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Thank you Mike

Thank you AC I'm getting a little more comfortable with poetry even though I know I still have a lot to learn.

Thanks molly

Thank you Parker. For something that last 6 to 8 seconds depending on the rodeo, it can feel like an eternity.

Thank you Parker

I watch the gentle glow of blue As it arcs across your skin; The smile and soft moans of pleasure Let me know what world you’re now in. The color of the wand does change, Seeming to reflect your own joy. The spark of wonder fills your eyes As we try out your new toy. The current that flows between us Is more than just the wand. For a Dom and sub to really spark There must be a trusting bond.

This is disturbingly well written. Every aspect of it is so vivid. The realization that Everything had been taken from him. He'd been gang raped, robbed, and even videoed for the whole world to see. Unless the roommate had already made arrangements to move elsewhere, I guess he didn't care if his dorm suite was totally trashed. Personally I'd have wanted to shower knowing everything I was covered with, but can understand getting dressed, investigating, and upon hearing the new king of the jungle awakening, wanting to flee. The feeling of knowing you aren't strong enough to fight the person that already took everything including your illusion of yourself, all he could do is run.

You created one scary monster of a person. The drug induced reflection is disturbing. The way he caught and destroyed people for profit is reprehensible. The fact that he wanted to recapture Marc when he was putting his life back together along with the guy that Marc was with shows that there is no soul. Part of me wants to think he deserved was he got during the party, but having been unwillingly tied up myself, I just can't. He does deserve to be punished though. I saw what some people thought about the last guy calling the scene "Sick". I'm not overly convinced that he was saying it in a negative way. Possibly like someone would call a tricked out car sick he might have been taking in the scene thinking it was hot. I've heard similar comments in my background. The fact that guy was last and untied the gang raped prey, he had to have been told to release him, at least in my mind, other why would care about releasing the party favor at the party he attended.

Rough chapter, but like the previous ones, extremely well done. So the roommate is helping Ted out by getting belts to tie the new prey down, enjoying a blowjob during a rape and not seeming to care what's happening to the guy he lives with. Ted's statement about "you fucked with the wrong people" seems like it has to mean something. It sounds more and more like someone was setup big time.

Ted knew what was going to happen and knew it had been done before. Was he on the hunt for the predator? Since Ted was the target of being drugged and raped while unconscious it does seem fair that he returned the favor. Would the predator have been any less brutal on his victim? This was very well done.

This is a wonderful start. The scene is described so well. It seems the predator forgot the rules of the wild; stick to your regular prey, don't be over confident in your own superiority on the food chain and never turn your back on your drink, let alone your prey. A cocky attitude makes it easy for another predator to go for the kill.

I brutally harsh story that is one of the best I've run across on GA. Beautifully told and difficult to put down. Those late nights of reading "just one more chapter before bed" were well worth it and I know I'll read this again and again.

This was a beautiful and perfect ending to the story. The only thing that makes me sad now that I've finally finished this is that it's over; at least until I start from the beginning and read it all again. I wish all the Andy's of the world could have a happy ending like this. At the very least, it gives hope that it is possible. Thank you for writing this!!

This was such a beautiful chapter. The wedding was perfect. Andy's Grandmother gave him a great present by not only being there, but telling him that the man that tortured him as well as the man that raped him were not his family. The bells being rung at other churches around town was a perfect touch.

Congratulations Parker. This is most definitely deserved!!

It's not a good feeling

The violence in the start of this book made it so I could only handle reading one or two chapters at a time. Since the Whitley farm, I've been binge reading with last night not being able to stop. Finishing one chapter and thinking, "oh, just one more before bed." So worth only a couple hours sleep before getting up for work to reach the point I have. The Stevenson's are such a wonderful family. I would have loved to have ended up with people like them after all the nights I slept rough. Fears of meeting people like the ones from FPS on here kept me living the way I did.

I've felt like this in a crowd more times than I can count. Some days I still feel like this.

This is beautiful, tim!!!

The last couple chapters since Eustace came into Eric's life have been great. It's wonderful to see him with a roof over his head, even if he's hiding in the barn, getting at least a meal a day for a change and some positive encouragement. Hoping things don't go badly with Toby. I glad I picked up reading this again, it's a reminder of what a talented author you are.

Thank you Tony.

I really enjoy running. It's not quite as fun without my dog at my side.

The feel of the pavement under my shoes, And the salt air of the ocean breeze on my face; As the steady cadence of my stride, And the even breaths of rhythmic breathing, Block out all but my focus on the next step. With each foot that takes me forward, The feet become yards that quickly turn into miles, And those miles let the relentless sun beats down on me; Burning away anxiety as it heats my bare skin to a glistening glow, While the breeze