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David's early efforts really saved River after he was bitten. Jude learned nothing and brushed off River's situation. I bet if he goes after David again, more creatures will defend him. Zhiv appeared at the pig transport crash site and saved many pigs who were at risk of drowning. The people on the shore applauded his efforts. But he was filmed and an edited version was put online. Many could look at the vid. The social worker looking for Sol might connect the child in the vid as Sol and push for a search in the woods for him. Another problem--the reporter might talk to River and find out about him being attacked by more than snakes. He could write a scary article for his paper and make people worried about animal attacks, River would be reluctant to tell the reporter about the plan to rape David. I hope River finds David later and apologizes.
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I hope it does not take several chapters or until the end to find out what explains Shannon's uncharacteristic behavior towards her former lover and passionate sex partner. Trevor said it was Shannon and not a sister or copy. We can only at this point speculate why she is now acting differently. So, she acted one way in Massachusetts and a very different way in San Diego. Trevor and Brandon just completed a rousing, popular dance routine that had to be visible to everyone who wanted to see them. I can assume Shannon saw Trevor. Yet, she acted like she only noticed him when he approached her, talked to her and hugged her. She seemed to be only into her lesbian mate and full of rejection and great hostility towards Brandon and Trevor. “And ...., I’m in this club because, hello, women are my thing. My girlfriend’s more masculine than either of you three. " It seems her only clue for Trevor is when she says....“It’s all smoke and reflections. That tiny little one track mind of yours just can’t work it out though. Well, apparently you stepped through the looking glass this time. " I take it to mean she is knowingly playing a role now and had played one role with Trevor in college who did not know it at the time. For all she knows Trevor has done the same thing since he is dancing at a gay club. Is she acting in a variable sexual role-depending on her location and partner ? Is she psycho and cannot decide? Is she really a college student? Is she a full or part-time undercover legal or insurance agent conducting an investigation? Is Shannon selling her body for sex to cover her college fees and fund her dig and trip costs? Any other options ??? The next meeting of Trevor and Shannon should be very interesting.
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Travis loves Will. Nothing is shaded. Travis asked Will.....“What does it mean that I showed up in person?” he asked playfully. “It means that you must really care about me,” I said, smiling at him. “I’m way beyond that,” he said. “I think over this past week or so, I fell in love with you. They have agreed to not revisit the past for now and just enjoy each other in New York. On the plane --unless they are making love constantly-or when back in California, they can discuss Zach, what to do with him and how to handle their loving relationship.
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Tiny Hugs and A Big Decision
scrubber6620 commented on Biff Spork's story chapter in Tiny Hugs and A Big Decision
David has his real name--Vizh and the animals and creatures know it. They love him and want to be with him and Zhiv. David finds out that the creatures are going to fight back to stop cruelty. Zhiv wants Vizh to join him to tell humans to stop and honor the mara and planet. I can see lots of trouble ahead, But, on the way home from seeing Zhiv David is captured and stripped by Jude and River. Jude leads the attack and want to sexually assault David. Birds and snakes came to rescue David and forced Jude to run away while forgetting River who was bitten by a rattlesnake. David called 911 and got an ambulance to arrive with medical people to care for River. David asks River to not mention him and avoid more trouble. -
Wow--Shannon was aggressively hostile towards Trevor. She acted as if they never made love or even liked each other. Plus, Shannon was with a lesbian and seemed to be in a relationship with her and not in any way into guys . Trevor was shocked and not able to understand her attitude. Something is very off. Trevor did not detect any strange feelings or control mechanisms on Shannon. Maybe he will get a better understanding and picture of Shannon later back at Harvard. Will she be as hostile and negative then? The rest of his time with Brandon was awesome. They ran and met some Marine wolves on the Marine base and then had a great time at the beaches, Trevor really got along with everyone he met then with Brandon and enjoyed a gay nude beach and more hot friends of Brandon. He turned down many offers of gay sex. Trevor felt great and wants to visit again plus see Hawaii. This could be the break he needed.
