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I hope this finds you and yours in good health. I have been properly chastised about you last year. Because of this I will only blow smoke up your a... Reread your book for the fourth time and still loved every word. If you could find it in your heart to deliver us with another chapter or ten, that would be lovely. Respectfully, Robert
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You're absolutely correct. I should just appreciate what we get. I guess I get a little hurt because the story is so good
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19 paragraphs? Really?
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You know, I recall at the end of one of your chapters you apologized for a short chapter. When you apologized you promised longer chapters...when will that happen?
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The writing is excellent, grammer is excellent the story is excellent. The chapter length, however, is seriously lacking.
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Chapter 1: Evaluating Evidence
Timejun commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 1: Evaluating Evidence
Absolutely love the continuation of the story but hate how you just abandoned the last story. Please, please, please, don't take too long between chapters. This world you have created is amazing. -
Ok, I've had to reread the story for the 4th time just to remember it all. I'm anticipating a great next chapter
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🌈 Don't thank Etotsira too much there are still quite a few oopses 🤓❤️
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Why is this chapter in the 15 and 166 spot same chapter twice
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Evil, pure evil...I think my third wife is related
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Can't wait for more...and don't worry you only made 4ish mistakes. Better than a lot of American writers🤓
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Now that was some powerful writing
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Yet another wonderful chapter. But is there ANY way to make them longer than a conversation? Please and thank you.
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I hope and pray there will be more and soon. I have read all 13 chats all in a row and found it mesmerizing. The characters are well rounded, the story line is new and invigorating.
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I have just binged read your nine chapters and I absolutely love your world. Your characters are so well rounded and complete and the story line is wonderful. Please don't let us wait too long between chapters.
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Chapter 15: Disturbing Decree
Timejun commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 15: Disturbing Decree
WOW, WOW, AND AGAIN WOW -
Chapter 13: Careless Clash
Timejun commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 13: Careless Clash
Tremendous chapter. Can't wait to see the fight. I hope you won't keep us in suspense too long. -
This is such a beautiful and enjoyable read. Keep them coming
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I have read MANY stories an a few are excellent, yours is one of the few. Aside from the excellent use of grammer and puncuation the story is beautiful. This story took hold of me and transported me into this world. I so wanted to challenge the mother and timid dad. I am very excited to see what continues... Robert
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Ok, it's going on 3 months. Be honest with us, are you gonna finish the story or you just gonna leave us hanging?
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Chapter 6: Healing Heart
Timejun commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 6: Healing Heart
I can't put into words how touched and emotional I was with the wolf and the panda. Both times I read it I was so moved. The rest of the chapter was just as phenomenal. Please hurry with the next several chapters. Thank you -
Ok, not that I'm counting or anything but it has now been 2 months exactly since your last post. I realize that life gets in the way but, and I say this with all the love and respect, you have thousands of faithful readers that hang on your every word and expect more, many more, chapters. Respectfully, Robert
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Please, Any Time Now would be appreciated
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Chapter 2: Slippery Shadows
Timejun commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 2: Slippery Shadows
I've been so looking forward to this. They are wonderfully entertaining. Can't wait for more -
Ok, I just started over and read all 117 chapters again and would appreciate a new chapter. It has been a month and a day
