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Jeff Burton

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  1. I'll try to make everyone not wait too long, but I do need to slip in a couple chapters of Encrypted before I get lynched. And there's still another chapter of this coming before the homecoming chapter.
  2. Bad penny, I like that one. Yeah we'll see what happens when the train wreck arrives as it's station!
  3. Starting with Gabriel, I always have one of those self sacrificing dudes that end up in my stories. I mean someone has to fall on the sword and be there. Ryan is most definitely stuck in his own head, and that 'hard straight boy' crap is going to end up doing more damage in the end.
  4. He actually really is. There was a real opportunity that could have been half assed resolved, I mean Sky could have said his piece, and if Ryan was still mad afterwards, then fine. Sky was actually prepared for that, it's something Father Matthew had told him in the last chapter. But no here we are, and yes Sky is beating himself up something he has no control over, it's wisdom he could use if only someone would give it to him lol.
  5. I'm sitting here snickering because it's going to be a fucking train wreck of epic proportions. Yep, it's the start of the buildup.
  6. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 27

    Let's see if I can get that ONE story people are waiting for finally the Christmas chapter I've been dodging for a couple of months. 10 days? I might be a day late.
  7. Talking to Ryan Fucking McConnell had been my logical next step. That night, after my inspiring therapy session with Father Matthew—who probably added me to his personal prayer list—I decided I’d either catch Ryan alone at school or corner him during tutoring. I mean, he was going to show up again, right? Even though my mother had literally banished him from the premises proclaiming, “Skylar needs to be tutored in the ways of the Lord!”—surely, he’d come back once the holy water dried?
  8. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 27

    I knew it would come eventually! 😂
  9. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 27

    Yeah I know what you want, and I'm actually working on that right now:
  10. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 27

    just lmfao. Some of us are still appropriately fearful of her like we should be. Hahahaha, who won again? 😂 Even the forum software knows the truth! Exactly.
  11. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 27

    I really shouldn't because if I do everyone will suddenly feel empathy to Jaxton and that just can't happen lmao. I'm known for my tragic back stories, I can make almost any villain look like he needs a redemption arc. I did just get my prompt event finally in the system, and link sent to the powers that be so yay go me! I am writing though! Just on the stuff I actually need to get done. 😂
  12. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 27

    As soon as I hit submit the power gods heard my cry and I was basked with 21sr electricity once again lmfao.
  13. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 27

    Again you sir are correct. Unfortunately forty minutes ago the neighborhood decided it needed a power outage because having just a cold day wasn’t good enough. I’m eyeing my 68% battery level which ones going to win first, the outage or my resolve for some kind of heat 😂 I had to stop myself before I ended up writing Jaxton on my iPad which has even less battery.
  14. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 27

    Oh this is good and I’m fighting the urge to turn this into an outright competition in the comments. Part of me is screaming “OH! OH! OH! DO COLT” then the voice smiles with a slight twist of mischief, “but do it your way.” Stuff like this is why I can’t ever complete anything lmao
  15. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 27

    Oh goodness me indeed. 😂😂 Yeah this is our blood sport over here. We don’t play. lmao I always take the kindergarten approach. You like someone? Hit them. Or let it fester silently until someone can’t take it anymore and it turns into an event. You are correct though, “the fall” is really the best part. It’s the adventure. Happily ever after is just boring maintenance, and realizing the one you love with absolutely everything you have has this one thing, this one tick that drives you absolutely insane.
  16. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 27

    Those are rookie numbers. 😂
  17. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 27

    You got this, if we need to wait we can handle it. Losing buffer is why my readers have it really been waiting months for steady flows of “encrypted” 😂
  18. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 27

    Oh they can stay straight. He just needs to learn a little humility. 😇
  19. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 27

    It’s literally a hurricane in my head. One that just doesn’t stop and keeps spinning until something pops out. I literally can’t walk to the car without some idea popping up.
  20. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 27

    That means…. 8 weeks to get through it. I don’t mean to be all maiden who throws herself out of the bell tower due to desperation but I’m not sure I can wait that long 😂
  21. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 27

    Yessir and I still intend too but right when I was going to send it I decided the beginning of chapter 1 needed around 1,000 more words I’m going to try to wrap it this afternoon. which means @Krista if you haven’t read it yet don’t you’ve got another incoming tonight 😂
  22. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 27

    See that’s what I was getting out of this chapter more than anything was the sheer growth. Yeah there were a few scuffles, Joel is going to owe Davin something nice for ruined plans, overall though this really was a great chapter, even if Joel seems a little prickly right now. Everyone who has commented definitely has valid points and I’ve read them all, so that’s why I didn’t point out the obvious in mine because it’s been said already. This chapter seriously did have a really nice vibe all the way through it. Colt going in the creek was just an added bonus 😂
  23. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 27

    I’m stuck with a mild bought of insomnia right now and I probably won’t crash till tonight so I’m going to stop scrolling and proof my prompt entry and bang out a couple chapters of the crap I’m working on.
  24. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 27

    Go look at some of cia’s event blog posts I’m definitely covered on being able to do it myself. It’s just more fun when you have a dance partner.
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