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I think this has been a truly eventful chapter, I'm glad that that the foundation is moving forward now. I think the decision by Will's dad to finally touch his trust fund was a hard one to make but he has done it for a good reason. I know Will has a hard time accepting the money, but when his dad said that he put some in Will's trust and some in the trust for the foundation. I think the name they came up with for the foundation was a great decision on everyone's part and the fact that everyone agreed to it without any discussion speaks volumes for the type of man Liam's dad was. I hope that Stephen does real well going back to school, and I believe that the restraining order is long overdue against his mother. I hope that Odie will be alright and his injuries from the beating aren't that severe. I can't wait to read more. Love the story and the direction that it's taking with all of the characters taking their places within the story.

Very interesting I have to say, this turned out to be a great chapter with the deceit that Gaius told Colin and Devon. Colin felt nothing at all from Christian (Gaius) and after the first meeting he told Devon that he couldn't get any kind of read from Gaius at all, Devon finally agreed to find out more about the one they call Christian. Once Colin and Devon got back to where Gaius was they gave him them the serum they started asking questions about Christian, like who he was really and what he wanted. They got a lot of answers from Iilya like Gaius wanted the serum so they could get involved with the human world as in politics. They also found out that Gaius had a son approximately 40 years ago, and they didn't know that was even possible. They came away with more questions than answers. I can't wait to read more about what they find out when Gaius's son visits and George can get some blood from him to be able to see what's going on.

I guess all of Benning's training paid off, the first training mission and there's report of a fire and he stepped right up and took control of the situation. Benning did just what his training taught him to do and it was done swiftly and efficiently. Now before the report of the fire Benning was told by the CO that they wanted to send him back to school in order to complete his education in Civil Engineering at the ADFA at the end of the 4 years he would be an officer. Corporal Benning asked for time to think about the offer, after the fire was completely out he returned to the command base with the Sargent right behind him. They find out that the CO is at another building they start to enter and Benning sees all of these people and starts to back out only to be blocked by the Sargent who tells him that he deserved all of the praise he was being shown. I can't wait to read whether Benning accepts the offer to finish his degree.

It appears that Devon, Colin and Gabby are going to have a lot more to tell Betty about being vampires. I have an idea of how that conversation goes down, especially since Betty saw Devon get bit and Colin administer the serum to prevent the full transition from human to vampire. Betty's freaking out about Devon being bit and finding out that the two other people she has been living with are vampires only they do things that they shouldn't be able to. Such as as they don't rely on blood to satisfy their hunger, they eat full meals and they can go out in the daytime without burning up. This is all because of the serum developed by Dr George Holm, with Colin's financial backing. I'm sure that when George gets to the house he'll be able to calm Betty down by telling her about the serum.

This is great we get to see a different side to Williams Love, Ian and Patrick have such a great bond together. Even with everything Patrick has been through I believe Will, Liam and Ollie had the right idea for Patrick to stop worrying about the past and look toward what's right in front of him and share Ian's gift of a first Christmas for them. Ian actually stopped and bought the ornaments for the tree although when he brought the decorations out of the bags Patrick had a bad experience with Christmas at some point in his past. He'll figure out how nice it can be with them celebrating their first Christmas together. Then after they have their own celebration at home they are invited to Will's dad's houseto spend the day with them. Plus Ian's mom wants them to come to New England to spend the holiday with her.

Colin and Devon's lives are starting to get to the place they're not at later in the story. The love they're starting to show for each other is real love. There's no way that love can be faked. I'll bet their love lasts for centuries, especially since Devon becomes a vampire out of the love between him and Colin. Gabby seems to be adjusting very well.

Great chapter, I think it was really sneaky of the SAS to get the drop on the cadets from grammar school. It seems to have done what the commanding officers of the army expected would happen. I think Mitchell is going to be going far as a valued member of the SAS. His civilian training is what's helped him so far, and I believe it's going to take him further, with his language skills he's going to go far.

I may have made a few comments later in the story but I came back to start the story again. I'll say I'm really impressed as to the interaction between the characters is quite well written and they seem to have a great bond starting. I'll post again later on after I read more.

