragon has agreed to take the serum and at the end of the week he would be able to eat a great meal. I think they need more action inorder to get the people sitting around the television, that while Dracula is going to be seen as the strongest person around for what he's going to be doing. I hope that this plan works as well as they hope it will.

Anton has proven himself to be a no nonsense type of person, when he found out that his brothers who have been at the school for 5 days had been bullied he was going to make sure the bullying was going to stop. As they were eating Anton placed his hand in the middle of Jedd's back at which point Jedd flinched do to the excessive bruising on his back and ribs. I'm glad that I'm not on the receiving end of Anton's ire at the time, he took the boys to the school and demands that something be done about the abuse his brothers are getting. When the principal or Anton asked why they didn't tell a teacher and both boys said that they were told that the abuse would be worse if they said anything. As it turns out the abusers will be suspended for a period of 1 week and when they returned they would be supervised during the morning and lunch breaks so they wouldn't be able to do anything again.

I am happy that Anton thought more about the situation with Kirk and Leon, and he came to a conclusion that I think is going to work for the best for all concerned. Anton told Kirk and Leon that if they would accept a smaller salary then they would be able to keep them on for at least the next couple of months. They agreed and after the guests had departed Kirk and Leon found an envelope with a note and a cheque for the amount of $25,000.00 after reading the note and then looking at the cheque Anton told Simon they had to go get the supplies they would need for school. I hope everything goes smoothly as they return to school and also for the charters they're hoping to get for the weekends and holidays.

This was another great chapter, I'm sorry that Anton's mother and Simon couldn't get along so that her and Anton could've caught up on the last 9 years of their lives. I'm glad that Anton was able to get some order restored to the yacht especially since they had paying guests on board. I'm glad that Anton and his brothers have kind of bonded together in the short time they were aboard, it's to bad that his mother couldn't see that the little boy she left behind is now almost an adult and is being very responsible for not only himself but the others also.

Daniel seems to be almost fighting for a great relationship with Carlos even though it appears to be there already except Daniel doesn't see it or something. Daniel, I think has a lot of demons that he's battling right now, and with Silas away on his honeymoon Daniel still isn't moving forward with the relationship between him and Carlos. I know that they both want it, but for some reason Daniel isn't making the effort to make it work. I wonder if there's something in his past that Daniel's hiding from everyone. You can only tell that Carlos loves Daniel, and Daniel loves him back, he just won't move forward. I hope that they can find a way to make it work for them.

It seems like this charter is going a lot better than the previous one, at least this group is very respectful of the crew as the personal assistant to the actress is gay so having the gay couple as crew on the yacht is not a problem for them. I hope that they will have a great time once Anton's mother and half brothers are aboard. I don't know if the grandfather will be with them or not. I'm hoping that after 9 years the reunion with Anton's mother will be a good thing. Another great addition to the story so far, I'm really enjoying it, I have read 9 chapters in a little more than four hours. I'm on to the next chapter, let's see how long it takes me to read it.

I am so glad that Jasper was able to get the unruly customers off of the yacht, then instead of being allowed up to 11am to depart after another nasty comment they were given half an hour to get off. Anton is now meeting with the next charter customers in order to meet them and for them to get more information about the yacht and the charter. Looking forward to more interesting reading in this story.

I believe that Kirk's comment to the obnoxious customer was great. I don't believe that she has any rights to question Anton about his ownership of the yacht. I'm inclined to say that once the yacht nears the island and they weigh anchor that they ask for the customers to please leave the yacht and that they could make other arrangements for travel back to the starting point of the charter. I'm glad that Anton's mother has been found and that she was alive and well, having recently losing her husband in a trucking accident. Anton found out from his grandfather that she and her sons would be arriving in a week to go aboard the yacht in order for her to see and speak with Anton and to give him a chance to get to know his half brothers. I hope that it goes well for the visit. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I think it's great that Anton and Simon go ashore to get supplies for a 6 day run to Christmas Island and then wind up with a charter before they even get to start unloading the groceries on the counter. I think it's great for them to be able to get a charter just after taking control of the new yacht before they even have a chance to get to know it for themselves. This trip should cover the wages of the two crew members that were part of the deal with the yacht. Thanks for writing this great story, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I truly hope that will be the last time anyone hears from Anton's father. I'm glad that Anton's grandfather is alive and well, and that they have been able to talk with each other as well as meeting again in person after a long time apart. I hope that they can get back to what they had before and that Anton's grandfather stays in his life now. I also hope that Anton and Simon continue their friendship for many years to come, and possibly even move on to being more than just friends. On to chapter 6 to see what happens next.

I don't think Anton's father is done trying to get to him. I hope that with Jasper on board with Anton and Simon and them continually on the move it might be harder for Anton's father to find them. Great story so far I can't wait to read what happens next.

