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Everything posted by Butcher56
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I believe that LenNa is going to continue to be a problem until someone who is like her is able to take her down and make sure she doesn't get up again. I feel for Christian as he knows that everything that can be done is being done, it's just not fast enough to get ahead of the killer germs. If they can't get enough of the little warriors made soon they may not be able to take LenNa down for good without the loss of a lot of people.
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I would gladly pay for the vaccination for stupidity and I would then give it to a lot of people who need a good dose of reality. The people who I believe are acting stupid aren't really stupid they're actually very smart, I believe if they would use some common sense things would be different. I like Queen Terry as she's a very smart young lady who thinks things through before acting upon them. She's now going to accept the little warriors herself.
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If only there was such a vaccine for ignorance, if that were the case maybe we wouldn't have so many people who are saying things that we know can and have been proven wrong. There are still so many people out there that refuse to vaccinate their children because their religion says it's wrong to do it.
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I'm glad that Seth was finally able to get a memory of his mother before the fire that took her life. It was Lukas that re-energized Seth's brain so he could remember his mother. He was warned that other memories will come up and some of them are not good memories. I think the group of friends that have the enhanced blood need to get out in the public and start giving the special blood to the people as quickly as possible so that Len Na doesn't start killing the people.
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Who knows where men get their endowments from, some are definitely more blessed than others that's for sure. Also it doesn't matter what race the man is either because I've seen some big guys who have quite the endowment to show for themselves.
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I can understand why Demetrius is so adamant about who knows of the mirrors existence, it's for the safety of the families. The more people find out about the existence of the mirror things could easily go from bad to worse. If Yannick likes the wine from Royal Valley King Mordor will love it just as much if not more.
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Erik and Seth will need at least a week or so in order to get over the fact that Erik had been gone for a month. I'm glad that Yannick came along with the group that was going to Royal Valley, although I don't know if he'll be able to stay out of trying to get Erik to be with him.
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I have a feeling that Ian's strawberry heartthrob is just what the Dr ordered. I just hope they'll finally get a chance to meet and have either coffee or a meal together. I just love the different perspectives you put in your stories.
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I'm very happy that the three countries or kingdoms are going to form an alliance in order to protect everyone in the three kingdoms. I really believe that without the Creid help an awful lot of people will get sick and die.
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I think that King Mordor will be a big help with this threat as he doesn't want his kingdom to fall in the face of the microscopic bugs. I'm grateful that Erik was so well received by the Creid King, even though he had to issue a challenge in order to show that he wasn't afraid to fight one of their warriors. Erik now must be able to tell the king everything he knows about what's going on and who may be behind this. The problem I see is how do you prove what you say is fact when Erik can't call Demetrius as he's not Erik's godfather anymore so even if Erik called him he wouldn't be able to show himself.
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I like the idea of a school or schools for the deaf and blind children of not only Royal Valley and Blethos but for A'Dore as well. Erik was right in that true enough Toby's getting what he needs right now but as he gets older he will need to know that he isn't the only deaf child in Royal Valley. I'm sure that the schools are going to be a welcome addition to the educational system.
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I think Blethos and A'Dore still operate as individual countries even though if they wanted to merge into a single country they could. The only draw back is that they would have to figure out who would rule or would they still have two kings.
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Wasn't the marriage between Seth and Erik supposed to bring an alliance to Blethos and A'Dore? I hope whatever happens now I believe that Erik and Seth need to get the group found and broken up and it's members sent to the way outreaches of the kingdom but make sure that they're not sent anywhere together. Actually I just thought since this group made an attempt to kill the Royal family doesn't that mean death sentences for everyone in the group.
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I've heard the old wives tale about pulling one grey hair and getting two in its place. Although I don't believe in the tales like that. I hope that Erik and Seth figure out who's behind the attempt on the Royal family before anything else happens.