This was another great chapter, I'm so happy for Silas after what he and his brothers have been through, to not only find a good and compassionate master but to find someone who he loves and loves him back. Silas starts having second thoughts and keeps pulling at his tie even though he'd been told numerous times that it was fine and to quit playing with it. It takes the commanding voice of master Carlos to calm him down, as Carlos tells him about what he did in the army and what he'd been through and how he was brought out of the self-induced depression. That's all it took to calm Silas down the music started and Carlos told him that's your cue. Silas surprised Carlos to walk him down the aisle. Carlos agreed to walk him down the aisle so they started down the aisle with Toby and Daniel bringing up the rear. I want to say that I believe that this is a turning point in the lives of the brothers.

Wow and here I thought they would get more resistance from Dracula. I'm beginning to think that this Gaius is the one they have to worry about. I think that Christian will take the serum if only to help this group of people who are trying to unite the vampires of the world in order for them to work together. I'll say that this was another great chapter full of suspense. I'll have to wait until the next chapter becomes available to see if Christian takes the serum and what happens when they all meet up with this Gaius.

There was so much emotion in the whole story but the emotions conveyed by Tony and Mitch were pure, even though they're on board the Queen Mary Cruise Ship. I can understand why Tony felt as he did, cancer no matter what formof it you have it's a hard thing to go through. I also know the feeling of losing your parents to a disease, my dad died at the age of 50 from cancer my mom died at 54 from a blood clot that broke off from her lungs and ended up in the heart. I'm glad that Tony has not only Mitch in his corner but also all of his family and most of Mitch's he also has Sasha and David and Alik. I hope that Tony comes through this with flying colors, and that the lumps aren't cancer. Thank you for your chapter about Daniel, it was very thoughtful and full of love for the man who was your true soul mate. I appreciate your writing these stories as I'm sure that there are several instances where you wrote in real life events.

You're funny in some of the posts that you like and quote them. So Adam has finally met Ian somewhat, at an outdoor market of all places. Adam finally met Coach Campbell while checking out the Chattering kid who seemed to be royally pissed because the Coach wouldn't put him in. It came to the coaches attention that the Chattering kid has been bullying another student and that is frowned apon in this school. Adam introduced himself to Coach Campbell and found out that the Coach already knew Payne from when her mother was hospitalized. I know one thing I'm going to bet that the Chattering kid gets what's coming up very sorry. Looking forward to more of these chapters .

Well it seems like they found what they were looking for, the real Dracula and Devon has told him that he would be happy to come and talk with him or just sit and listen as Dracula tells him everything he has done since he was turned as a way to protect his people. Christian as he is now called will more than likely accept the offer for the serum after he tells Devon everything about what he's done. Christian doesn't like the idea that a criminal should be able to get the serum. I think this is going to be one heck of a trip for this rag tag family as they call themselves. Like I said before it only gets better when everyone is on the same page.

Another great chapter, I'm glad Derrick is finally pulling his head out of his ass and looking at what's being offered as a benefit to his shelter and others including the foster homes. If Will's plan goes through (which I have no dought) there's going to be programs offered for all those who want to make something of themselves. I think it's great that Will wants to help Stephen even if he did nothing to prevent the attack on Liam, he was there under fear. The fact that Will is seriously trying to help get him back into school is great, Stephen asked Will why he was helping him, and he was told that because he got such a crappie deal out of the whole incident. Will stated that if Stephen was willing to put the effort out there to do his best in school that if the pta agreed to allow him back into school he would then be able to continue with his dream of a veterinary clinic. I'm glad that Stephen and Jason got to spend the afternoon and night with the family of Will and Liam.

It's not a wonder that Eva felt threatened by Alin because his eyes told her he was a vampire. Eva didn't get the same sensation from anyone else, then she had another little scarewhen she was told that everyone else in the group that was there except 4 of them were completely human all of the others are vampires only they don't drink blood. They're on the serum and it allows them to eat food instead of drinking blood it also allows them to go out in the sun as well. When Alin came back after he went to show Christian what the serum does for him, Christian said he wanted to meet Colin and George alone and Alin was told that wasn't going to happen Alin said that's what he told Christian. The group went and the question was asked of Christian whether or not he was Dracula and his answer was an unwavering yes he was Dracula. Colin said it was bull when Christian said he was Dracula. This is getting better and better all the time, not that the story so far has been bad it's just it seems to take on another level of attraction as the story progresses. I'm glad that you wrote these stories, they're great. I'm waiting for the next chapter to see what comes about from the meeting with Christian.

