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Avangelion

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  1. Avangelion

    Jimmy, Will, & Bob

    Wow... That was hard to go through *sniffles* i hope he pulled through alright. Should go to bed, but I need to know he's going to be alright... Reading one more before bed
  2. You show'im rick!! I think I might, during this story, become a rugby fan... Sigh, and I don't even like sports. All this hormones
  3. Ben confuses me sometimes. He feels like he's all over the place at times and then not really at all, strategically all over the place - I like it. Makes one want to know what the f*** is going on with him. at first I liked Doug, from the phone conversation he seemed like a funny guy. Then I met him... So on Ricks side with that one. I would've been pissed too. I don't think I would've appreciated that kind of friend, and for him to treat my date/someone I just met that way without my say so, but then again I don't have the kind of issues Ben is dealing with, so... i love ice the way their relation shit's like push and pull, so now I'm on to see if one is going to get the upper hand
  4. Thank you. I wanted to try writing something different from the rest I've made. I'm glad you liked it Maybe I should note that the chapters are seperate stories.
  5. Avangelion

    Chapter 2

    Really interresting. I liked the way his anxiety attack was described, I felt I could put myself in his place. the dialog is priceless, but dear lord he curses a lot i like that they actually reached a dead point - the point when Ben said he doesn't actually like Rick, as a person - I kind of expected it to go like the first chapter 'im hot, Youre hot, I like you, you like me' stuff. it was refreshing to get the opposite thrown at me. Makes me want to read more. i loved the whole asshole/Jesus/God naming they have going on, makes me wonder if there is something en between 'asshole' and 'Jesus' reading on
  6. Avangelion

    Dinner with Gran

    I loved this first charter. It had the perfect balance between funny and getting-to-know info. I was laughing already at the beginning with Ben thoughtless up and asking this total stranger to be his boyfriend. And screaming in delight at the yaoi scene, absolutely priceless. th characters are very well portrayed and I'm excitedly moving on to the next chapter.
  7. Thank you for reviewing. I was a bit worried that the impact wouldn't be quite what i had hoped for, but I'm glad to hear that it was, after all:) I'm glad you liked it
  8. I knew I had it coming. She’d been telling me for years it would turn out like this. The fierce sound of heels clicking on the laminate hospital floor told me I was in for a long lecture. “Matthew! What did I tell you?” Mentally I rolled my eyes; I knew what she was going to say. “Your body can’t handle the kind of stress you’re putting on it.” I was born with a bad heart, but even after three surgeries and a bunch of different medications I wasn’t getting any better. The doctors were just pro
  9. Awwww thank you. I pleased that you like it so much ☺️
  10. Thank you so much for your review:) Actually I didn't even think about having him call, why didn't I? OMG, I can't believe I forgot that, I had intended to put it in, actually, Tamaki had stayed with them, so no smexing there:) God, I can't believe I forgot that:(
  11. I'm glad you like it and thanks for reviewing. I intended the whole cheating situation to me of a taken-by-surprise-kiss-and-very-bad-timing kind of situation so it would be easier for Dom to forgive Anikin in the other end. But I'm very exited myself to see where all this is going:)
  12. I was in front of Sean’s door when I finally regained my senses. I hadn’t even gone home to get a change of clothes, and now that I thought about it I decided it didn’t really matter. Anikin would expect me to go home, and I didn’t want to see him. I raised my hand slowly and rang the doorbell. I heard voices from the other side and the next moment Sean opened the door. “Dom? What are you doing here?” he asked. I opened my mouth to answer but just at that moment I broke down right then and the
  13. Avangelion

