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  1. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 17

    Aw, Gwen is a bit messed up, but she does want to help. We'll get to know her more. I'm sorry to hear about your experience.
  2. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 17

    You're right; they can be complicated, as can many relationships. Andy was hoping for a Harlequin Romance, I think. Matt was more like Don Draper at the end of Mad Men, escaping to the West. But we shall see.
  3. After leaving the bakery, Matthew drifted down the street. Stopping to stare at the wares for sale, the vibrant displays were psychedelic walls of colour. As he continued his aimless wandering, sadness and loss threatened to overwhelm him. "Just what did you think was going to happen?" He gazed into another store window, whispering to himself. He rested his head on the cool glass. Passersby gave him odd looks, and the storekeeper came out. His wild gestures made it clear that he wanted
  4. No, they are just achey. i took a pill.. hopefully it'll help.
  5. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 16

    Enjoy The S.A. stories.. there are some good ones there! Matt did need to see Ahmet and his truth. It's sad they cannot be together, but as you say, it's not a surprise. Have a super weekend!!
  6. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 15

    You're right. Matt may just want to curl up but he really hasn't got a choice in this. 🤞 Thanks for your comments!!
  7. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 14

    Thanks Alex. Andy's a bit slow, but let's hope he does step up for Matt's sake. Everyone should have a Maeve in their life.
  8. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 13

    Yeah, Matt has been through a lot. He needs some help and as you say, hopefully Andrew and Maeve will do that. Thanks for your comments.
  9. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 12

    Thanks, Alexmugs ... hope work lightens up a bit.
  10. Yeah, it is super icky here. Like walking in hot soup ... Back from the doc with jabs in both arms.. they hurt..lol. I am gonna take some drugs.
  11. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 1

    I enjoyed the 'people' portion; all the pod/more techie stuff isn't my thing. I'm sure Sci-fi-fans will love it. Thanks, Secret Author.
  12. How do you feel today, tim? Answer: Blah. Hope you all feel better than that. Have a good one.
  13. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 1

    Masterfully crafted; beautiful. Thank you, SA.
  14. Hope you are too, chris! It's a good thing chris knows what day it is! Anyway, we are under an extreme heat alert. It's so humid...all the fans are on but we may give up soon and turn on the AC. Drink lots, if its hot, even if you don't feel thirsty...keep cool!
  15. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 16

    Yeah, Matt got his answer. Painfully, it wasn't what he wanted, but at least he knows. Now, he has to decide what's next for him. Thanks for your comments, VBlew.
  16. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 16

    Thank you, Michael. xo
  17. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 16

    It's hard because you can't just turn the page to keep reading. Matt's story has six chapters left. I hope you enjoy the rest.
  18. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 16

    @kbois is the editor and has verified, but what's on the page is my decision, right or wrong. @Reader1810, the beta reader, had a few questions. This story was written a couple of years ago, and Reader verified a couple of things I had researched at that time but had changed since the story was finished. So, this was doubly verified.
  19. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 16

    Phew...that's a lot. I promise there are no dodgy baths.
  20. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 16

    Exactly thank you.
  21. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 16

    That weird error has been fixed. Thanks. Since Chapter 1, Matt has encountered many people. Maeve and Andy, while they save him, are just more people to him right now—people he thanked and moved on from. They have no power over him. They have to let him go. However, Matt is reminded of the often, he's got Andy's Credit card and thinks about them when eating his first Turkish food. He may not have noticed he was doing it, but they are in his thoughts. Matt is strong. You can be scared, broken and alone and still be strong, because the alternative isn't what you want. He's used to surviving, and that doesn't stop now. Thank you for following this story.
  22. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 16

    All Matt wanted was Ahmet, and now that's gone. Now, Matt has to deal with the rest. No, knowing how Andy deals with confrontation, i.e. Tony, he probably hasn't spoken to his parents yet. We haven't met Matt's mother. Matt does and doesn't want to see her. He's said that throughout the story. He may decide to go home. We'll have to wait and see. What would Matt say? He likes Maeve, but she is a stranger to him. Why would he spill his hopes and dreams with people he doesn't know? Maeve likely understood this and knows Matt is not hers, and it's not really her place to say anything about his life or how he handles things. He didn't ask for her opinion, and she didn't give one. Abused people may look and act okay, but we're not. We also don't like to hand over our hopes and dreams to people we don't know. Why? Because we don't know them or trust them. I'm happy to know you're invested in this story. Matt is now moving forward and considering his next steps. I hope you enjoy the rest of his journey.
  23. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 16

    It was easier to just change eleven to four. LOL But i like your timeline...
  24. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 16

    Interesting. What important conversations do you think there would have been? Matthew wanted to leave. What would have been said? If it were me, I'd have thanked them, promised to keep in touch, thanked Andy for the money and moved on. Matt didn't ask for any of this. He may seem okay, but is he? Matt didn't meet Andy's parents; why would he unless he planned on staying there with Andrew and Maeve. Matt wanted to travel to find Ahmet. That's all that was in his mind at the time for the most part. What was there to talk about?
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