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Not only a burgeoning love story, but an action packed story. But the chapters are way too short.
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Chapter 1 - Meeting
Timejun commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Meeting
I am an old gay man, but I appreciate seeing the other side of love. I'm not looking for women as much as young love. -
Chapter 1 - Meeting
Timejun commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Meeting
So very happy to have two girls as our main characters. Finally -
I've read so many stories and I can't remember a single story that was written any better. Simply a great story written superbly. A new fan, Robert
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Ok, I just reread your story with anticipation of the next chapter. Though you need a good editor your story is just mind blowing
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While I was reading your book for the 6th time I realize that it all needs editing. I would like to offer my services for this endeavor. I so love your world and would consider it a great honor to do this. Oh, and if your wondering the cost it would be the next chapter or if you don't want that, I would charge you zero dollars the first chapter.. but the next 116 will be double of the first chapter. I would love to do the first chapter so you could see my work
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Well, it's been long enough to conclude you're done with this story. As sorry as I find this , I hope you are in great health and happy inside.
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I know, it's been years but could you do a couple of chapters to finish off some of the story lines? Does Dad find love again? Does August turn his boyfriend? Do Victor and Chris finally marry? Are the demons finally beat? Does Chris ascend?
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Sir, I sincerely hope this note finds you in good health and happy surroundings. I have just completed all 117 chapters for the fifth time and it draws me as the first time I read it. I hope life has treated you well so you could hopefully produce another chapter...or ten. If not then just thank you for creating such great reading.
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I think, and I do have experience, you did a stellar job. You wrote some silver truths in this chapter. Respectfully, Robert
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Thank you, thank you, thank you. This is the fifth time reading this story and I'll probably read it again in six or seven months. Ok, I get it, life goes on...I hope you and yours are doing fine and I hope and pray you all had a great holiday season. If you're not going to continue writing how would like to edit and re show them. I would consider it an honor to do the editing for free.. I would do it in appreciation for your gift to all of us. Robert
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You cannot be serious. Ending the story after only one more chapter? Why is it when you find a really great story the author just stops at the worst possible time. We still have the trial, graduating, college, marriage...please do not end it this way
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You cannot be serious. Ending the story after only one more chapter? Why is it when you find a really great story the author just stops at the worst possible time. We still have the trial, graduating, college, marriage...please do not end it this way
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Very short but very fulfilling
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Miles was so vibrant and fun. I don't see why you killed him off but you must have a good reason. Nobody has actually dead so a plot twist is coming.?.?
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Chapter 35: Deadly Decision
Timejun commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 35: Deadly Decision
OMG, too funny. I can't wait for the next chapter. Well done. Good on ya', and great job. -
Chapter 33: Final Face-off
Timejun commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 33: Final Face-off
Ok, it's next week... -
Chapter 33: Final Face-off
Timejun commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 33: Final Face-off
Ok, I get Yakub. Ok, I get SC, just please don't leave us hanging for too long! Please. And don't make this the end. That would totally suck -
Ooh, the plot thickens. Awesome twist. When are Kye and Marcus gonna admit their feelings for each other?
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I really love this story. It paints a more realistic picture. I love the characters you've created
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Chapter 28: Remarkable Reception
Timejun commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 28: Remarkable Reception
Excellent story. I do look forward to each and every chapter. With any hope the author will get a creative bug up his butt and write like 10 whole chapters in one week then post one every other day. Great writing, awesome rounded characters, and a cool world. -
Chapter 24: Ardent Arrest
Timejun commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 24: Ardent Arrest
I so love this story. The characters are so well rounded you feel they're real,. Like you could go to ol' Kentucky and meet Vincent and Mason. This is so well written you'd think you're relating your life. -
Same chapter with 54?
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I really believe that this story is poignant, powerful, and insightful. You are telling a great story while weaving the truth about real issues current today.
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Ok, just a little question, no biggie. Can you just tell us if you're planning on continuing the story?