    Chapter 1

    *sniff sniff* I have nothing to say... I'm just crying Yes, still crying It was very well written. drinks on me - by mail (hope the bottle's not broken when it arrives ) I can't stop crying *sniff*
  14. First, my reason for writing here is obviously to review the poem I just read, but my reason for reading is due to all your status updates spamming my notifications list So I thought let's go see what this lad is all about Poems are not usually my thing, they tend to confuse me, I don't always know what kind of feeling I'm supposed to feel and I always end up over analysering them, so I just picked one randomly. I must say I really liked this one, I don't know much about fools day as we don't have that in DK, so that's not quite the angle I saw it from, but more as; even though some people are different (whether it be physically or mentally) you shouldn't treat them differently, they are just the same as the rest of us and should be treated as such (i think I over analysed)... I liked the emotional path it took me down and I will definitely be coming back to read more:)
  15. thank you so much for your review. I agree with you on the rushed beginning of the story, but it was/is my first larger project (which I'm actually gonna finish), and I didn't know at first how much work it was going to be. But with the help from my readers and my betareader/editor I am slowly getting better, and I plan on rewriting the whole thing once I'm done, to fill all the wholes:) But I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I hope to keep you entertained all through to the end.
  16. We’d survived the weekend, but I wasn’t so sure I would last through the drive back; it lasted forever. Almost three days without touching each other had been hard —in the case of certain parts very hard, and my quota of “quality boyfriend skin against skin time” was down to a zero. My thoughts started to wander, creating images of what would happen as soon as the car pulled up our driveway. All sorts of ideas played like a movie inside my head, resulting in the hardening of my dick. Great, now
  17. Avangelion

    Vampires

    The world I was born into was dark and cruel. Living among vampires wasn’t all fun, especially when you were half human. Their world worked by hierarchy and because I was taken in by the leader of the Clan, and raised alongside his son, Luka; who became my best friend, automatically I ranked after the “prince”. The reason for the hierarchy was because of strength. Everyone except the king had a temper problem, and therefore the one above you in the hierarchy was responsible for putting you in
  18. A collection of short stories and pieces - created of scattered ideas. Each chapter is a seperate story and has no attachment to previous or following chapters.
  19. Friday. Even though I was trying my hardest, willing it to go away, it remained Friday and we still had to leave. I know I hadn’t thought much of the idea of spending a weekend with Mom, but to be honest I was chickening out. Looking back at the last six weeks between Anikin and myself I was starting to feel nervous, could we really pull it off? I knew Anikin didn’t really care whether or not Mom knew about us, but I wasn’t ready for the tantrum she was definite to throw. Besides, it was my deci
  20. My ever faithful follower. Thank you for yet another lovely review. I'm glad you noticed the humor I worked hard to get into the story, It was fun writing:) and I promise you I am on work with the drama... soon to come;)
  21. I'm glad you liked it:) They have been my favorite couple for ages and i'm so exited that their relationchip is in progress.
  22. Avangelion

    Chapter 19

    God, I'd forgotten how much I love this story. Had to take a long break from reading. But now I'm back to enjoy the perfekt balance of sex, jokes, drama and every-day-life.
  23. Wow... I feel like a squealing highschool girl, I have fans... woohoo Thank for reviewing, I'm thrilled that you like my story. please do leave more reviews and let know what you think, both the good and the bad, it helps me a lot:)
  24. Morning arrived and I woke up feeling very well rested, I stretched my stiff muscles savoring the extension taking away the itch. Having the need for another five minutes of snoozing, I rolled onto my side and nuzzled closer to Anikin. He stirred in his sleep and tightened his grip around me before waking up. “Mmmm, what time is it?” He mumbled. “Just five more minutes,” I grumbled half asleep. Anikin let go of me and reached behind him to grab his watch. “Shit!” He exclaimed jumping out of b
  25. I never really thought about comming out to my mom (i'm bi) before I kind of accidently told her. I think I was 23 and we were on a car drive talking about this shitty relationship i'd just gotten out of, at then by accident I just blurted out "yeah but this chick i'm dating..." when I realized it was too late so i just kept talking, mom was silent, listening to me and her answer was "yeah yeah, but gay relationships have the same kind of problems and don't forget that I want grandkids" sounding like we'd been talking about what we had for breakfast. thinking back it was kind of funny
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