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  1. Emi GS
    As GA's journey started with Comsie's stories, my journey here started by following them. So I am as thankful to him as everybody else here for introducing those wonderful stories and leading me to this wonderful community. Celebrating this milestone with you guys been a great pleasure. HAPPY 15TH ANNIVERSARY GUYS
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    A Lonely Sky

    Emi GS posted new chapter in My Immature Poetry

    The vast emptiness Spreads on the rainy night sky Behind tall teak tree The First version of the poem with the help of the suggestions given by @Mikiesboy and @AC Benus The vast emptiness spreads behind the tall teak tree on this rainy night
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    Happy Belated Birthday . . .
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    Happy Birthday Cia...
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    A love for smiles A love for walks A love for needy greedy times A love for all the Happy life. It's all I have It's just I left with LOVE Pure and Simple Love Love you Caz Happy Birthday
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    Chapter 44

    Emi GS commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 44

    Wow. That was never expected. I was all tears, the whole time, reading from first; until the dream. I can feel the hate pouring from Alec towards his brother and his happiness. The evil strategies playing against the stronger opponent were clear. I was so eagerly waiting from very first chapter of GFD to see how you are going to lead us. You are doing a fantastic job on that. But in the middle of the chapter, there is one small mistake. You said Taryn cried on Justin's shoulder soaking his shirt, where actually they both are supposed to be naked. A small and ignorable(is that even a word? ), but just wanted to tell you. Another than that a very wonderful chapter indeed. ~Emi.
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    Chapter 43

    Emi GS commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 43

    I know this might be my first review/comment from me on your work. But remember that I followed your story, GFD, and find this beautiful and wondrous place. Your story is the reason. I have loved this story so far and it even resembles with my life, my thinking, my imagination, and my everything that involved with love. Sorry I am unable to review before(the previous stories and chapters). As for this chapter: I am on the verge of tears by the ending. I can feel the struggle, the pain, and the love between these two. Very excellent chapter as for me. You did excellent on this, like usual. I loved it. ~Emi.
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    Tanka 1

    Emi GS commented on Emi GS's story chapter in Tanka 1

    Got it master. And I am forcing you to tag along too. I know its a long journey and definitely a big goal. So I really wanted all support from you. Thank you so much for everything you have done and going to do. Love you... ~Emi.
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    Tanka 1

    Emi GS posted new chapter in Hundred and One Tankas

    Tanka - 1: For A Dragon A dragon departs, Fleeing into the night sky, To embrace the space Which holds the secrets of past, Of present and of future.
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    A collection of poetry of form Tanka...
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    April 29 : I Am...

    Emi GS commented on Emi GS's story chapter in April 29 : I Am...

    It's always good to hear you are enjoying my poetry. Thanks for putting your time to read and review my poetry... ~Emi.
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    April 29 : I Am...

    Emi GS commented on Emi GS's story chapter in April 29 : I Am...

    Glad you had enjoyed the poem. And thank you so much for all the support you have given the entire month... ~Emi.
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    April 29 : I Am...

    Emi GS commented on Emi GS's story chapter in April 29 : I Am...

    Thank you Lyssa. Thank you for all the support and the comments given on my poetry... ~Emi.
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    I might have failed to give a detailed description in raising poem, especially where you have pointed out. Actually I was talking about three puppies and their mother dog along side of the path. I hope I can correct that. Thanks for taking your time to read it though. ~Emi.
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    I'll definitely take your advice on that. And thanks for reading my poems and letting me know what you think of them. I am glad you enjoyed my poetry. ~Emi.
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    I'll definitely take a look at the blog about rhyming and all. I am glad you felt like it was better than your first Sonnet. That was very honoured comment for me. Thanks for giving the expected detailed review and for your suggestions to improve my knowledge and skills. Glad I got you as my teacher. Thanks for everything Ben... ~Emi.
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    Thank you so much Sas. I was a blushing mess with the comments/compliments given. Thank you for reading and reviewing... ~Emi.
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    Wow! Glad you felt like that. And I know I am smiling wide. Thank you so much for the compliment Sas... ~Emi.
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    Glad you enjoyed reading them. I know I can get more anxious sometimes and this day has been one of them. So is the three poems. The more the merrier. Thanks for putting your time to read and review. ~Emi.
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    Oh! Those were not my words Sas. According to the prompt, I took those lines as a jump start for the poem. And I extracted those words from the prompt that was provided by Val. So I don't know who is the accurate guy who deserves the compliments. Thanks for reading and reviewing... ~Emi.
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    Glad to hear that tim. I can say it was a mad poem, without a proper start or without proper ending. Thanks for reading and reviewing tim... ~Emi.
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    That was a huge compliment and I am honoured. Especially this poem was very strong to effect me even to write about it. I am glad you liked this much and put efforts support and appreciate me. Thank you so much for that. ~Emi.
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    As I said to tim, it has been tough challenge for me to write this poem. And your compliments put at ease after all the hard work. Thanks for continuous support and always sharing your thoughts on my poem. ~Emi.
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    Yeah, I agree with you about the scary part. Actually it has been a challenge to write this poem. Like you have to imagine you are on the wage of dieing and have look into yourself and write. A tough challenge for a depressed soul like me. Glad you enjoyed being scary... Thanks for investing your time to read and comment on my poems... ~Emi.
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    Happy Birthday James...
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