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“............really sorry...............Greg...................not like that....................very angry........................Gregory’s friend................. Nick?” “What? Oh, sorry Darlene. I was a bit spaced out there. What were you saying?” “I was just saying that we’re sorry about what happened. Nick, you look a little pale, are you okay?” “Um, yeah, I’m just...um....” “Are you mad at Greg and me? I wouldn’t blame you if you were.” “No, not at all, Darlene. I’m just feeling
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Hi Dig, Thanks so much for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Rob and Jerome make appearances in my next story 'Special Forces.' It was very nice--and encouraging--to hear from you!
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I'm really hoping that Ben can be extracted from the terrible situation in which he's found himself. Is there hope for an addict who had become addicted against his will? Your writing in this chapter was very compelling. Thank you!
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Yes, ignorance is something we all live with and it's going to be a reality for this family. I don't want to see Jorge hurt any more than Sam does, but can we protect him from everything? Probably not I'm hoping Nick with ease up a bit on Sam, but just what is going through Nick's head?
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Thanks for the kind words! They mean a lot to me. I'll explain what's happening to Nick in the next chapter. Let's just hope he doesn't speak before he thinks and hurts Sam's feelings! As to homophobia and xenophobia, Sam's not always going to be able to protect Jorge, but what he can do, together with Nick, is provide a loving home that will give Jorge the confidence to overcome prejudice. I hope
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I woke up feeling Sam’s warm body spooned against my back. His hard cock was nestled in the crack of my ass. Perhaps he was having a good dream because, even in sleep, he was humping me and making little moaning sounds. I knew he was asleep by his breathing, but damn, whatever he was doing back there felt mighty good. Then the memories of the night before came flooding back. Did I really kill Tony? Yes, I remembered quite clearly pulling the trigger and seeing his brains fly out. Perhaps
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I'm still enjoying this story very much! Daniel is so sweet and Rayn is so loving. Very nice. I hope the future bodes well for them. Can hardly wait for the next chapter
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The narrative is moving along beautifully, Ron. Nice to see Casey starting to "trust" again! Thanks for sharing this wonderful story!
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Chapter 9 Surfing the Waves
Zenith commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 9 Surfing the Waves
Great chapter. I love the gradual building trust between Craig and Jared. Two steps forward, one step back. Looking forward to the next chapter, and the next.... -
A well written 'safe' scene. Really enjoyed the romantic touch at the end too
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Looking forward to hearing more of Devin's college adventures. Hot J/O scene, by the way
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"Life Doesn't Have to be Perfect ..."
Zenith commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in "Life Doesn't Have to be Perfect ..."
Beautiful Robert. Romance with a capital R. So heartwarming to hear their honesty. You made my day . Z -
Thanks for your reviews Gary. This is a fun story to narrate. I really appreciate the feedback from a writer of your calibre--in fact, I'm letting it go to my head. Ha ha
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Thanks so much. Glad you liked it. It certainly was challenging and fun to write. Don't forget I'd set Nick up all along as not having any qualms about what Sam did in the SEALs and afterwards, so to me it was a logical step to have Nick react with deadly force when he had to....
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Yeah, I thought I'd bring back Tony one more time. Notice it was the Solanetti family that had taken over the San Diego operation. I'll explain in the next chapter Sam and Nick's theory of why Tony came to be where he was
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Robert, how kind of you to give me some positive feedback! I had a lot of fun writing that chapter. My main problem was figuring out a way Sam could get into trouble so Nick could rescue him. I think I figured it out somewhat logically in the end
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Thanks for the feedback! Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Sam and Nick talk about what happened in the next chapter, so you'll get to see what sort of an effect this little adventure had on Nick
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Sam shot out the light over Aguilar’s warehouse entry door with his silenced Glock 9mm just as the man stepped out. He was shocked by the sudden darkness and rain of glass and quickly stepped back into the open doorway. Sandy reached the entry in time to stop the door from closing and shoved Aguilar hard into the building. Sam reached the door seconds later and they let it close and lock behind them. Both men had guns drawn and wore stocking masks. “Who the fuck are you?” yelled Aguilar. “
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A very erotic chapter. Well written--I really felt like I was there, adding voyeurism to the mix Thanks for the tutorial on "proper" BSDM too! Z
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Thanks CHS. I'll get back to the family story after the next chapter. Thanks so much for hanging in there and providing reviews! Z
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Sam felt like shit for scaring Jorge. How the hell was he going to win back the little guy's trust? “Maybe I should stay home from work today. You know, to make amends....” “You can’t, Sam. You’ve got that meeting first thing with those guys from that big yacht company. That contract is really important. And you’re the best salesman that Gary has. Jorge needs to learn that your coming and going is a normal part of life.” “Yeah, you’re right. How about if you drive me to work? Then Jor
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Just saw this review, CHS. Thank you very much for posting it.
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Thanks for taking the time from your writing to read my story! Nice to hear from you.
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Yes, little kids are aware of death, but they don't have the logical understanding that adults have. Nick seems to have a more intuitive grasp of this than Sam does--you'll see how that rolls out in the next chapter As far as the human smuggling investigation goes, I'll try not to make it too complicated. This is, after all, a love story, not a murder mystery, so I'll make it short and sweet. Then I want to address another topic. Thank you for the review. It is much appreciated.
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Sam and Sandy aren't above taking the law into their own hands...so we'll see where that leads. Yes, Jorge will take some work. He's got to work through his grief, and so far that hasn't been addressed. Thanks for the kind words!
