mikedup
-
Posts
4,580 -
Joined
-
Last visited
Content Type
Forums
Stories
- Stories
- Story Series
- Story Worlds
- Story Collections
- Story Chapters
- Chapter Comments
- Story Reviews
- Story Comments
- Stories Edited
- Stories Beta'd
Blogs
Store
Help
Writing
Gallery
Events
Everything posted by mikedup
-
Wow I thought she was a prime. Bitch and she proved to be just that , she needs a karmic slap,
-
Another interesting character, the grandpa has a small sense of humour, at least she has a bit more information about the family, but pie first, the list of characters is getting longer , one very large, very disturbed family
-
Great chapter, so sender Angelina she seems very likable and I think that she will make a great addition to the family
-
Wow what an awefull life he led befriending someone to have them leave, children are immeasurably cruel when they can a d I suppose that the prize bitch will be even crueler while she can to make herself look good even though she seems to be Satan in disguise
-
Great travels, more information about Italy, plus the story about why they are there, we await the next chapter
-
Bonus Chapter: Ray Sullivan.
mikedup commented on Rhythminthemind's story chapter in Bonus Chapter: Ray Sullivan.
Okay so there was a reason although the execution was not the right way , I hope that the 2 if gem get an opportunity to explain to their sons if they ever get the chance, Tasha is a really tough nut to crack -
Awesome chapter, a great start to their honeymoon, a wish fulfilled between them, onwards to the surprise in Italy
-
Maple, cherry, walnut, hickory, oak...
mikedup commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Maple, cherry, walnut, hickory, oak...
Bloody brilliant, I want to stand and shout over the treetops ,that they are finally together, Aiden will be a little bit clinging but that too will pass now thing's can get better all around- 34 comments
-
- 18
-
-
-
-
Congratulations in order, well done on getting signed up for pro ball and they will be in able to stay close together
-
Interesting chapter, he was really good at seeing where they were getting overworked by the coach, the trip to Italy is going to produce some interesting developments
-
Interesting, so James went to another dimension it seems, that lightning bolt opened up a new portal to escape to
-
Awesome chapter, great progress on the maths front, the team is making a difference in the scores
-
Wow a rather intense fight, James managed to get away and suddenly a new character appears to help Tasha the birds are rather annoying
-
Awesome chapter, the saying that the way to a man's heart is through his stomach, seems to be a very accurate description of the two of them , fun never seems to end
-
Great chapter, a small break while they relocate, having the gang there is going to be a godsend, I think that when Ethan and the gang get there, the gods will be helping in a big way,
- 41 comments
-
- 11
-
-
Great that they have moved forward a bit in their relationship, interesting shower and of course sleeping in the same bed , I do think that things will move along as fast as Scott becomes more comfortable
-
Interesting chapter, so James went looking and James found , at least Tasha and jan s found each other now to get hold of Casper and of course I think granny , I am sure she knows about "father"
-
Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
mikedup commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Fact: Someone should be hitting dat ass
FINALLY, I can't wait for the 🎆 fireworks, I think that Matt is suddenly going to play catch-up.- 50 comments
-
- 15
-
-
-
-
Chapter 9: Seraphic Stunt
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 9: Seraphic Stunt
Great chapter, everyone is connecting with everyone else, there 1 wolf who is going to be in DEEP crap and it is all by his own doing and a major putdown is going to happen, I don't think that cynus realises how Vinnie got them there -
Great that they are both going to the same tech , out the closet finally , interesting times ahead
-
Interesting that Zeke seems to be sorry but somehow I think that he isn't, Tyler has every right to be angry I wonder what is going to be said at dinner
-
Wow father helped but I don't think that it is the help that Casper needs, and shoving him out of his mind is really awesome, now I reacon he really needs James
-
Great get together by the family, nothing bad happened, I sense a bit of an undercurrent running around, I just wonder what is going to happen, he also has a lot of work on his plate
-
Interesting chapter, so Ronnie made peace plus he accepted the. Without any problem the family get-together is going to be interesting
-
Talk about moving from one battlefield to another in quick succession, he is having a really crappy day and I don't know it it will get any better
