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Jeff Burton

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  1. Jeff Burton

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    The school douche is a book 2 event. If I kept this one story we wouldn’t even begin to touch on that till chapter 20 something 😂 And if by chimera you mean Cerberus, it was probably both yet something else as well. Walter my walking repository of knowledge. The guy that’s going to have to clean all of this up once it’s over so everyone is happy. I don’t envy the guy at all. You’ll see more of him.
  2. Jeff Burton

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    Josh’s relationship with his parents started as something different but grew as he did. Their sacrifice as morbid as it was, was meant to protect him. To die in that act of protection stuck with me as I wrote this, so yeah the three of them were absolute. For your two sides question that was always meant for book 2. Let’s hope I write it lmao. Next chapter is pretty much done yall will have it in a day or so when I finish polishing it and decide how I want to handle a certain conversation that happens in it.
  3. Jeff Burton

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    The mental health part is a good catch, you’ll see some of that in the next chapter id say more but it would ruin it for you lol. The two Josh’s while being the same body seemingly developed way different. Our Josh was born completely without context so he’s literally winging it the best he can. If you remember he flat out told his original self that he’s going to be bumbling forward his way if the original can’t take long term control and the original guy just accepted it. I think really our friend just went quiet because he did too much and some of it on his own after putting our Josh to sleep so he just went back to where he was supposed to be to let that mental aberration calm down a little. Next chapter though you’ll see.
  4. Jeff Burton

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    Thanks. I think if I’m allowed to take a small break without worrying about “posting the next chapter” I’ll be allowed to work on it in peace in the background. Stuff like that matters when your focus is razor thin.
  5. Jeff Burton

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    The family dynamic has been building since that first meeting. Outwardly he’s a calm quiet soul that that just fits like a puzzle piece. Eleanore may or may not ever come around, she may never apologize directly and instead just use money to make the problem go away. You’ll see this answered in the first act of chapter 17. As for Walter he’ll probably facepalm when he actually sees it.
  6. Jeff Burton

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    Thanks I appreciate it. I tried to keep “Josh” in character as much as possible during the getaway. He’s just a badass like that, even if he can’t remember being one. Oof sixteen more chapters. That’s totally book 2 if I can make it happen. 😂
  7. Jeff Burton

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    Yeah having it slammed back into him seemed like a better idea. Oh you want the passkey? Or is it a filename. 😶
  8. Jeff Burton

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    You're welcome thanks for reading!
  9. Jeff Burton

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    Oof that last question.....
  10. Jeff Burton

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    Your welcome. I'm actually glad I rewrote this. Now I gotta touch up 17 to match it lmao.
  11. This was terribly cute to the point I wish I liked anime better. You guys did a great job in putting this together and I'm amazed nothing terrible happened because that's so off brand for @Lee Wilson being involved lol. Feel free to collab on a few more stories, hint hint.
  12. Jeff Burton

    Encrypted

    I had expected a return to the void once things calmed down. To be honest, I was starting to get used to finding myself there—with him. The other me. That place that felt special to the both of us. But he had been silent since the escape from the kidnappers, and the silence bothered me more than his presence ever had. I woke twice during the night from completely dreamless sleep, no images, no echoes—just awareness snapping back on. Each time, there was a sharp edge of anticipation I c
  13. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 12

    Ouch. That's absolutely nuts.
  14. I swore I replied to this but guess I didn't. No idea what the original reply was so pretend this one was some kind of witty retort.
  15. Jeff Burton

    Unseen Hands

    My apologies for missing some marks on this I had hoped to have the three final chapters done by christmas lol totally didn't happen. Seasonal depression is a bitch. Anyway, I ended up rewriting chapter 16, chapter 17 is done and 18 is an epilogue of sorts. Main reason why I'm ending it here is because it closes one of the sub plots (turns out it was a major plot point), and plus I need to let this breathe for a while before I even attempt at starting book 2. I'm not going to lie, book 2 may take a while. It may not even happen, it's totally up to the mood of a muse I have no control over under the best of times. But I left some stuff at the end of this book that would answer a few of y'alls most pressing questions just in case book 2 never comes. I'll have more to say about this story in my comments on the last chapter, but thanks for hanging in there with me.
  16. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 12

    Don't bother with Solar Panels, they'll figure out a way to charge you for the sunlight. (in kilowatt hours of course)
  17. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 12

    I've dealt with worse than Ben. I could take 'em.
  18. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 30

    And the twist? It’s another Tempton transfer: Rodney. 😉
  19. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 30

    Jaxton and the Great Rod of Humility.
  20. Oh my I could never 😂. Self confidence left the building a long time ago lol
  21. I was once on track to be one. I used to be so sly, so slick with my manipulations. Dunno what dark magic it was exactly but it seemed to work on straight dudes more often then not. Then my self esteem crashed and took the magic with it. There have been a couple of times in recent memory when there were whispers of it. Curious looks, a soft touch as a gesture while talking to complete strangers. But it feels dangerous now. Dunno.
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