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I think it's great that Mitchell was asked by the CO about his choice for a new leader of the cadets at his former grammar school after the previous one decided that it was better to run his mouth instead of concentrating on the conference call about the upcoming cadet training. I like the way he answered the question of what each medal was for and how he got them, instead of lie he explained that some medals he couldn't talk about because how he got them was classified as top secret so he couldn't say how he got them. I like the fact that when the headmaster saw him there he turned the microphone over to the new commanding officer of the cadet Corps, where he got the cadets in a formation where there was 2 rows one on either side of the aisle. When his name was said he snapped to attention and along the way he stops and does a mini inspection of the cadets. This was definitely another great chapter.
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I didn't think Demetrius or the other two could stay away, I understand why the note was given to Toby and not to Erik himself. The fairy God parents aren't allowed contact with Erik, Seth or Ella anymore because of the recent events that required immediate transport between Blethos and A'Dore caused a problem which by rules noone had any idea they even existed. Apparently these laws are set by God himself and they are unbroken by anyone including the fairy God parents or human beings as well. I only hope that Seth and Erik are able to find out who the man was and hopefully who wants everyone dead and why.
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Congratulations to the newlyweds and best wishes for a long and happy life together.
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Erik and Seth have been doing a great job of not relying on magic for everything that comes up. This time it was crucial that they get from Blethos to A'Dore in a hurry, because it would have taken about 3 weeks by carriage by which time Christian would have been dead and there was no way that Erik would let that happen. Christian has never met Toby and Dennis, he had to stay in A'Dore when Ella and the children went to meet the newest members of the family. I'm with Erik when he and Christian both came to the conclusion that the scratch that Christian received was actually an attempt on the lives of the Royal family. They just have to figure out who wanted them dead and then figure out why.
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I wasn't really trying to quote this comment, I tried to cancel it but my tablet seemed to have a mind of its own right then.
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I had a feeling that that man was going to be trouble, I believe that Seth and Erik did the right thing by telling the man to leave. Arthur Thorne is dead any debts he had were negated upon his death. Seth shouldn't be responsible for any debts of Arthur Thorne, the statement made that he would be back to collect what he's owed was a mistake as they'll be on the watch for him. If Erik sees the man again around the Manor or the winery he could end up dead.
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This man could mean lots of trouble for not only Seth and Erik, but the town itself. I think Erik did the right thing by going to the mayor about the man. I can only hope that he doesn't cause any problems for anyone in the town.
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Seth and Erik are becoming the Royal Valley therapists, everyone comes to them for help with their love for another person. I'm inclined to believe that the guys will do everything possible to help anyone they can. I think Seth and Erik are doing a wonderful job raising the two boys,even with Toby being deaf he still wants to know as much as he can, now Dennis is starting to talk even though he's only 7 months old. I'm glad that they had mothers willing to help them with the boys when they first got them after Sarah passed away after Dennis was born.
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You're so right once they get to about nine years old and you remind them that you used to change their diapers wet or poop, they'll tell you not to say that again. I got smart as I would wait until they had friends over and they would all be acting up and I'd tell their friends about some things that my cousins and my nephew would do while I was trying to change their diapers. I'm glad that both Toby and Dennis are doing so well as they continue to learn and grow. I wonder how long it will be before the boys are at an age to go to wherever Dara & Demetrius and others like them live. I'm wondering when Christian, Ella and the children make the trip to meet their nephews.
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I think it's great that Seth and Erik decided to go ahead and take both boys, even with one of them being deaf. To Seth and Erik Toby being deaf is just another hurdle on the road of life. They have so much support for the boys especially with the God parents Dora and Demetrius, they've already done so much already. I'm sure that once the news reaches the people there's going to be a lot more things for the boys.
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I think it's great that Seth and Erik will now have a family of their own, only because the boys mother passed away due to complications with the birth of Dennis, Toby has a baby brother to look out for. Even though Toby's deaf doesn't mean that he's damaged in any way. Both of these boys are going to have a great life ahead of them because there are two great guys who are going to be dad's from now on. I'm sure the boys will be accepted by both families as well.
