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  1. WolfM

    Full Circle

    “What do you mean they’re encroaching on our territory?” Dorian’s eyes flashed as he slammed his fist on the report. “They were caught hunting on our side of the border again. They killed a deer and were attempting to drag it back to their side when the hunters caught them.” Levi was practically giddy at his friend’s reaction. “We’re holding them at the regional office. Their ages are eighteen, seventeen, and fifteen.” “Emma, get me Graeagle’s alpha. NOW.” “You know they’re his grand
  2. WolfM

    Respect

    As fun as it was to write, I've grown to like the character. Especially his early years. But he was a royal ass by the time he was originally introduced in the first book so it had to happen here too.
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    Respect

    I always enjoy your thoughts. Dorian felt from the start he wouldn't be a good alpha, but would do the best he could for the people. He was a good leader in the Hunter Corps where he was well respected. He was also placed as an advisor to his alpha because of his leadership skills. There is a big difference between that role and becoming a corporate CEO which is what he was thrust into. Levi is someone Dorian considers as close to a brother as he can be. While the two didn't always agree, his trust in their friendship was absolute. When Dorian struggled to understand how to run the many companies, naturally he turned to the man he was closest to that had business experience to guide and teach him. What started out as leadership degraded to dependence on the man and his family.
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    Maybe But definitely don't give up.
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    Respect

    You're reaction is what I was hoping for, so thank you, 1brok. Originally this wasn't in the story draft and it felt like there was a major hole between the idealistic young Dorian who took over as alpha and the ass we meet at the congress of alphas.
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    You always bring a smile to my face, Mike.
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    Anything is possible But I'm not giving away anything at the moment.
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    I'm having a lot of fun reading these.
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    Respect

    All the people he should be listening to are being pushed aside as complainers and whiners. Dorian's turned into what he didn't want to become, but it's not uncommon for packs to have an authoritarian leader.
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    You leave that statement opened to two possible characters, though I'm pretty sure you're leaning towards just one.
  11. WolfM

    Respect

    If I got this type of reaction from you, plus all the angry responses to the chapter, then I know I got this chapter right. Just remember how big an ass Dorian was when he was introduced. It had to make it back to this point.
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    Respect

    It was supposed to be a quiet evening for Dorian to relax and spend time with his mother. His day had been a frustrating mountain of paperwork dealing with merging the Lassen Pack into his own. He briefly thought of using their name in the combined entities, but decided he was born Pit River and would remain so. Still, Lassen did have some prestige to the name from the majestic volcano nearby. Dinner was relaxing and they had a pleasant conversation. When he brought up the merger Sarah stopped t
  13. WolfM

    Triumph

    Thank you, Yeoldebard. Under Alpha Wagner, Dorian was guided and helped to find ways to deal with his anger issues and used them for the greater good. Sadly that's been taken away from him. As to the reason he chose Levi as his beta, usually the alpha would pick his closes friend who he knows will give the counsel he needs. Dorian chose the person he viewed as his best friend. Their relationship was never perfect, but to Dorian it was the person he trusted above all others. It probably didn't hurt that they were also sex buddies at times.
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    The Suicide

    From the title and the focus on Henk, I knew he'd be the one. Though with a writer like you it could have just as easily been anyone at Heros. It's a powerful chapter and very well done. When you're living on the edge of that abyss, it doesn't take much to step off the edge. And there were a lot of things here that pushed him. You want to hate the camera man at the end, but in reality it's his job. Just like every story in the news where they shove a camera in the face of a person who is suffering. Their actions are detestable, but they do serve a purpose.
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    Small World

    I want to send you the biggest virtual hug I can, and one for Mike too. I'm lucky that I've got the horses I care for as my companions through this and I wish I could share that with you. I do miss the human contact though, some of the time. The house is too quiet without my boy or our friends around.
  16. WolfM

    Triumph

    Yeah, yeah. Just like a hungry wolf looking for snacks. Small price to pay to work with such a fun editor. I love all the speculation too.
  17. WolfM

    Triumph

    Levi is such a lovable guy. I can't figure why my readers have it out for the guy.
  18. WolfM

    Tease

    Could be right, could be wrong, I'm not telling.
  19. WolfM

    Journal 20

    Thank you, Quixo. I've thought about expanding on their relationship, but while I was writing this and after. I doubt it will happen. Chris found his happiness and I'd kind of rather leave it up to peoples imagination how they used those leather scented candles and the handcuffs. Chris having his exile lifted is only mentioned in this last chapter as a result of Ethan and Aiden inviting him and Rory to the wedding.
  20. WolfM

    Journal 11

    Something no one wanted to talk about or admit to since it chipped away at their images as strong young wolves and men. Chris had to finally admit it so it no longer held power over him.
  21. WolfM

    Triumph

    Life as a predator. You try to remain at the top of the food chain so you don't end up becoming prey. But it's not always clear when you're on top who is hunting with you or hunting you.
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    Triumph

    I really enjoy reading these.
  23. WolfM

    Triumph

    <quietly whistles while reviewing the next chapter>
  24. WolfM

    Triumph

    Thank you, Dez. So, I shouldn't take next week off on posting?
  25. WolfM

    Triumph

    Thank you, 1brok. Very well put.
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