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I think it's ridiculous that the lawyer got this guy off with no charges. I'm praying that nothing goes wrong in the week long training for the army cadets. I think it would be great if our high school JROTC units could do some training like the guys are doing with the army cadets. I'm glad that Angela and Tom are back where Mitch and his team can keep an eye on them and also patrol the perimeter of the training grounds and with the help of the MP'S I think it'll be a productive week. Thanks for writing another great chapter full of twists. Great story

I have a strong feeling that by the time this week is over these cadet unit officers will have a better understanding of what is expected when they get to a training site. I agree that they need to work hard to get a better understanding of what's expected of them during the week. Like they've been told this isn't a holiday week. Mike, Mitch and the three corporals will not slack up on the cadets at all. This is going to be a very interesting week, in which the cadets will leave with the understanding that they can be better at navigation whether it's day or night.

Another great chapter. I really like the way that everyone gets along with everyone else. Benny is so adorable and I think it's great that he likes Clint Black and the song Wagon Wheel, only when Benny sings it wagon becomes dragon. I hope that all this bull crap with Will's mom ends soon, to me it seems like it's dragging along right now. The interview with the FBI and Assistant Federal Prosecutor lasted 3 hours and they try saying that there was an awful lot of money going in and out of his and his dad's bank accounts. They got shut down on that after Cal the family attorney who produced documents pertaining to the family trust that was established. Then they start saying that it was possible that his dad benefited from what his mother did. I'm glad Will had someone there for him. It seems like the sleep over was successful, everyone had a great time singing songs, making smores, and just talking.

I sure hope that something is going to be done very soon about that ex boyfriend of Angela's. It seems like no matter where Angela & Tom are they're found although the training facility worked for about 2 weeks. I'm glad that Mitch's CO is supportive about Angela & Tom's situation and said that he would set it up for them to stay in the barracks where there's more military personnel around and they could be protected more. I hope the cadet training week goes well. I can't wait for more chapters of Firestorm, great story.

Willie is a father figure to Colin and he wants to protect him as much as possible. I'm glad that Colin and Devon have the right knowledge of what Willie is to Colin. Devon is doing all he can to make it more comfortable with the situation by bringing in a few things of Willie's things so as not to stress him out much more than he already is. Gabby even likes Willie, she calls him grandpa and he wasn't to sure about it.

It appears that the coop of the VUN & FBI is going well. All of the people vampire or human are really starting to merge into one cohesive group, the patrols are going better and everyone's more aware of their surroundings after Marc was attacked. I have a feeling that this group is going to expand before long especially when they get to Charleston. I'm glad that Colin and Devon have become closer after the wedding.

I think Wesley's right about Anna she seems like someone owes her the world and she hasn't found it yet. I don't like her at all. I believe Patrick and Ian are a great father and son family, I liked how Ian's parents accepted Patrick right away. I like how when Ian and his parents went to see Ian's grandparents Patrick stayed at the house and when he got the text that they would be home in about 40 minutes, Patrick went in and started making brunch for everyone. He used some of the fruit in the waffles as well as toppings for them, he also made a fruit platter. Everyone enjoyed the meal and the company of the others in the house. Great story so far I can't wait to read more about Ian and Patrick as well as William's love.

I have to agree this has been another great chapter. I think Mitch's right in saying that he's been making things a bit easy on the corporals. I hope that there's nothing wrong at the camp since Tom is using the radio to contact Mitch. I'm glad that Angela now has a legitimate reason for being on the base as she is now a civilian contractor being a caterer per the CO so no one can say anything at all.

Great chapter, Colin was right in the fact that Brett had always been & always be a failure. He was a failure before he was turned and then he was a failure as a vampire. I'm glad Brett died the same way he lived, very painful.

I will say that this was another great chapter. I feel sorry for Daniel as the month long honeymoon is very hard on him as they've never been apart for this long before. It's only been a week and Carlos can see the toll it's taking on Daniel, so Carlos got Tara to bring Toby and come over to try to cheer Daniel up. Talking by Skype isn't the same as being nearby.

I'll say this story gets better with each chapter. It looks like Mitch is in for a tough time for awhile as he tries to protect Angela and Tom from her ex boyfriend. I'm sure that once the cadets arrive things will be busier than they are right now. I hope everything works out for Angela and Tom and that Mitch has a great experience for the rest of his military service. I can't wait for chapter 19 to see what happens next.

I like the idea of vampires from different walks of life such as a Jewish vampire and a few other religions as well. Gabby is a very beautiful young lady, only she's over a hundred years old and just now starting to learn more about the world outside of the Manor and surrounding properties. I say she's a beautiful young lady because of the description of her in the last chapter. I believe Colin will give in very soon about letting Devon in so they can show how much they love each other. I don't think I would trust that realtor as far as I could throw him, which isn't very far. Gabby seems to enjoy the new way that some women dress and make up is a very new discovery for her. I'm going to enjoy getting to know Gabby more as the story progresses, Devon and Colin are becoming increasingly more than friends in a working relationship.

I'm glad that the dining room staff knew that Tony and Mitch were VIP's and that they had paid for the privilege of where and when they dined. After the initial encounter with the enraged man and his wife they were moved elsewhere and another couple took their place and everyone settled in and introductions were made around the table and they had a great time talking to the other couples. I'm sure that the rest of the cruise will be a restful trip. I'm enjoying the story very much, Thank you for writing this story as well as the others.

I certainly hope that there are several other trips and cruises for this dynamic pair. I agree that we can really feel the emotions that are written in the chapter. I hope that whatever the doctor finds when they get back from the cruise that it turns out to be nothing at all.

