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Yeah it ended up being a little longer then I intended 😂
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Thanks I appreciate that. I was trying to go for one of those old noir narrations, mixed with a bit of how they did Dragnet, obviously with a snarky twist. Despite my full plate I think this is a good series to come back too and I already had some stuff mapped out. I really do enjoy police procedurals and getting the chance to write one was hard to pass up.
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A Wizard and a Wet Sock
Jeff Burton commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in A Wizard and a Wet Sock
These two are actually related. I mean who just hooks up with a total stranger because his eyes glow right? Theres definitely more to that story. -
A Wizard and a Wet Sock
Jeff Burton commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in A Wizard and a Wet Sock
I’ve actually given that first part a lot of thought but I think Morgan is pretty fluid (in more than one way lol) But I don’t think you see how much until the end. -
A Wizard and a Wet Sock
Jeff Burton commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in A Wizard and a Wet Sock
Thanks I’ve actually got a couple of adventure and discovery stories with romance coming in 2026. I’m trying to branch out. 😂 -
A Wizard and a Wet Sock
Jeff Burton commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in A Wizard and a Wet Sock
Of course damn near everything I write has that smooching scene eventually. 😂 -
He couldn’t believe it. The thing he’d been chasing through the slow, grinding march of centuries was right there on the telly, held up like some lucky sod’s lottery ticket. Dr Tim Reeves — all eager grin and fogging glasses — was brushing mud off it with the reverence of a man who thought he’d found the Holy Grail. The camera zoomed in as he thumbed one of the runes; it depressed properly, with that soft mechanical click Morgan hadn’t heard in fifteen hundred years, then sprang back like i
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It was lmao. And my stupid self hit the quote button and bam.
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Prompt Team Genre Event - *Now Live!*
Jeff Burton commented on Valkyrie's blog entry in Writing World
It truly is a community effort sometimes. lol- 18 comments
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I always found that funny with google, because they have what you just said, yet when you do a google search for something, bad words be damned and you get search results you didn't intend on. Hypocrites lol.
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I just posted a reply to a comment on one of my stories and it flagged with something I've never seen before. - "This comment is awaiting approval by a moderator." Am I in trouble? 😂 I can send a screen shot plus link if needed. This is new and I'm not sure what I did to trigger it.
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A Catholic Gay Boy’s Guide to Emotional and Eternal Limbo
Jeff Burton commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in A Catholic Gay Boy’s Guide to Emotional and Eternal Limbo
At some point soon dad is going to have a dad moment with Sky and I think some of that family dynamic will be explained sort of. I do need to rock the boat a little bit because Sky, nor his mother is going to be happy for long unless they're yelling at each other. lmao -
Danny will be coming back eventually, I’ll slide him in between things when I can. My plate is already full as it is, the event just gave me an excuse and a nudge to do it lol
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Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
Jeff Burton commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Rubdown
I don’t know why this line: sticks with me so much but damn 😂. This is why I don’t write spicy stuff because I don’t know if I can handle someone like Krista reading it then commenting on it with the word “filthy” in it anywhere. Because it would most definitely be full of filth and I’d probably be embarrassed by it lmao. But I’m glad you can write it because that’s where these boys were headed since neither really have any kind of self control anyway. Lord have mercy where’s the sandalwood because again I just can’t right now. -
Frosted Hearts: The Pool
Jeff Burton commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Pool
I hope the ER visit wasn’t serious and my god you just can’t let SANDLEWOOD go can you! 😂. Oh dearest me I just can’t right now. Im going to put some sandlewood in the diffuser while I think about all of this. I just can’t with you right now 😂 -
My Idiotic Lone Ranger
Jeff Burton commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in My Idiotic Lone Ranger
I’m not sure what the hell I just read but I often have that feeling when I read anything @Lee Wilson does for an event. 😂 But. Rhinestone cowboy on a centaur? Someone has to have musical number for it right? -
This is a totally new piece from a long time author as she steps out of her comfort zone with not only a new genre but a complete change in narrative style than what she’s known for. But don’t let that put you off from reading this story. The two main characters Nicholas and Noah really come off the page, as the author maintains her ability to weave words into one hell of a setting. While the tale may end here, I hope this is a first of many more great things from this Signature Author.