I think that Anton is going to be very busy with studying for school as well as the yacht master tests and training. I have no doubt that he'll get it all done and also the idea of charters around the local areas seems like a good way to help him get the training he needs. On to the next chapter

I like that Mr Adamson has left the boys on the boat and said he would be back in two days. After he left the boys went to check out more of the town, they found a park and a swimming area. This is shaping up to be a very interesting story. I think it's great that Anton has been able to get away from his dad and now feels more alive and happy than he has in years. Can't wait for more.

I hope this is a new beginning for Anton, and with the help of Simon and his grandfather Anton might actually be able to get some needed answers to the sudden disappearance of his mother and grandfather. Mr A has finished restoring the catamaran that Anton and his grandfather were doing before he disappeared, Anton also found out that his grandfather started a trust for him that Mr A is the controller for at the request of Anton's grandfather so that Anton's father couldn't get his hands on it, the catamaran is in Anton and his grandfather's name so it also was kept from Anton's father. Great story so far, if it's anything like Firestorm it's going to be a very interesting story. Thanks for writing these stories for us to enjoy.

That's so true, even if you have your own family a few more sure don't hurt anything. I know with my extended family a guy I consider an older brother and has been around since my boys were infants, he helps any way he can.

I'd have to agree with that statement gazza, I have a sneaky suspission that Mitch is going to give these cadets a run for the money. I think he's going to expand the search and capture exercise he's got his group doing. I hope that everything goes well with the lunch with the CO Lt Colonel that Staff Sgt Benning is supposed to be attending, I really think it is a great idea for Angela and Tom attend with him as further information could be give to the CO that way and that they might be able to get more resources for the protection of Angela and Tom after she explains why she's wanted so badly.

I loved the beginning of the story and hoe Mitch got hired for a training company and then thwarting the worst practical joke that could be played during a fire safety training session. By being as keen as Mitch is he prevented his boss and possibly others from being hurt because two idiots had to go get the keys for the van and soak the wood in the fire pit with about 10 liters of fuel and what's funny is because Mitch thought something like that was going to happen and when he informed his boss he was told to go turn the dashcam around so it would capture what would take place. Mitch checked the dashcam later and found a clear video of what these two guys were up to. I think that will be what makes him a valued member of the training company.

I think it's great that Mitch has such a great repor with each of the corporals assigned to him. During their little training exercise in search and capture Mitch got all three corporals on the boot with paintballs. After calling the end of the training and all three teams were returning to camp one team was going past Mitch's location and he hit the boot of the corporal leading the squad once halt was called Mitch jumped out and scared all of the squad. I can't wait to see what happens next for the group and I hope that they hold on to the two imposters they captured already. This is some great reading.

This is getting more and more interesting with every chapter. I hope that they can find more doctors and scientists to help with the serum as well as the new treatment if George can get back to the lab in Manhattan. I'm curious as to how they're going to get Repetate & Iustania to the VUN Headquarters in Manhattan. As well as the calls that have to be made to Congresswoman Chance, and Senator Cooke. I can see why Colin is so very protective of Gabby & Betty, and wanted to send them back to the US, even though Gabby stuck up for Colin and he freely admitted to the reason why he wanted them out of there. I really don't think that they'll go back, they're all aware of the dangers and risks they face even the FBI agents. Noone wants anything to happen to anyone in the family, it's going to be very interesting where the story goes next. Thanks again for writing this story.

I'm happy for Ian to finally get to be with someone again after suffering for so many years. I liked Ian's comment to Adam that Patrick helped bring him back to the world around him. I thought Adam was going to have a heart attack when Ian said that he had Paddy at the age of 34, then Ian went on to explain that he had Paddy as a foster child first then he adopted Patrick. I hope that the relationship between Ian and Adam really takes off and blossoms. This was another great chapter full of wonder.

So far this is a great start to the story. I hope that they can get over the Mitch and Devon being the same, and that Colin is almost a carbon copy of Tony. If they can get past the similarities they can get down to the business at hand and that's the DelKenzie translation device. I'm sure that this will be a great asset to both ventures for Mitch and the VUN, especially when they get to Cairo Egypt. I liked the thank you party for the people from VUN for all that they had done for the vampires of England. I'm glad that they set up the satellite copy of Buddy as Stan calls the computer in Manhattan in Charleston SC and at Thornwood in Great Britain.

Great chapter, I'm glad Mitch knew enough to use a hand signal to let the Warrant Officer and the three corporals that the two men in front of him were not the MP's that brought Angela and Tom back to Bindoon. I'm glad that the CO was on the ball enough to think that there might be trouble, so he sent extra ammo and another sniper rifle for Mitch and with the second duo of MP's he sent nine, nine millimeter pistols belts and holsters as well as extra ammo for each of the pistols. I think it's ridiculous that some of the cadet commanding officers want transportation for them and their cadets away from the training. I loved the comment made by Mike when the spokesman for the cadets that want out of there said that the 9mm pistols wouldn't be enough to keep intruders out of the compound, Mike informed the cadet co that the pistols weren't the only thing they have. Mike looked at Mitch when he said that meaning that Mitch has two sniper rifles to use in case of an intruder. I'm glad that Angela and Tom feel safe around Mitch and I believe he likes them being around as well.