I'm glad that the civil suit is done and over with, Mitch and Sasha got just what justice allows for the courts to give each victim. Belle wasn't happy with the amount of money he has to pay out to clear up the civil suit, $1,000,000.00 each for the hospital and lost wages and $5,000,000.00 each for pain and suffering. In order to pay these amounts Belle must sell one of his very expensive home and a dealership as well by order of the court. I'm glad that David and Sasha are going to move forward with getting married and becoming a very loving family with Alik as well as themselves. Tony will pay for the honeymoon cruise, but Sasha and David must pay for the wedding aboard the cruise ship. I'm looking forward to reading more about this growing family as they move forward from here.

I think Tony's gift of Bubba Jr was just what Mitch asked for in the hospital. I'm glad that Alan is such an understanding boss to work with for Mitch. I can understand where Mitch was coming from when he told Alan that he felt bad about taking so much time off after the wreck, Alan told Mitch that not to worry about it because the benefit of the medical leave is there to be used at a time like this. I'm glad that Mitch was able to return to work, and I'm sure Sasha will be returning soon himself. I hope that Mr Belle loses everything since he was in the wrong to begin with by not only driving on a suspended drivers license but driving drunk as well, which turned into a felony when his wife died in the wreck. As a result of Belle's wife dying in the wreck he got 17 years in a federal prison. I'm sure Mitch and Sasha will make out very well as a result of the civil suit against Mr Belle.

It looks like Romania was a very good choice to make new friends. I like how Devon told Colin that he liked being a vampire, he had to stop Colin from objecting to what he was saying until Devon was finished with what he was trying to say. Devon and Colin told each other about the fears they each have and also said that they would like to find somewhere to set up a permanent base of operations where they won't have to hide who or what they are. For now I like that they are set up in an old cold war Soviet base. They got permission from the mayor of the town where the base is located as long as they used a security company that was local and it just so happens that the person who runs it is related to the mayor.

I like what Alan said when he and Frank came in to the hospital room, that this is where these two have been hanging out while he's working so hard to make sure the hotel doesn't go to waste without Mitch there to help keep it sailing along. Alan also said the restaurant is going crazy without the best waiter in the business. I know the comment was his way of kidding around and at the same time stating how much they were missed. It just goes to show you that as long as you do your job and do it well you ingrain yourself on the boss so when your not there you're missed. It would be great for Tony or Mitch either one to get ownership of one or two of Mr Belle's dealerships.

I'm glad that David was there when Mr Belle's attorney Mr Kincade came in thinking that he was proposing a great settlement agreement with Mitch and Sasha, little did he know that David wasn't going to be happy with any settlement agreement unless Mr Belle paid out a lot of money. I'm happy for David and Sasha on becoming engaged to each other I'm sure they'll make a great couple and family with Alik as well.

I'm sorry Bubba didn't survive the wreck, I'm glad Mitch and Sasha did make it. I believe that Tony was probably at Mitch's side almost all of the time, besides Mitch's mom, dad and grandmother were there as well. I hope that everything will work itself out for the best of Mitch and Sasha since they were the occupants of Bubba. I hope that Sasha is OK as well.

I think it was great the way Tony was being possessive of Mitch when Mitch introduced Tony to his ex Ted. I like how Tony growled at Ted. I'm glad that everything is finally looking up for David and Sasha with regard to the Mckenzie family. I have a strong feeling that this is only the beginning for Sasha and David as they work out where their lives will go and don't forget about Alik because any decisions will have to include him as well. Thank you for writing this story, I'm sure it's proably very tough for you as you have said that it was based on true events.

I think this is going to be a Thanksgiving to remember after Mitch took Tony home to meet the family. Now with Tony and Mitch married and Mitch's dad being more accepting, he said that he wanted to get to know Sasha and Alik, after aunt Hilda told everyone that she is German and her father was a nazi the Heil Hitler kind only because he had a family at home he needed to support so he joined the German army. Aunt Hilda was the first of the aunts and uncles to go up and introduce herself to Sasha saying it wouldn't matter if he was a red. I liked that Richard decked his brother for charging Mitch blaming him for David bringing a man home to meet the family. Alik is going to fit in with the Mckenzie clan very well, everyone is falling in love with him.

Mitch sure had the right idea on the issue with Angela and Tom not being over. He had just gotten done talking with Amos about the very problem he's seeing now. After Mitch verified that the caretaker was in his home, Mitchell told him to stay inside and turn on the outside lights. Once Mitch got off the phone with the caretaker he called Lt Co Harding and advised him of the newest situation and the CO asked if they had any weapons at their disposal, and I will have to wait for the answer in the next chapter. This has been a great story so far, I keep waiting for the next chapter to see what happens next.

Another great chapter in saga of Williams Love. I hope that Will's mom gets the book thrown at her and instead of putting her in prison is there any way to put her under the prison that way she won't have contact with the outside world. I love how Liam acts just like a child at times, especially when Benny and Haley, Liam acts so much like Benny. I'm glad that Will's uncle Matt and his husband Cam came to visit along with Cam's niece and nephew Scott and Kristy. Luke and Cam are the only parents the two kids have since their real parents are deceased. I hope that they can get a lot of their questions answered by the FBI tomorrow during the interview the next day.

I'm glad that things haven't stagnated between Mitch and Tony, I believe that the love they have for each other is a great thing. I like how when they went to the club and Tony went to the restroom leaving Mitch at the bar and some guy comes up and offers to buy him a drink and Mitch told him no thanks and that his husband would be right back. I think that threw this young guy for a moment but he recovered quickly and went to find someone else.