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I honestly don’t know what to say. Im over here trying to spread my wings into third person narrative and see that my first person style is rubbing off on you and damn what an attempt. Im torn between believing Nick just died, or if your going to pull your MO of “using an event to start a new novel” but I can smell the definite end to this but wish it wasn’t so. Although if Nick didn’t die and there is another 300k masterpiece born of out of this I won’t be upset. 😂 This is one hell of a piece of writing and yeah I can tell it’s outside of your comfort zone but you grabbed onto it and went full throttle all the way to the end. If this is a glimmer into the alternative type of love stories you want to do I’m on board 100%, and it makes me wanna join in. Great job @Krista. Perfection as always. ❤️
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That’s a good question as I just told someone in PM just now, I had this character on the back burner for a while now because I kinda wanted to do an episodic series with it, with an overall plot like, what happens to the almost disgraced Captain, new partner vibes. I don’t think I’ll end up doing any 20 chapter long mysteries with this guy but it’s a step in the water to figure out what I can do with him. So I’m thinking 1 to 5 chapter novellas maybe with that television show style pacing. Yeah the first episode is a little too neat but I was on a time crunch to get it done so there was some convenience there. I do love the character snark though and think there’s a lot of fun to be had with Danny’s work life his personal life and his boss. She is a monumental bitch after all 😂
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Prompt Team Genre Event - *Now Live!*
Jeff Burton commented on Valkyrie's blog entry in Writing World
Yeah thanks Val, I’m glad I was able to deliver this time 😂- 18 comments
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Frosted Hearts: The Pool
Jeff Burton commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Pool
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Prompt Team Genre Event - *Now Live!*
Jeff Burton commented on Valkyrie's blog entry in Writing World
Yay! They’re finally live. I can’t wait too read the entries and I had fun with mine so I hope everyone enjoys it!- 18 comments
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A Catholic Gay Boy’s Guide to Emotional and Eternal Limbo
Jeff Burton commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in A Catholic Gay Boy’s Guide to Emotional and Eternal Limbo
Hahahaha we seldom ever practice what we preach which is why hot messes like this exist to begin with. -
A Catholic Gay Boy’s Guide to Emotional and Eternal Limbo
Jeff Burton commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in A Catholic Gay Boy’s Guide to Emotional and Eternal Limbo
A lot to unpack here… So Deborah has always been intended to be a little more complex than she seems. And while it may seem a little unrealistic that she flips like a switch but it’s intended as this whole story has been a weird little satire. There has always been a little bit of an odd love between mother and son, which is why they can argue with each other without either of them being nasty about it. What some people would call “trauma” id just call an interesting relationship dynamic since Sky doesn’t really seem to be affected by his mother’s antics, he’s used to them, expects them and probably would think something was truly wrong if they weren’t there. She chilled out a bit in this chapter and that chill is going to continue for a while. They will of course continue sniping at each other in their own ways, but it’s just how their relationship works. I actually do like Deborah and I like writing her mood swings, because it’s odd to have an accepting character, because at this point the only thing she’s accepting is “this is the way it is just go with it.” Plus I’m going to need her later and you’ll see why eventually. Yeah I missed a Chuck opportunity in this chapter and he’s missing from the next one as well but should appear in 9 onwards. I kinda focused on moving things along last chapter, this chapter and the next one. Gabriel has been my too-good-to-be-true chess piece in all of this and I’m playing the board with him. Sometimes in physics you need an outside force to perturb the gravitational balance of objects that just won’t move the way you want them too, or the way they need them too so yeah…. I do like him as a character even if half the readership thinks he’s secretly the villain in all of this lol. Then we get to Ryan. He is totally the unwilling participant in all of this, he’s friends with nobody in this little fellowship and getting through those walls isn’t going to be easy. But the thing about walls is if the foundation is weak enough they’ll come down on their own. Im more worried about what happens when Ryan finally cracks because he’s got a reputation, friends, and a football team that thinks he’s one thing when really he’s not. -
They say life’s a bitch, then you die. Trust me—sometimes there are things worse than being dead. As far as my employer, the LAPD, was concerned, I died about a month and a half ago. All because of an accidental personal encounter with the wrong captain’s son. Sure, he was in his early thirties, a man—or well, sort of a man—in his own right. But he was lonely, going through a nasty divorce, and decided he wanted some company. He was good-looking, shy, almost naïve. Honestly, it was kind of
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