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Emi GS

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  1. Lazy's Flirt Story Lazy never been late to school Cold hit him hard, with a stool Active took him to the campus nurse Careless has to bind him, of course Anger, the prin, called his mother in a hush Danger strode, out of office, mush and rush Worry was already there; with his son Empathy, along with her brother, dodging and shun Sympothy opened the door for her owner Wonder, sat at their legs, is a retriever Surprise phoned home to enquire and elate
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    I Rest My Case

  3. Begin Begin A new era An achievement attained Both the happiness and tears flood Fulfilled Begin A new journey A rindle accomplished Both the problems and tensions gone Relieved Begin A new pursuit A legacy appeased Both the composure and peace set Contained Begin A new aspect With promises and love Happy retirement and birthday Pappa
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    NaPoWriMo - 2017

    Like you all know, a poem everyday of month April. May be out of personal experiences or just by inspiration.
  5. Congratulations guys...
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    Love

    I can, obviously, understand the pain. I had lost a pet too. Baalu. A cute and little one. He was hit by a tractor and I had lost him. Even though it was little time he had spent with me, I love him. Hugs...
  7. Really sorry to hear about Alpha. And I am glad and happy that rest are fine along with their Mamma. They are all look so cute and especially the red-headed. I am curious about the gender determination too...
  8. I don't know at first that is has been written for Jeff. The circumstances may have made him betray you, but from your words I can see that he became an alley to you, when there is no road to continue your journey. A trustworthy guy from darkness. At least the guy who cared about you, even it was so little. But the pain, the hurt can't be forgotten that easily. And you said you carry the imprints of that life, which made you to not forget it. I know my words are going to hurt you and remind you the pain, I am sorry for that. But what do you have right now is so important to you too. It's time to let them go, I hope you had done it way before in past. We all care about you. Thank You for taking the chance as Isabella said. Thank you for giving the chance to Mike. Thank you for believing and sharing everything with us. We love you. That's what matter. ~Emi.
  9. I don't know, I wanted to see the complete tag here. But it was a great idea, I might say. Because from tomorrow onwards, Adam will have new journey, new experiences, and some new 'others'. His motive might have been wrong, but I can see Adam caring for Codey. I was not talking about the physical here. I would say great untidy journey Adam has so far. Waiting for the new journey... ~Emi.
  10. I hope it's not like that for SkinnyD. I have seen people, younger ones got out of serious conditions of cancer. Fighting against it would be a hell, but his life worth living. All he need is support from us all. Prayers from us all. I was waiting for his reply and will gonna wait till end.
  11. I don't know if I write for the anthology, but I might try anytime before the deadline. Which means I haven't started it and don't have any plans either. If I write, I want to take 'Jagged Edges' my theme. And mostly I might right some poetry on the theme. And I don't really know I'd write another story unless I had completed the first one.
  12. Really a great turn of events. I liked the kissing part. Was Sam really did this to them? Was she betrayed both of their trust? What's gonna Adam do now? About Seth! About Sam! About his father! About Codey! Rushy, yet beautiful chapter. As usual waiting for more... ~Emi.
  13. A star fallen on earth With tears brought the joy With smile stolen hearts With emotions mesmerised many With love flattered all Many More Happy Returns Of the Day To The First Official Poet Happy Birthday Sas
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    Confession

    Two untold stories got unfolded here. They both were lovely. But I can feel for Ian. Past facets leave their marks. It's not easy to get rid of them. Another sweet memory of their life, knowing about their love stories. ~Emi.
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    Ignored

    First I thought Ian might be a conceited in their relationship. But after seeing our PiBoy's comment, I changed my opinion. May be love might makes you vulnerable. Lovelier. ~Emi.
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    Crisis

    The first word that came into my mind was 'puppy love'. So true, honest and innocent. Never affected by some aggression and silly fights. I loved how you narrated it. And gives heart warming smiles, but they might look silly though. Lovely. ~Emi.
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    You Are...

    You are right about songs alike about the Hindi version. It could be good song, but I am no singer. I could have accepted the changes but I am afraid that might change the meaning off of Hindi version. So sorry for that. I very much liked every prompt and every form I had tried here. But life caught me so busy that I got distracted. I wish I'll find my way back soon. And thank you for the review. ~Emi.
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    You Are...

    Thanks for the nice words Parker. ~Emi.
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    Chapter 28

    Actually it's a set of poems called Shayaries. Just like couplets. But no rule on lines and syllable. There may be Shayaries with different forms but these were not them. But I am glad you liked those. Thank you very much for the review. ~Emi.
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    Chapter 28

    They were just a rough translation. In Hindi, the meaning will snatch your heart and give a mesmerising feeling. I am glad you loved them. I loved them myself as well. Thank you for the review. ~Emi.
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    Chapter 28

    All credit goes to him. He was the who spoke the words. I just translated with my little poetry knowledge. I'll let him know that you all liked those. And thank you for the review. ~Emi.
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    My Youth For You

    Thank you so much. I am so happy and glad you loved it. It always make my day when you appreciate me like this. Thank for today too. ~Emi.
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    My Youth For You

    Gosh. Even now you are making blush with those compliments. I think I took the challenge seriously and my mood might triggered and emitted this poem. I was very happy so many felt the rush and intimidate with the feeling. Thank you for the review tim. ~Emi.
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    My Youth For You

    Yeah I turned quite a rushy type. I don't know what I was thinking right then but the challenge made me that exited. I am glad you loved it. Thank you so much for the review... ~Emi.
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    My Youth For You

    Sometimes it's best to be raw and passionate. I am glad you liked and enjoyed it. And thank you for the review. ~Emi.
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