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    Chapter 1

    Jeff Burton commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 1

    You know I never thought about that. I interact with so many people on a daily basis I'm up to the thousands now, there are a few I have wondered about including this one. I'll have to revisit this idea when I get my other stories done.
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    Would you like a shovel to help dig that hole your in? 😂
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    I'm surprised I stayed out of it as long as I did to begin with.
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    Too late! #teamspike
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    Okay now you've done it. I'm switching sides. #teamspike
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    Chapter 1

    Jeff Burton commented on Albert1434's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I have to agree with what Gary said. Also I have to comment on the descriptive style of the writing in the first five paragraphs I literally heard music in my head from the titanic sound track and no it wasn't love will go on lmao (I always hear music like a soundtrack when I read stuff). I look forward to reading more of this.
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    IT WAS A FIGURE OF SPEECH. Respectfully your majesty lmao
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    Hey now. Save that tone for spike young man!
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    You missed a spot.
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    Yep totally forgot where I was for a minute. 😂
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    Hi Albert!
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    Just because french cooking is expensive doesn't mean it's good lmao
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    @Page Scrawler Hey, Pagey! Hope your day is going well!
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    Now I want to watch 'Practical Magic' which is a very lovely movie and maybe "The Craft" while not overtly scary it's got an edge to it. Although I kinda wish I had the urge to use the holiday as an excuse to dress sexy, but I honestly have no idea what that looks like anymore. 😂
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    It came so so close to happening though. The original chapter 7 ending was so sad it messed me up for a couple of days. That's why the current one seems like it cuts off and ends a few pages short of where it should be. I just couldn't do it.
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    The fact you counted has me in stiches. Now I'm not gonna lie, I did create the chapter 9 doc file but so far it's empty. The other two stories have their drafts still in progress for their next chapters, and Ben's story has me a little crazy right now because I'm 24 pages into the 1st draft and 10 pages into the second draft and I can't find a coin to flip to see which way it goes. I guess I should blow the dust off the disorganized, badly written notes I just for an outline for this story so I can remember where I was going with it lmao.
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    Yeah, I did.
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    My only comment to this is, my heart goes out to Myr and the other site administrators, having a background in development, systems administration and other tech things I know what a job this is about to be. Godspeed.
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    I definitely did. It made me think of my own time when I was young, beautiful and invincible, and of course now that I'm old ugly and broken I chide my younger self for not doing more though. I mean if we are meant to live with our regrets, let's at least make sure they're worth regretting..
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    Oh no worries 😂 It's always like that when I haven't been on for a couple of days. And you bet!
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    @Lee Wilson you blew my notifications up when you started my work so I thought I'd return the favor. Christ what a ride. I commend you on being able to write about topics I know I can't even after therapy. Well done on an amazing piece of work.
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    Well, Well, Well

    Jeff Burton commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Well, Well, Well

    Well that certainly isn't the first angry hole I've come across but definitely the funniest. Good job! lol
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