Timejun
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I will say though that this was a particularly short chapter. Does that mean you had more time to get the next chapter out quickly?
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Yet another brilliantly written chapter. I am looking forward to the next installment. I can see King E and Chris...er...Prince Chris kicking some serious demon ass.
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Thank you for commenting and seeing it. Maybe we could settle for a broken foot or a brain hemmorage
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You know, shoot that FRIGGIN rabbit. I am so losing interest in this story. This story used to be exciting and interesting but now it's all diatribes of inane trains of thoughts
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After my second reading I've come up with a few realizations. 1. The writer is a gifted genius. 2. Chris will be stretched to his limits. 3. Most important of all though...i will be on pins and needles till I read more chapters, SOON
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Perfection. What can I say but simply...perfection.
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OH...MY...GAWD!!! Best chapter ever...the action, intrigue, and player placements have gone to not just the next level but up several levels. You sir are the Clive Cussler and Dan Brown of the GA. You really need to be writing this full time. I've said it before and I'll say it again...once you publish this I want 2 copies
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Absolutely perfect. Chris has come into himself, Victor has his appt. And, the Tower is helping the 2 worlds. I'm excited for tomorrow and the next chapter. I've had a realization today. Even though I been a faithful GA and Nifty reader for years...and have read many excellent stories, I have read this story at least four times, and some chapters even more. Unprecedented. With great respect, Robert
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It reads just as good the second time. You covered many questions we all have and you have started to pull Chris' head out of his ass. I wonder where Victor will live if he makes the VHC?
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Most excellent! Can't wait til the next
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Sir, You most assuredly are a phenomenal creator and story teller. I am excited to see where Chris and his staff will be working and living once they get back to earth. Also Victor should make the VHC and do great things. Leo should be moving with August soon and do I hear wedding bells for C&V?
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I'm concerned, is everything ok on your end? You've given us 2 half chapters and several days between posting. Are you okay? True concern, Robert
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Short but Great. I love how this is flowing.
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Great first half of the chapter but what happened to the second half?
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Unless you're under the weather then 'im sorry to hear that' But post soon. 😆
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Ok, enough is enough. I think you are a descendent of the Marques Dr Sad. Post already, you're killing me
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H, and I've reread the story again...twice. Except for the kidnapping/rape and Gustov messing with the lovebirds
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Ok, this is ridiculous. I know in my head there are only 2 possible times that you post your story. But I am so addicted I check like 8)10 times throughout the day. Please post soon Robert
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OUT-FRIGGIN-STANDING The young Prince is coming into himself. So frickin' proud and impressed. Thank you for taking some of his poor-me attitude away. Just to let you know, whenever you put this story into book form, I'll buy 2.
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Oh...and he should get his own embassy/house. Atalos should be his chief of staff...and what the he'll, take the driver too
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I totally get that an 18yo would troubled with being thrown into the deep end. But calmly accepting vampires and werewolf and even being Elvish then using magic often he has to come to terms and begin to grow up. We don't need Superman or a Wonder Womanish action but he has to understand that he is powerful. What he needs to realize is that he needs his training.
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So perfectly beautiful. Your writing style and story telling are wonderful. I only wish Chris grew some balls. His mealy mouth attitude and poor me attitude is getting tiring. He has to realize his own power and self worth. Grow up and man up Chris
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The Story was great but damn, who edited this chapter? They should be beat with a ream of paper
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Great first chapter . can't wait for the next
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Now, I've tried to stay out of your head with ideas but I can't any longer. Etanos needs to follow Chris to earth to be his asst' there also and be a conduit to the realm. With Chris' high station Patti, Victor, Luca, and his dad needs to insist on Elvin security on Earth. Nomir should be his driver, plus 4 Gold level elvin military. Chris's dad should be made the conduit between the Elves and humans and allowed to live part time in the realm. Luca and Reva should carry all they have learned to the VHC and Victor be brought into the VHC and be made the Vampire/Elf liaison. Just saying
