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Well arrow has lit fire under the girls butts ,they deserved the treatment and I think they will be sidelined and rejected by more places , regardless of what mummy says, he is certainly making a name for himself when people see the painting in the cafe he will get more commissions , things hopefully can only get better
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Wow what entitled b*tches thinking that they can do as they please taking what they want , arrow was quite correct they needed taking down back to the basement rung of the ladder , his boyfriend has had a sudden eye opening experience
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Brilliant, mom has upped all the friends with something that they will never ever gets into their grubby little fingers on , mom is proud of her dom and loves the painting, progress on the new boyfriend
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Chapter 4: Prompt Proposal
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 4: Prompt Proposal
Awesome chapter, happy couples everywhere, I think Stacy will take the "bite" and I hope Vinnie says yes they are definitely in for the long haul. Streum has met his match he tried once before with Vinnie and lost now he has tried again and this time he has lost everything big time, interesting developments ahead- 22 comments
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Interesting developments, mom will either love the painting or she will go somewhat ballistic, time will definitely tell
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Awesome result, I think that he is certainly going to get noticed by all and sundry when his father puts it on display he will get numerous requests I think
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Interesting, some of his fellow students are not very accepting of criticism not realising that each person looks and sees a picture differently, he is learning quite a lot
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Great description of the painting, you can see it in your mind and of course congratulations are in order,
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A perfect answer to his painting, now he can make more progress with his skill set , the first sake I think is always the worst ,now that hurdle has been overcome, it's onwards and upwards
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Interesting chapter, definitely going to be an new experience for him , it can only go up from here , I hope he gets the surprise he needs
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Great progress, constant and dedicated work is paying off , he is getting to master a variety of skills that he will no doubt need further along the road to success
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Chapter 3: Beta's Betrayal
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 3: Beta's Betrayal
Interesting chapter, so the dominoes begin to fall , streum is a bully , but it's time to really clean up and let the lycans live in peace , and it's time for a bit of fighting -
Interesting start , ghosts of the past influencing the future
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Wow a new direction, it would seem that we are in for another awesome journey,
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Great chapter,I suppose that Donnie senior also needs to move to to do other work upstairs he has definitely done his bit for all and sundry. Thanks for such an entertaining read , you took us through all the emotions with AM, from hate to pity to encouragement, and all's well that ends well for now
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Worrying about Christmas and gifts has it seems thrown Tim for a bit of a loop, I imagine that sisters of mercy will supply them with more than a few surprises, I suppose some changes before and after the holidays
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Awesome dinner , and a very happy family get-together, definitely time to eat something
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Awesome chapter, so the "so called" father wanted money , here Karma took another payback and issued another "snot slap" so he can along with that spend time in prison, where he will no doubt find some interesting companionship, I don't think the inmates will take kindly to him tossing his pregnant daughter onto the street, they are in for fun and games with the twins , the whole family is glowing it seems
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Awesome chapter, crazy things seemed to happen, it was rush,rush and more rushing , I think that Donnie and his helpers will keep the useless father out of the picture or at the very least take care of him on his joinery down to "Hell" , I hope that the twins will not be over spoiled but that seems more than impossible, now onto bringing them home. The grannies are going to have a field day
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A sad and happy chapter all in one , and given the circumstances CONGRATULATIONS are definitely in order Donnie is probably laughing his head off
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Great chapter, so a few loose ends are getting tied off , so a few moments to relax and enjoy each other , no doubt before Donnie surprises them
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Interesting wrap up with Tom and the "dead" Bruce, AM is doing better than fine , she still needs to learn basic skills like cooking etc , Tim and Stephen can now find their way in life without unnecessary hassles ,however given who they are, that is unlikely
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Unsurprisingly , everyone connected has died so it seems no point in carrying on with the case , now they can get on with their lives
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Progress, and congratulations are in order , slow and steady progress with the case , Tim it seems, likes to wheel and deal
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It's awesome that they connected like they were before the Bruce debacle, but they now know that they need to delegate tasks to bring conclusion for all concerned, Donnie confirmed that they are still on the right track, now they need some kids