This was an interesting start to what I hope is an equally great story, I have enjoyed all of your story's so far. I think a chance meeting in church is going to turn intoone heck of a romance for these two misfits. You have one from New York and one from the mountains of North Carolina. I'm going to continue to read it and I might even post a few comments from time to time.

The family that went to Romania go out to check the night life and to begin the search for Dracula and get into a small conflict with a vampire who is hell bent on killing the vampire who made him into one as well. They find out that this hunter said he was going to kill every vampire in the area in order to find the one who turned him and then kill him. I hope that Alin can be trusted to be discrete about everything he will see and hear. I'm beginning to think that this trip is going to be more productive than anyone imagined, I don't know for sure with so little information about it all as of yet, it's just a feeling that I'm getting by what I've read. Keep up the good work, I'm really enjoying all of your writing.

I believe Patrick is very wise beyond his years, he can come up with the most concise question for you with out a hint of sarcasm or anything else. He is really starting to get the point that he's not going anywhere unless it's for family or he stays at Will's. Patrick's becoming a very great human being with all of the studying than that he used to do when he was alone.

Like the idea that Payne met Adam and then at the end of the day she tells him he's buying her dinner. I'm glad that Payne decided to go see a movie, which is where Ian and Adam will meet each other. I think it's neat that both Adam and Ian had a flip flop stomach. Adam seems like he'll fit right in with the family.

I like the side story of Ian and a little bit of Patrick, it's good to have a different perspective once in awhile. The stomach flips that Ian was having are possibly someone sent by James with Ian's heart in his hand. Who knows he might meet Mr right at the Cinaplex, that would definitely add drama to the side story. Love William's love so far it's so easy to see why everyone fits together in the story.

Another great chapter, as usual Colin has told Stan that being part of the family entitles him to voice his opinion. I hope that Colin gets the recipe for the dish that was prepared for them by Eva called hamburger and eggplant, since he's decided that he'll be eating it at least once a week. Eva's late husband used to eat it at least once a week. The vampire hunting will begin shortly from what I've read so far I know that the main one they're looking for is Vlad Dracula. I have a feeling that this is going to be a very interesting visit to Romania and their search for the elusive Dracula.

I just wanted to say that I have just read the story in less than 24 hours and I haven't commented until now. I want you to know that this was a great story of abuse as minors, then to be sold and placed in total servitude. I liked that Toby was able to get info on the location of the boys, he goes in with his team and then to have it cleaned up like no one was even there. I'm glad I wasn't the one who was holding Silas and Daniel because Toby left no stone unturned until he got the person he wanted. I'm glad that things are starting to look up for the 3 brothers.

That Matt is quite a character, he hears what your saying and watches you as you speak as well as listening to the frequency of your voice for any abnormalities in your speech. When he was told that they were all vampires and that Amasis was over 2 thousand years old he took it as truth saying that it was to outlandish to be false plus he didn't take Devon to be a liar. Now he's told they want to go to Romania in search of Dracula and he's like ok. I like the feeling Devon's getting about this trip and that he doesn't really know what to think about what they might find. Colin reassured him saying that they'll be alright. I can hardly wait to see what happens in Romania when they go. Also is there going to be trouble with the government when they start their search for Dracula.

This is a great chapter it appears that Mitchell'shard work is paying off for him as he's just out of basic training and already he's gotten a promotion. The officer that is now his commanding officer told him that he was getting the promotion because he was farther ahead than most of the men he'll be serving with. That goes to show that hard work will get you ahead of most others who aren't working as hard as they could be. If he keeps impressing the brass he's going to really get ahead, by doing everything they tell him to do then you never know what can happen. Great story so far I can't wait to read more.

It's great to see a young man who has the vision of doing something right for his future. I think that it takes exceptional core values instilled in him by his parents. He's been offered a very good position in a highly regarded units of the Australian army. And it's back in his home area which is good for himself and his family. I can't wait to read more about his new station and everything else in his life.