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Wow that was not a children's home that was a "gulag" even worse than a prison. That so called nurse needs to be picked up along with whoever is involved and locked up in prison
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Tyler is in need of some help his mind is all over the place,given what has happened it is quite understandable
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Great new year, I somehow doubt that anyone else could build a sanctuary like Brad's Sanctuary, I don't think that anyone else has the motivation to do it, plus there is no money to be made doing it
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Well definitely a very merry Christmas to everyone at Sanctuary, a very joyous occasion and great that everyone had a good time now onto new year and new beginnings for all
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Great chapter buying is fun , I can't wait for Christmas Day joy all-around
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Great chapter and a great celebration for the kids , a new experience for a lot of them , a great trip to look forward to
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Awesome outing I doubt any of the kids ever been to a Circus , life is good for Al! The kids plus some more
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Great surprise, everyone got back safely with no incidents, onwards and upwards
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Great chapter so the ship is sailing its "maiden voyage", the kids care in for a major surprise,
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I think that it is a bit of a set up, I recall an earlier chapter when a young man entered sanctuary and was arrested while eating as he was setting the boys appointments up . I think that something is amiss ,
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Yes if I could, however I am in South Africa, travel is a bit of a nightmare, but thanks for the invite
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Great chapter, I think that Sanctuary has been international for some time , this just broadens the net, I can't wait to hear what is going to happen to the ship
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Great chapter, I wonder how long it will take for the Refit. I imagine that Brad will no doubt push them to finish fast plus I think that the kids will ask when they can go on a trip
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Great chapter, progress so if seems that there is less work than we expected, it will be an awesome ship to go on holidays in
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Awesome chapter, more "dirt bags" taken down, I think that he needs to put surveillance around the Sanctuary, and of course a control room to monitor the cameras , I am glad that they got something to help the trees
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A sad chapter but a very good one nonetheless I think that he needs to assess the boat before making a firm decision about it. My heart bleeds for Pat
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Great chapter, I am glad that some of those hell fire preachers who are some of the worst pedophiles are having to pay up, and I hope the cost to them is huge. Payback is a b*tch
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Awesome chapter, a great tour along the coast and of course the notorious Cape weather had to play a part, but they came well enough, and so the holiday chain expended , it will be interesting to read about the end result. Great that the twins are getting active
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I have no idea about tonsillitis as mine were removed when I was 10 days old. I think he was a bit of a quack
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Great chapter, I give him my sympathy about tonsillitis, I know my kids suffered badly with it , but all that ice cream certainly helped , I feel for Pat , he was the first boy but definitely one of the best
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Great chapter, the governor was certainly very impressed, I don't think he was quite aware of exactly what happened at the sanctuary, but he definitely knows now, I also think that he will abort any interference by state officials from child welfare of others
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Great chapter, I think that the story writer is in for a big shock and I reacon he will join the prison crowd , the ship is going to really come in handy for as you say for a quick escape
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Great chapter, another bunch bite the dust, awesome to have big ship to taken the kids away in,the could use it for carter's like hec wants to do with the plane, great sting operation
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Chapter 33: Concluding Challenge
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 33: Concluding Challenge
Awesome chapter, 😥 I certainly enjoyed this amazing journey, Vincent has grown up by leaps and bounds, I hope that the next books is out very soon, thanks for such an awesome read -
I suppose that is was bound to happen, the children would grow up and leave to spread their wings, there will be sadness however I don't think any of the boys and girls will just stay away afterwards, home is where you grow up and get treated with love and kindness