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Airmail Messages and Dink-wads
scrubber6620 commented on Biff Spork's story chapter in Airmail Messages and Dink-wads
Zhiv and David get closer by communicating with messages carried by birds, David's mother sees him sending a message and she discusses it with him. She accepts his actions and supports him. Jude and River sleep over at Jude's. They have more sex with Jude in control. Will they explore outside and visit the mountain area looking to torment David? Things are heating up elsewhere. The social worker is renewing her efforts to find Sol. David's father is noticing more animal/bird attacks but cannot find a connection yet. -
There might be a role to keep Zach around to be the evil spoiler targeting Travis and Will and others. He might be so mad that Travis left him, that Zach will plot revenge in some messy ways. I can see Zach holding a painful grudge. He did fly cross country to seriously and harmfully beat up a guy who wronged him. Could he help Curtis Buck prevent Travis from gaining control of his trusts in April by making up a story involving Will and Travis so Travis fails the morals clause set in the trust ( which might eventually be unenforceable legally and make a public stink)? Hey, I expect Travis and Will are going to be featured in the society type columns with photos from the gala so their participation and the description of them as a couple will be very public. Curtis could be made aware of this display by Zach. Or, could Zach threaten Travis to reveal his sexual efforts with Will to his father and blackmail him for a sizeable sum to set himself up financially ? Could Zach misfire and let his hatred not see his problems and make enough mistakes that his plot or plots fail badly? But in just months, Will and maybe Travis will be far away in college and Zach will be still in LA needing another fuck boy. Zach could not threaten them then. I hope. Zach will have his own so far hidden sexual issues and football career battles to fight without taking on Will and Travis
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David 's mother funds out about Zhiv or at least the concept of Zhiv and not his true nature or learning he goes naked. She is worried but trusts David. Crows severely attacked a man who shot at them. Will this incident cause David's parents to keep him home and away from the mountain. The speeding driver ticketed by David's father said he was chased by crows when he was by the mountain, Jude and River try to get David to eat a pig gonad at lunch at school but he did not eat it. School will be over in 4 days and then the bullies can go after David without teachers to stop them.
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Mark, you have laid a strong foundation for the clash of views in your next chapter based on the distinctive outfits that Travis and Will are going to wear versus a likely Bellona style that Dairus must be wearing. Will is not going to look like his brother or compete with him. JJ and Zanie and others will be shocked by the result. But, they want Bellona to win so she will now. Will and Travis might well be subjects for lots of photos . The point is they will be noticed. This event is somewhat based on the annual Vogue Magazine charity event at the Met. Years later in 2019, AOC wore a shocking Tax the Rich dress to the Met Gala that cost $30,000 a ticket at the time. Her dress was all over the news. Patrick has given these boys a shocking, serious, well built approach that might be characteristic of high concept designer fashion that would be seen on a runway at a fashion show. He is proud of what he has done and wants his name mentioned.
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Wow--Travis came to New York and found Will and they fucked and fucked. They both concluded after being redressed later by Patrick that they loved each other and said so to each other. What a great surprise--I did not see that coming so fast. What a terrific chapter. Thanks, Mark
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Am I Supposed To Get Brain Damage?
scrubber6620 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Am I Supposed To Get Brain Damage?
BTW, Rusty's pegging a while ago may not have prepared his ass hole for Matty's cock. I think Rusty will be surprised to find out Matty has been using a dildo. When Rusty wants to be fucked , will Rusty act on his own in advance to prepare himself for a cock or will Matty need to prepare Rusty? -
Am I Supposed To Get Brain Damage?
scrubber6620 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Am I Supposed To Get Brain Damage?
