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Emi GS

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  1. It was fantastic Gary. I have seen and felt through my minds eye, when I had read your poem. I am glad you stopped there today and observed the pure example of true Love. Or otherwise we haven't get the chance to enjoy this beautiful poem. I can read it many times until I was drifted off to sleep. I really is a great poem. Love it Gary. ~Emi.
  2. I totally agree with Lit, as these poems resembles as a set of emotional flow. And as Gary, me too not gonna say of one as my favorite, cause they all are very good in the way you had written and the way how they make a reader feel. As I am fond of seashores, the second poem caught my attention anyway. But all the poems are simply presented because of the dainty they hold. I loved each and every poem. A great story. ~Emi.
  3. Happy Birthday, George!
  4. Summer whopped as wild hot breeze blowing rapid. Got tied up with sun, an exhausted sparrow —dangled to a grass worn —hopelesslyA
  5. Emi GS

    Day 21: I Wept

    I wept Thinking of you, Of your flawless caring Of our vague mutual breakup Naive
  6. I surely gonna taking this 5O4 for my story, if its not a problem. And that to gonna take sometime, I was busy this week...
  7. That's so easy for you to say —Live with it. I know how torture to do so That's so easy for you to say —Let it go. I know the real pain to do so. That's so easy for you to say —Just move on. I know it’s harder to do so.
  8. I looked out and let a sigh I tried to control the randiness I'm in I did my best to maintain the primacy built for myself I breath in and I breath out hid both blush and heat under my pinky cheeks Paced down my hurrying heart even veiled rigid little me. Its really a torture being so close to someone and not be who I am
  9. Emi GS

    Day 17: Valediction

    After her mother, I was her pillar who taught her so many things about life. Its my responsibility to suggest with her new life after marriage. So this came along. She was glad that I had taken care of her as she was my own sister. Thank you for the review Gary... ~Emi.
  10. Yeah, they meant like a responsibility to me. After all, this marriage is the only thing that can give solace to my cousin. Her soul will be happy. Happy for her daughter. Thank for the cheers Gary. We do enjoyed a lot on that marriage... ~Emi.
  11. A long drive for A night full of enjoyment By means of family function We re-unite to sing and dance It’s not just us They all got played along too As the embarrassment for them And all the laughs accounted for us Not just the fun The dinner was yummy too For the moon and cold fill the night We all returned with sleepy heads
  12. Emi GS

    Sacred's Emi!

    Thanks Parker...
  13. Going through a farewell, is always hard on me. Good or bad, it never went well and turns my heart a commotioned sea. On the day of her marriage glee, I went to her and made my plea. Live the life and remove your shell; be a happy woman, is all I can tell. Obeying all as her control key; doing everything, she spread her spell. Fulfilling their every command key, she sets into that family very well.
  14. My exhausted wings, such gift hard work brings. Not just owes and rings, marriage is lot of things. As I sorted all with my skill; lot of happiness got set, until I dozed off as eyes full of sleep —fill. After all, I tired myself just ill.
  15. Emi GS

    Sacred's Emi!

    Thank You So much SD...
  16. Sailing: I totally agree with Gary here. Hidden treasure can only be retrieved by taking enormous efforts into hands. You are more than just a treasure and a great man. Some will definitely risk with your caution and make them yours. In the Garden: The line you had written- 'there is none like you in the world around'. It was fantastic and I liked it very much. It will give you absolute meaning as every other thing in the world has their special feature in them and every one is unique. Nice work Parker. Well done... ~Emi.
  17. Emi GS

    Day 14: I Smiled

    I glad that you liked the poem. And thank You(I thank a lot ) so much for the caring words, and for the review... Love, ~Emi.
  18. Emi GS

    Day 14: I Smiled

    I am enjoying all the attraction because of the marriage. How I can not smile, when for every 5 mins someone calling me for help. As well as, it is the great chance to forget last three days... Thank You for the great review Ben... Love, ~Emi
  19. Alluring glances Charming smiles Inviting lips Attractive chubby little body. How can I gawk at someone? After all the rejection I often get! How can I flattered like that? After all the pain I have been through! Do I care for my heart? Or the feelings united to it! Do I care for myself? Or the dignity I carry! How so I need this all? —Desperate Me—
  20. I wondered and laughed every time I see the word EMI, infact all the words that starts with the letters emi. Even some Telugu words spelt as emi, and I'll think about the name given by SacredLove(sorry I am not allowed to use his real name) to me. I don't know he just said it out of blue or he called me with that name after a deep thought. But he has given me such honor that no one can obviously thought about it... In African Mythology, according to Yoruba religion; they had a lore about three vital spirits. One of them is 'Force of Breath', who occasionally called as 'Emi'. And also there is another saying in the religion itself. Olodumare, the supreme and sacred one of their religion, give Emi(the breath of life) to Humankind... So, thank You so much to SacredLove for honoring me with such a name and I'll be glad to him for that. Here I had written a small poem as a gift, out of gratitude, for SacredLove... A new perception come to me and I'm not —The Me —anymore As they call me of affection Named by a mysterious guy I Am Emi. The force of the breath and the breath of life And beware guys, don't let me go out of your life. For me being the breath of life, it would be too dangerous for you guys. So Praise me. And for that real reason, I'll never leave you guys...
  21. Emi GS

    Day 14: I Smiled

    After all, its my cousin's daughter's marriage and I am the care taker of every work. As I was badly hurt last three days(according to 14th April), because of the marriage I was happy. Thank you Gary. Thank You for the kind words... Love, ~Emi.
  22. Emi GS

    Day 14: I Smiled

    Life will not be fair and will not be naive for so long my friend. We have to deal with both now and then. I am happy today(on that day) because of the circumstances. But life may not be like that forever. I am happy that, my small smile can make you sigh. Thank You so much for caring/worrying about me. Love, ~Emi.
  23. I smiled After long time All the anguish —blanked out Pitying self —finally gone I smiled
  24. Emi GS

    1.20.16

    A smile he will definitely get. Nice poem Foster. Why don't you post/add it in Live-Poets Society forum!!!???...
  25. Wow!!! Such a great compliment from a great guy. I'll get a big smile, every time I read this. Thank You for that Ben... Love, ~Emi.
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