Jeff Burton

Maybe I should try that. I mean come on with my ideas it'd be something.

have a good vacation!

Still working on it man, IRL has been getting in my way and time ticks faster than I like at this point. To me it was yesterday when I posted this lol.

Yeah I know. I was thinking about this the other day, I even had Chris in my head knocking from the inside saying something along the lines of "HELLO IM STILL IN LIMBO HERE?!" I need to do something with this one.

Walter started out has a random background character stuck in a meeting, but as I fine tuned the plot and deleted some things added more things then spun it around on a spin cycle yeah not so much background anymore. 😂 Is he a friend? A Foe? Or a convenient scape goat, only time will tell.

Now that I’ve slept on it and read the feedback I think this choice was the best that could be made. There are so many secrets in this story and trying to not just give them away is hard.

Oooh that could be foreshadowing or a happy accident 😂

Trust me I gave great consideration to this idea as well. We still know next to nothing about Reed either and Josh is in the same boat with you on believing any of that. It’s going to be an interesting road.

Yeah sorry it took a minute to beat out of my brain 😂

This is pretty much it right here. This chapter is a lynch pin, it’s the one that I had to make a choice in which way this was all going to go. i still have a couple of major decisions to go but I can tell you this story is probably getting split into two stories and I’ve already made the preparations for it. This story obviously book one starts asking all the questions but two has all the answers. I have one major plot line to close with this story and funny enough it isn’t Josh’s. But the close of that line has a fallout which we get to explore in the next one. This story was way too complex for one story anyway without getting lost in what’s going on lol.

I’ve been watching a lot of murder mysteries lately and apparently there is lol

The void was familiar; the darkness brought a strange kind of comfort. Peace folded around consciousness like a lover’s embrace, soft and patient. This time the confusion didn’t linger—awareness of self settled more easily. I didn’t have to run the old, frantic checklist to find out where I was. I was with myself again, standing in that thin space between who I’d become and who I used to be. The fog that guarded the darkness was there too—the physical shape of the barrier that kept memories

I said it to you before, the first time I read it and I'll say it again. This is my favorite chapter, the car totally needed to come back. I have fond memories of a lot of cars and if I could have any of them back it would be one of my dad's.

This was a great chapter. I know we've mainly been seeing Nick grow and develop but it's been a real journey for Jack too. This is evolving how I hoped it would, and the addition of Christian and Jonah was a real treat. Sometimes family is more than blood, and watching the evolution between Nick, Jack, Christian and Jonah has been amazing.

Hah I should post that short I did with one of @Topher Lydon's characters from one of his stories for prompt #309, if that's what you meant by that. He said I could use it whenever I wanted so I wrote a short brief of the two of us having a conversation just to see if I could write a character that wasn't my own. It got real, very quickly, and crazily in character.