Perfect--from cock blocking to cock sucking--mutual joy --Rusty and Matty broke new ground What now happens to cat boy? Does he stay and let Matty reveal himself or disappear quietly? Will his reveal shake up Rusty too much? Love the moments of sexual reward and exploration and seemingly happy transition. Thanks- 48 comments
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What a wonderful trip to Europe meeting old friends and living a warm happy life. Carl grew closer. Nonna spoke to Armand and Madam Lavigne welcomed her trip to the US. The Home must be safe since no one called reporting trouble. Changes lie ahead with their life back in the US as the boy take on new responsibilities and grow up.
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David really connected with Zjiv and the mara. He was overwhelmed with joy feeling the fishes adore him in the lake, Later hugging Zhiv he felt a supreme bliss like an orgasm. They both seemed to be sexually unaware of what happened actually. They are a great, sympathetic pair. At home he found the shoebox his dad wanted him to see. His dad is going to wear vegan shows in support of his ideas. Meanwhile Jude and River sucked each other off twice wearing female sleepwear belong to his sister. Jude is really kinky and is dominating River. Jude is guiding him to be a sexual plaything saying it is just two guys getting off--not acting gay. There are going so lots more serious sexual action, I feel it. River now has two guys wanting him sexually as their toy. Trouble lies ahead.
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The Big Sadness and The Porn Room
scrubber6620 commented on Biff Spork's story chapter in The Big Sadness and The Porn Room
David and Zhiv meet again and really get along. Zhiv tells David that when he connects to the expanded mara he might hear the pain of animals and be very distressed. David is not discouraged and wants to follow Zhiv. They are so insync, David's parents are very happy with him and want to work at being a happy family and doing things in common/ Unfortunately, Jude and River are intending to gang up on David in the woods and seek to get him to be a sexual toy for them. David does not know what they are planning, What a mess! -
I believe George's main immediate problem is Caroline and her behavior. I hope she does not keep on delaying her reunion with George. They need to talk and come to an understanding. I wonder what her reaction will be when she learns her affair is known about court and by the King. Her power to make deals and her reputation must be severely diminished. Caroline might be seeking independence and her own life and not depend on George. She might be pushing him too far away for a real reconciliation. She is a creature of her time and class. She will have limitations and is not a 21st century independent woman. Presentism is the "interpretation of history that is biased towards and colored by present-day concerns, preoccupations and values” George can turn to Cavendish and Daventry for advice. He needs them. His father's unwise effort to gain part of his sister's estate and impair George might cause George to not also seek him out for advice. He likely would be better off with his father's counsel about what to do with Caroline. Can he trust her to manage his assets and ,if he dies, his estate ? Should he seek out a lawyer to write a will? Does he want to leave all his money to his unfaithful wife? I am looking forward to how you take this story forward and how things actually develop between George and Caroline. You can tell I have time on my hands to think about this story.
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Armand, Colin and Tommy saved the newly named Carl. He was terribly abused by his father and has a much better life ahead after he adapts and recovers. I am impressed by the security upgrade. The kids are going to be much better protected. About the only item that might help is a watch dog or two.
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Damn---Shannon is in a gay bar in San Diego--not on a dig in Mexico ! Trevor had been all cool and comfortable meeting Brandon's friends and enjoying the great vibes that Brandon gave off. Trevor was teased , but known to be str8. He agreed to dance as a stripper with Brandon and they put on an impressive, sexy strip show the crowd loved. A vid of his performance is being sent to Brandon so he can let their friends see it. He and Trevor were proud of their routine. As Brandon and Trevor leave, Trevor realizes Shannon is near. Trevor smells her and then sees her face. He is shocked. Why is she at the gay bar? What will they say to each other. She had to see Trevor and Brandon act so sexually suggestive with each other.
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It seems Zhiv had been a foster kid named Sol Mundy who had trouble fitting in because he was overly sensitive. He felt the pain of animals and fled his last foster home over a year ago. David had a great day with Zhv who is at peace living in nature and will return tomorrow. Zhiv said David would be given his " inside" name soon. David is becoming more wedded to Zhiv and the mara around Jana mountain. River and his brother and father are going to cause trouble for David and maybe his father. The sheriff is a friend of the pig famer dad. David is falsely accused of directing his dad to give Aaron a speeding ticket since Aaron almost ran him over while speeding. Aaron tried to sweet talk David and become his friend and asked him to get his father to cancel the ticket. David said no and that angered Aaron and his family. I can see River try to bully David soon and keep up the pressure by maybe following him to the Jana mountain to hurt hm or scare him seriously without teachers interfering.
