Hello,
First, let me say I love this story.
Second, the next chapter CANNOT be the final chapter. I've read the next chapter and although it solves the Shaun issue there is way more that can and should go thru.
I absolutely adore your story. It is well put together. I have a question though. The explanation of the story illudes to something big happening? Its been 16 chapters, when will this catastrophe happening?
Excellent writing. I love this story. If it were up to me I would want the entire story all at once, it kills me to have to wait...but its worth the wait
This is ridiculous. Such a good story and you continuously make these chapters SO DAMN SHORT. Chapter 3 was the worst but come on give us a break. It is so un-easy to keep our interests if you continue to write a single page at a time.
Truly a well rounded and entertaining story. Ok, ok, I got a little teary eyed when Max broke down. I love this story and can't wait for the next several chapters.
this chapter hits me in the heart in so many ways. I always wanted a relationship like Will and Liam...but back then that just didn't happen in my city. Instead I had a life like Oliver and Kathrine's.
. The writing is so well done and very emotion packed. I love it. Can't wait til Christmas......please don't make us wait too long?