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Yeah, yeah, yeah... I was exhausted when I put that there. lol. Hugz my friend.
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Well known as a bully and antagonist by his peers, his arrogance is a thing of legend and scorn at the annual Congress of Alphas. Overconfidence in his own greatness led the beat down of his life. Self reflection takes him on a journey of how the unlikely wolf eventually became the alpha.
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Dorian Jackman was brooding in his room at the Wolfridge Chateau. He contemplated the fight he had with one of the alpha designates of the Parker Valley Wolf Pack. It should have been an easy victory, but turned out to be the second time since arriving at the annual Congress of Alphas a member of that delegation handed him his ass and forced him to yield. First, he embarrassed himself when he mouthed off to their Alpha, John Stockdale, at the welcome reception. Being slammed to the floor with a
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Dark columns soar skyward, Blocking out the late evening sun. Ash dances through the air; An eerie summertime blizzard. Fire Lightning flashes, Illuminating the dark clouds. An ominous warning, Of the nightmare that approaches. Fire burns to the north, As more smoke billows to the south. The eastern sky glows red, And the ocean is at our back. If you feel so inclined, please consider donating to the Australian Red Cross to
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Through smoke and heat we hold the line No concept’s left that’s known as time Each day to pass is much the same An onward push to beat the flame With pick and rake in hand we go Yet one more time to fight our foe The end is not near, for this battle’s long As both warring sides are remaining strong The day is now done, we’ve given our all Collapsing on cots, some curl into balls The men try to deal in their own special way For tomorrow we’
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A brown haze surrounds Blocking sight past a few feet A dim light hovers Making the eerie sky red As I wonder what comes next The bear clings in fear Tired, thirsty, and defeated A little water And it's carried to safety One more Koala will live The fire hose sprays As roos jump towards its mist Intense heat blasts us Trying to force our retreat The roos are smarter and flee Flames begin to rise As three spinning c
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Flames and wind swirl around As the foul air tries to choke us And embers fall like rain We have passed through the Gates of Hell Tears of an angel fall Granting us a short-lived reprieve Yet our foe soon regroups As the fierce battle rages on Exhaustion reigns king here In this battlefield between worlds Yet we march on and fight To close the fiery Gates of Hell I’ve been working the fire lines in New South Wales, Australia
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Since distance prevents me from wrapping my arms around you and holding tight, I can only ask Mike to pass on my hug. You are such a wonderful person and beautifully gifted. I hope light returns to someone who always shines.
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Each additional chapter I read I'm enjoying the story all the more. Having lived in DC once and visited there many times I can see the sites mentioned and in some cases I can remember the flavor of the burgers at places like The Tomb. Even Brian is a laid back as you describe him. It's also fun to see your earlier writing style.
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I'm loving the two dads. The way they handled Rich and the mother was perfect. It's how the two men who helped me wanted to respond to me being kicked out, but unfortunately I wouldn't let them. The sting of his others actions are probably going to hit harder than anything his step-father could have done.
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I finally started reading this and have to say it is very good. I'm glad CJ's exit from the house wasn't like mine, but still a painful experience for any teenager. Thankfully he has a loving father to take him in.
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This is the perfect ending to this little jewel. Now I need to go and start reading the series from the start.
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Another great chapter. I could hear my mate's voice calling it a skirt and purse each time CJ said it I'd love to catch a wave there someday.
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This was wonderful with the little demon meeting all her cousins. Even with the mum problems it sounds like a fun time.
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Thanks, Bard The trial really wasn't needed, but John wanted his son's crimes made public. He wanted nothing hidden or swept under the carpet before he killed Michael.
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Thank you, Bard. This was truly a fun battle to write. Trying to incorporate both aspects of Ethan and Aiden, plus animal and human bodied attackers allowed my imagination to run wild. Having Ethan's wolf take control of the elements during the fight while Aiden's experience allowed his human and wolf mind to share the gifts. Any gang members who didn't surrender probably thought they were going to die anyways so may as well try to take someone with them.
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Thank you, Bard The fireball is the big question. The solaris appear to revere the Elementals even more than the wolves. Seeing Ethan who he is made Gaelen's decision easier.
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Good thoughts on possible outcomes. And yes, JP would like to be able to wash his hands of the entire incident. Probably from meeting Michael as well.
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Thanks, Bard. LOL, yeah I like sci-fi and it worked well to give them two men a rapport.
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When I originally wrote this everyone expected Ethan would be the one missing. Definitely bad news for Aiden. No matter if they found anything useful or not, men searching the alpha's home were ultimately captured before they could make their escape.
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I'm new to the CJ/OZ saga, but just knowing the basics of who they are it's easy to follow. This is a great start to the story. I definitely need to read the rest from the start.
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The party was a fun scene to fix and add to during the rewrite. I'm glad you read it first this way instead or the original. As for the trio's fun in bed, I did think about giving them a hot scene, but decided to let the reader fill in the blanks on that. The chapter was already long enough. To do it properly would have added way too much.
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Ethan's wolf was too excited and needed to mark what was theirs. That not so little early morning snack just made the wolf want more
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Thank you, Bard. This was one of those chapters were it was going to have only one focus. While I have a lot of favorite spots in this story, Ethan's first shift was a major high point I wanted since I wrote the first sentence in chapter 1. There was no better way for his full elemental abilities to manifest than during the shift when everything in his body was uncontrolled The big cat just wants to show that he's top dog in that pairing. lol
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I think this was the most heavily rewritten chapter in the book. The entire first scene with the feral started out as three maybe four sentences that closely matched the opening to the previous chapter. When I caught the duplication I decided to have some fun with it, much to my editor's horror. The results worked and gave more depth to this violent feral. Mary is Mary The type of happy woman even I wished I could have had as a mother. Like I've said before, sex isn't a taboo in the lycan world and since she didn't have any daughters, Casey gets to be as close as it gets. lol
