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Great chapter, so he seems to be settling in quite well interesting times ahead 200 a week seems insufficient
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So Caleb kicked butt, I think that is just temporary relief the fight is far from over, but way to go Caleb
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Great chapter, some progress, but the whole tender/contract, is now being changed, interesting what is going to happen in the future, some surprises when they get to California
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Interesting chapter, were the the waiter and side kick set up, but a successful demonstration, I think that this was a successful sale
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Interesting, the principal is not a very good leader she is a control freak, the window self destructed, it gave advice got its message across and left , interesting reaction, so Tristan hand a hand but he didn't break it
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Chapter 14: Psychological Struggle
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 14: Psychological Struggle
Excellent kill , a hatred filled idiot wth a rather big chip on his shoulder is absolutely no more , killed as violently as he lived , just rewards I say, and poor Stacy learns that humans are no alone on the planet, scary and eye opening at the same time, an awesome and brilliant chapter -
Oh so Caleb has arrived is it in grannie's forest , I hope that he gets to 23 to save her, strange finger face giving advice
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Well as I expected Pete is a homophobic prick, I wonder what education he got if he still believes that someone can be turned gay , he is just a prick god at his job but a prick that more often than not will always be a prick, makes me wonder if he wasn't gay for Lee, I hope that the contract will be signed and he move on
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Well congrats on the bursary, but we all know where it comes from , his mother is an idiot so controlled by her brother, but this will no doubt find out soon, his uncle would no doubt love to have him indebted to him for a long time, the conniving hound
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Wow what just happened, granny is angry and everyone knows don't mess with granny, I think that they are in for quite a ride to get out of this one, Charlie is is in for an education
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Good chapter I also think that his mother and uncle are involved with the rejection Letters , we don't know if he actually read them or else his 5% doctored them , he needs to get the letter sent to Chaz's address, it is awesome that he can cook he is very self sufficient
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Yip bumps in the road are inevitable
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Awesome chapter, I think that the jeolousy from Aiden may be cute but it has to stop rather soon to prevent resentment from Matt, great that Matt is going to start work with Seamus at almost ground level getting the business back on the straight and narrow
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Crazy good chapter, a happy New year to the gang , the concert was brilliant, and everything is going well, now back to the grindstone
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Awesome chapter, so the scholarship is getting set up, is he buying a cottage for him for university?
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Wow what a douche bag uncle, here I thought a bit of a love angle but that thought is definitely out the window, I hope that Bobby is going to be okay
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Mission - What The Hell Happened
mikedup commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Mission - What The Hell Happened
Holy cow, talk about a cluster f*ck up , a stupid test that failed so spectacularly, poor Tyler has every reason to dissapear, Zeke I hope finds him rapidly -
Interesting chapter, I wonder what happened between them and I hope that they will sort it out, Chaz will get to the bottom of the problem I hope
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Wow working for the company and of course jealousy has read it ugly head , what difference does it make it gets more than others it is his designs after all is it not!
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Wow Intense fight but I got lost what the hell did Hideyoshi just do is he dead , or did he move into another plane taking her with him, I can't wait to find out
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Great chapter, interesting developments, seems that they will get a lot work without anyone knowing that the security is in place
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So she teleported I think that she is going to be mor than a little surprised when Hideyoshi really unleashes his power I expect help to arrive to help
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Interesting chapter, kent is an idiot I think that he had no limits set on him growing growing up, it doesn't reflect from the fact that he was told and decided to be a pig and spoil it for everyone, Chaz has no doubt got excellent security at his house
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Interesting doesn't seem to be the correct way to describe the start to this story, it would seem that we are in For quite a ride ,
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Interesting start to this New story, it seems like a bit of a competition between them
