Jeff Burton

GOOD JOB!

The comments section sure as hell can’t. If the site goes down at some point at least we’ll know why. Lmfao.

Oh now you wanna be that way, where the hell was this @Jason Rimbaud 2 chapters ago when you where claiming to “be nice” it’s the Christmas party hangover isn’t it?

You’ve got me dying over here. I’m seriously about to grab a crucifix and a rosary and pray the sin away, and I’m gayer than Liberace bare-backing on a rainbow.

I really need to watch this show lmfao.

Jesus Christ. 😂

With that being said. MERRY CHRISTMAS @Krista

@Okiegrad @Jason Rimbaud you guys aren’t pulling any punches this time around. I can’t read any of this without whispering “poor Krista.” 😂

I’m just waiting for the real life aspect of this. Your husband: “Why is your face like that?” You: “You don’t want to know.”

You really opened the door on this one. someone random in the comments: “Yeah Joel’s back door!” @Krista dear you knew this was going to happen when you posted this chapter right? Please tell me you did. 😂😂😂

Lmfao. I knew it! Poor Krista, she’s getting that education she probably could have done without. 😂

It’s a new one. You know for my CSW (Can’t stop Writing) it’ll burn itself out after chapter 3 so I can work on the other things. And to be honest he actually did make a fair argument in favor of. Or at least I thought so, or at least it’s the argument I would have used.

In Texas football isn’t just a game, it’s a legacy. Jason Whitaker never planned on coming back. Small, fast, and done proving himself, he’s content keeping it simple. But when he’s pulled back onto the field, new rivalries and uncertain questions surface. Tyler Harlan has trained for this season his whole life. Quarterback. Future Varsity Captain. The one everyone believes in. What no one sees is the pressure cracking beneath him. As a small town chases an unexpected season, two boys collide under stadium lights, family expectations, and a confused tension neither can outrun.

If that word ever makes it to the word of the day I'm linking it just like that in the comments.

Hahahahahahaha.

It's going to be a short round of comments on this chapter then 😂

You're incorrigible. Here's the link so you can look that word up: https://www.google.com/search?q=incorrigible Yes, I'm saucy right now. I'm in the middle of a character arguing why he wants sauce on a steak and it's got me fired up.

Here is my live tweet style commentary from this chapter: Poor Lacey, movie night? Now? No. He's going to do something filthy with Davin. Christ, the parents really do watch those cameras like hawks. If you cared so mucha bout the house why don't you, I don't know actually spend time there. Krista, you're such a bitch to Joel, seriously? "Pizza's here!" I fucking died laughing. So so cruel. You can't just wind a guy up then shut him off, it damages the equipment. Seriously Davin? You're going to make him wait while you eat? Joel I wouldn't be half naked anywhere outside of Davin's room. C A M E R A'S COULD BE ANYWHERE! Aww...Davin's beautiful. Oh...A shower scene, wonder where that idea came from... Damn Joel, someones a little thirsty for the D. Guess you don't have a problem with being gay anymore lmao. Jesus Davin you're worse than Joel. Just go ahead and shove it in why don't you. Welp guess we found out who the bottom is going to be, I'm somehow not surprised. Overall this was probably the best take at first time totally awkward attempt at sex between boys I've read in a long time. It seriously made me laugh/squeal/cringe all at the same time. To them I'm sure it was magical, but damn was it awkward lmao. So of course I'm going to do it way worse eventually when I can get over my prude ass and actually write something half ass filthy without feeling guilty about it.

Yeah I was wondering if anyone else was going to think that as well. Usually when an infiltration happens you think its a bad guy working as a good guy, but in this case its the system itself. Did Cerberus hallucinate? Or did someone actually convince it to do what it did. As for what it's capable of, can it launch missiles, right now definitely not. Half it's system is still under encryption and what it can do is very limited. It probably could fake military orders and send them afield if it was programmed to do so but I doubt that it is lol. It was just supposed to be the all seeing eye on the intelligence arms, just a semi automated system that was fed data, and create reports based on that data basically the analysts job. It was mainly designed to help the analysts by prioritizing the analyst work load, so stuff didn't fall through the cracks. As for the memory trigger that's actually a good question. Would that be enough to release the barrier that's keeping him from himself. Could both co-exist or does one have to go, it's a crazy thought experiment. As for will Cerberus decide to kill again thats also a great question. Will have to wait to find out!

I love how people just dont trust some of my characters in various stories no matter if they're the bad guy or not. It makes me feel like I am adding the right amount of misdirection and confusion in to keep people guessing. And you bet that phone call Cassandra made was to Walter, he's the shadow that knows all the secrets even when leadership is behind. And a bulletproof chase vehicle? Why on earth would someone suggest such a thing. Either its cautionary or someone expects something no one else does, or it's both. Only time will tell.

Oh most definitely traumatic. he doesn't feel anything in regards to that stuff because he has no memory of everything that came before it. Once that memory hits it could be shattering.

Yeah that's going to be interesting. 😂

But but but our poor over taxed 16 year old is the savior of the universe!

A web full of lies and deceit. Or is it? lol

Yeah Josh still has a long way to go to figuring himself out. Cutting it into two lets me complete this one so it’s off my list so I can do a better plot job on the second one