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"Aye," he said. It sounded rather matter-of-factly and there was very little emotion in his face. June frowned suspiciously at her brother. "You're an asshole," she informed him. Julius smirked and had to laugh a bit. "I know. It's true, though." June glared and challenged him with a jerky nod. "Fuck you, be honest now. For real now, Kat, the same Kat, our Kat, has actually really failed and has to spend the next year with us?" Julius gave an exasperated sigh and threw his arms up. "For fuck
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Minerals glitter, people lose, and light still exists.
Doctor Oger commented on Doctor Oger's story chapter in Minerals glitter, people lose, and light still exists.
Of course! I just meant I was going to try and keep it decipherable. Thank you all the same for the encouragement. :] -
Minerals glitter, people lose, and light still exists.
Doctor Oger posted new chapter in The Sock Drawer
Minerals glitter, people lose, and light still exists. You are lost, I'm lost in you. I don't want to get out, and I don't think I can. We're suspended somehow, because everything's new. Shiny, loud, and intricate, such wonderful clutter. Such beautiful glinting nonsense, with so much sense in it, in you. You're a rockstar, I'm your biggest fan. What other thing than adoration could I possibly utter? The caves are glittering with crystals and veins of precious ore. If I'd just stay i -
Thank you for the review. Too metaphoric again, haha. I'll know to watch that from now on. ;D
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No, as I said in response to Parker, it was probably just too personalised. I'm still fairly certain that no one reading this actually imagines the same things I did when I wrote it. But that doesn't really matter for this text, as long as the reader sees *something*. And see, now you've confirmed that I went over the top here and that's what I need from a review, honest critique when something's off! So thank you very much!
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A Gift of Brilliance The lemon's taste I remember well. It was my first, the best, and only. Our sugar on it was just right, all of this tinged the tide pushing against mossy cliffs so brightly, in brilliant foam and the force of all the deep ocean. But touching softly, this downy skin stretched over a dragon's muscled body. As if the ragged Shade were gold, the dragon's tide into it rolled, and basked in it. It was an afternoon in shining fruit, for shining Shade, in shining mood. Should there
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Phew, thank you. I was worried it had far too much removed imagery and mood to be readable, that it just reads like a hot mess of homemade symbols that couldn't possibly make any sense to anyone but myself. I'm really relieved you could find something in it. (Something else with each read, as it seems.)
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Thank you so very much.
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My Lord Blood Gem Savvy - ha - has a slightly different meaning now. It's getting so much charity, from you of all people. Are you bedazzled? By something I can't see. It's something you are giving me, and for your greatest gift I vow to never claim back clarity. Red mist begets more of itself, and covers our eyes. And what soft moss it is, softly tempting to never get up. Lying in it, watching blood gem ease questions to sleep, I dare to glory in his deep, piercing shine, and w
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Not a review but a comment: 1. Funny. 2. Thank you for correct English. 3. Faster. This is like waiting for the next episode of Game of Thrones.
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You know I strive to make you cry. Thank you very much. And I'm glad you enjoyed it melancholically.
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Yes, it is difficult to mold something naturalsounding into the shape of eight syllables with that rhyme scheme (which I don't normally use, for no particular reason). And thank you. Does the word have a particular meaning beyond "shadow"?
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"What now?" Teague finally managed to ask. He whispered it. The darkness around them, interrupted only by the occasional glint of moonlight on the odd smooth surface here and there, and the near-silence around them hushed everything, especially his voice. Kjeld's calm stare added its fair share. Teague found it hard to bear. "You can never summon her again?" Kjeld smiled very softly. Then he shook his head minutely. "And you're alright with that?" Teague had been gripping his forearms so hard
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Oh, you're right. They have a very similar story. But I suppose there used to be (and still are) thousands of stories like this. Thank you.
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Poetry Prompt 6 - Elegy: My Uncle
Doctor Oger commented on Aditus's story chapter in Poetry Prompt 6 - Elegy: My Uncle
Not a proper review, this, because the only thing I have to say is: Perfekt. -
Poetry prompt 6 - Elegy
Doctor Oger commented on Puppilull's story chapter in Poetry prompt 6 - Elegy
Excellent! Nice natural flow and I love how the first bits were vague enough at first to let us experience a wispy shadow of the big realisation that dawned on the narrator through those stanzas. -
Poetry Prompt 6 - Elegy
Doctor Oger commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Poetry Prompt 6 - Elegy
You managed to put the theme into a round, full, continuous unity really elegantly. I think it's already been said, but you also managed a pretty natural flow in your words, which I know is difficult to achieve when you have to stick to a specific number of syllables. I'm really most impressed at how you managed to write this with the 'Remember' theme throughout, without a wee bit of 'loss' or 'death' or any other hint of 'it's over' anywhere. It's through and through positive and optimistic, with absolutely no resentment towards anything at all. But still there are beginning and ending markers that round the poem off. (The vows long ago and the love until time ends.) Very nice. -
Shade's Remembrance Red light infused dead dust with life; he was the one with glowing eyes who taught Shade how to live by lies, the remnants of defeat and strife. The closest friends, Blood Gem and Shade, explored the caves of both their minds, discovered both their separate kinds in private ways their world forbade. Their haven was a misty glade, their sprig of love a secret thing, so far removed from sunny spring and all its gaudy plant parade. It was a labyrinth of
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Beloved - Poetry Prompt 7 Blank Verse
Doctor Oger commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Beloved - Poetry Prompt 7 Blank Verse
An expertly executed heartwrench. Excellent. -
From the speakers the sensual sound
Doctor Oger commented on Doctor Oger's story chapter in From the speakers the sensual sound
Take this great basket packed with seven fresh Thanks! -
You get the picture. :}
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Ha. Exactly. ;] Thank you for commenting.
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I thought so, too. But both imdb and wikipedia told me it was "Norma Jeane". And thank you. :]
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Yes, it did. :]
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Thank you so much, yet again! And you're right, the last line tinges all the rest.