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A warm and happy reunion among friends. Brandon and Trevor met in Embers in Australia and have stayed friends. Brandon has fully adapted to being a wolf shifter and alpha. I bet Trevor seeing Brandon doing his stripping act again now in the US while he is in town will be a fun experience and mind opening. Trevor is so calming and congenial. He fits in with straights and gays and gets hit on by both without taking offense. Brandon's Alpha, John. may tell Trevor some more fun stories about Brandon, his son in name. The idea of Brandon writing his firefighting story down sounds great. It will be real but considered by non-shifters as fiction. Nice touch suggesting the title and WolfM as the writer. This is going to be a pleasant interlude before Trevor starts his real summer business with another pack outside Redding--or he is called out to face another danger with Shannon.
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Two more points" Will really liked secretly seeing Carullo fuck JJ. He realized a vent could give him a great view of the action. Will had a great orgasm. He even told JJ later how turned on he was, Might Will be inspired to later film some of his sex scenes with his great lovers. I am not sure the tech is advanced enough for well concealed small cameras to be available. JJ does not know what his relationship with Zanie is or what she really wants. I think it is a good chance she wants JJ to give her financial security besides sex. She could attach herself strongly if she has JJ's child. She could deceive him to say she was on the pill when she was not. I do not think the gold digger Zanie will go down easily if JJ indicates he wants Carullo more and Zanie feels threatened. Will so far has not mentioned this pregnancy strategy to JJ who is not forthcoming about what he and Zanie do intimately. I bet Will has stirred the pot and will cause ripples in the JJ-Zanie relationship. She will respond.
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The Mara and Radio Stations
scrubber6620 commented on Biff Spork's story chapter in The Mara and Radio Stations
Zhiv and Davd meet and discuss his life and the mara around the mountain, David learns the basics about Zhin and really likes him. He is entranced by the new world. They touch ofter. Zhiv tells David the animals know about him and think he is like Zhiv,-a good supportive friend. What Ziv's end game with David is not clear. Does he want David to eventually live with him on the mountain and stay away from his family and humans so they can lead s better, more sensitive life? Does he want David to learn from him and still live part time in the human world being an advocate for their views about animals and the earth? Maybe David will be more forthcoming over the weekend, -
Let us hope JJ has improved his style choices for Will for the MOMA gala. Yesterday, he had Will dress for a party without a shirt. I am sure a partially bare chested 17 year old who was somewhat covered by a coat was a bold statement for the people in the audience.
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What a rollercoaster session ! Will found out Travis heard him fucking Patrick and discussing Travis because his cell phone was on. Will cannot remember what he said. He called Travis back but his call went to voicemail. Their future conversation could be decisive. I can see Will charming Travis, if the call goes on in a positive note. I am impressed by how skillfully Will drove a wedge between JJ and Zanie with Carullo . Will eventually backed JJ into a corner. Well , just being together with his male friend convinced JJ. JJ and Carullo fucked twice and JJ was very pleased. He said he would choose Carullo over Zanie.....aftera pregnant pause. Let's see how this works out. JJ is not certain about his relationship with Zanie. Will helped JJ think through things. Tonight is the MOMA gala. JJ wants to dress Will who so far is playing hard to get. JJ has a contest with Bellona to see if Will as dressed by JJ or Darius as dressed by Bellona is hotter. I bet it is going to be a tie. Both have the right looks and attitude and exude sexual charisma. Thanks for the chapter, Mark. I am very happy you intend to start a weekly publishing schedule. I really admire your writing and love most of your characters. You make me think and dream.
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