Timejun
-
Posts
304 -
Joined
-
Last visited
Content Type
Forums
Stories
- Stories
- Story Series
- Story Worlds
- Story Collections
- Story Chapters
- Chapter Comments
- Story Reviews
- Story Comments
- Stories Edited
- Stories Beta'd
Blogs
Store
Help Center
Writing
Gallery
Events
Everything posted by Timejun
-
Yet another awesome chapter. I like how you add just enough action to keep our mouths watering but hold back also. Can't wait for more
- 12 comments
-
- 10
-
-
Absolutely a wonderful chapter. Intrigue, mystery, and just the right amount of levity. Perfect
-
Very well written, very intriguing
-
WE'RE WAITING
-
Past Shapes the Future: Pt 2
Timejun commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Past Shapes the Future: Pt 2
OMG! You not only visited the rabbit hole, you moved in. This story is about two young men falling in love, being Prince's and helping to run Makrovia. Keep to that story line. 2 chapters of high school drivel is so over the top of boringness. You have caused me to lose complete interest in this story, and it makes me kinda sad. You started out so strong too -
Ok, enough is enough, you're gonna have to quit that damn job. Don't they know you're in a critical juncture of the story? Please lay a chapter or two on us soon
-
God knows Adam needs a solid family. Adam would be a perfect fit. I think they will need a much bigger house. How many kids live there now, Pete, Charles, Adam?, Nicky
-
Your micro-chapters are always a great read. A little confusing at times with all tbe kids you add so quickly. I thought Adam was one of the church's orphan boys? Maybe if you slowed down on adding boys, just for a couple of chapters, and focused on which boys are his...just saying. Maybe a longer chapter could help. I mean their wedding can't be done in a micro-chapter.
-
Words cannot explain the excitement and thrill I feel as I become a part of this story. Wow! Is all I can express. I will be reading this chapter again several times
- 21 comments
-
- 12
-
-
-
The First General 3 -reupload
Timejun commented on gabz2000's story chapter in The First General 3 -reupload
I just read 101 and it was just as spectacular and action packed as 100. Kudos to you. You are truly a master of your craft.- 20 comments
-
- 10
-
-
-
-
The First General 3 -reupload
Timejun commented on gabz2000's story chapter in The First General 3 -reupload
What can I say,I'm gifted -
WAY TOO SHORT, but an excellent story. Can't wait til the next one
-
Great chapter. And since its so early in the day...maybe another chapter? PLEASE. It will make up for the chapters being so short 🌈😎🌈
-
Very good chapter. Left with a cliff hanger of sorts
-
Way too short but very enjoyable
-
Most excellent! Great story line. Keep up the work...and the 2 a day postings
-
Very short but high quality. Great story
-
PLEASE DONT MAKE US WAIT A WEEK FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. This is the price you must pay for creating such a phenomenal world
-
This is a real sweet story. I thoroughly enjoy reading it. Thank you
-
Short but sweet, very good
-
DA Ch 31 - Island Research
Timejun commented on quokka's story chapter in DA Ch 31 - Island Research
Short but full of good content. Well done and I hope that the next chapter comes soon -
An excellent chapter. Well worth the week long wait.
-
Good chapter but out of context
-
How are you doing? Hows work? How are your stress levels? Ok, its been over 4 days since you sent half-chapter 97. Will you be posting any time soon? I'm not pushing but you did spoil us with 2-a-days in the beginning. You write so creatively and beautiful, we NEED more.
- 15 comments
-
- 10
-
-
-
Excellent chapter. You did indeed break the rabbits leg. He just crawled around for a sec.
