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Interesting chapter, you will always find the homophobes that will go out of their way to cause trouble, Tim is going to be raking someone over the foals AM seems to be a lot better
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Wow well the genie is out of the bottle, and putting it back is not going to be easy , I wonder what is mom's case , I suspect that she knows something and I suspect that Bruce told her something, the ball has started to roll, nothing can stop it now.
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Interesting chapter, the "old guard" are trying to get the upper hand, and no doubt will discover that they underestimated the new group, and will hopefully loose the upper hand with speed and haste, new men in town
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Interesting developments, I am not surprised the DA decided to leave the case more ammunition, the judge on the other hand is a different matter, I think that with the newspaper article and the judge literal bombs are going to be going off under a few select people's butts
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Finally,the ducks are ready in a really nice row , and the ball is about to start rolling, this is going to be a rather emotional roller coaster, Bruce is going to find out when the newspaper reporters start calling, and no doubt they will when the story hits the papers
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So Tim has all of his ducks in a row and he has the ball that will knock them down so Bruce can collect all the dues due to him in prison, interesting developments, I can't wait for the next chapter
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Great chapter, tense but as I suspected a few chapters ago that the council was involved, i think the shape shifter is a good idea , I also hope that the council gets a kick up the butt . When you hurt and injure your own people it is the worst kind of genocide.which calls for swift and immediate attention
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Interesting chapter, Bruce is going to make such a nice lay in prison, his a#se will be really loose within a week, just punishment I think to. Tom is a sad case of bribery and control, but worst of all he is a male/female rapist of the worst kind
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Wow talk about being blind sided, I never expected that outcome, well dear old Bruce is going down and when he goes down he will no doubt stay there as Tim is going to go for the jugular, I cannot wait for the next chapter
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Progress with AM, dinner went well, I wonder about the newspaper article, time will tell the school is going to regret their actions sooner rather than later
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Awesome chapter, I am glad Kellan's family got away. a lot more information in this chapter, they now know what Reilly's family are up to . They need to stopped yesterday is better than tomorrow 😭
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Great chapter, some progress with AM, I think that Thomas is going to be sh#,tting his pants when he hears about the lawsuit and the newspaper article, it's great the am can go out for meal,
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Firstly a happy new year to you and everyone, I hope we have a productive year of reading ahead ,then we have progress with AM I hope there are no new setbacks, the papers article is going to stir a lot of interest and open up more wounds but open them is imperative for justice to be served, interesting developments ahead
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Awesome chapter, so the sentinels are complete , a complete shift and a complete mating , now that they are together, I think that this whole sordid kidnapper ring is going to eventually come crashing down and justice I hope will be swift , painful and permanent, I cannot wait for the next chapter
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I would not be surprised if the council is involved in the kidnappings
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Awesome chapter, so much information, it figures as horrible as Reilly's family were to him that they are possibly behind the abductions , if it is true payback is definitely going to be a b#tch but it will be good to make his family pay up for their despicable doings to other lycans
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Awesome chapter, so we have another couple of shifters, a very good day and chapter, now they need to get together with the other 2 couples to go on the hunt for the kidnappers
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Great chapter, so the wheels turn slowly to start but they will gather speed soon I would imagine, Steven and co are in for a truckload of crap. Donnie is quite reassuring , to them
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Great chapter , excellent explanation about the matings, so another shifter kidnapped, I think that the kidnappers are going to be in for a truckload of crap now that the sentinel are going to after them ,
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Wow, they are most definitely going to open a HUGE can of worms, Bruce will have no place to hide when this story hits the papers. He needs to be stopped
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And so the rollercoaster ride is about to begin, the first turn has brought down the first Domino, the avalanche is almost ready to be go, Bennie won't get off Scott free but he will carry diminished punishment, Bruce is going to pay , AM I hope is going to come through this in s much better place.
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Interesting developments, Ann is going to find out that she was not alone in getting raped by the boys but she will be helped by others in the same boat , mom is going to have let go and accept the reality that she cannot keep keep the secret as hire any more,
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Well what an awesome chapter, Reilly recovered from his pain and ordeal, Sebastian and him are definitely mates as are Kellan and Hunter , I think thatthe four of them are going to be dealing out some punishment to various bodies of people past and present, as in Reilly's family and the kidnappers. I can't wait for more
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Oh wow,I so can agree with your suggestion about drawn out process of attrition
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