Timejun

Not only a burgeoning love story, but an action packed story. But the chapters are way too short.

I am an old gay man, but I appreciate seeing the other side of love. I'm not looking for women as much as young love.

So very happy to have two girls as our main characters. Finally

I've read so many stories and I can't remember a single story that was written any better. Simply a great story written superbly. A new fan, Robert

Ok, I just reread your story with anticipation of the next chapter. Though you need a good editor your story is just mind blowing

While I was reading your book for the 6th time I realize that it all needs editing. I would like to offer my services for this endeavor. I so love your world and would consider it a great honor to do this. Oh, and if your wondering the cost it would be the next chapter or if you don't want that, I would charge you zero dollars the first chapter.. but the next 116 will be double of the first chapter. I would love to do the first chapter so you could see my work

Well, it's been long enough to conclude you're done with this story. As sorry as I find this , I hope you are in great health and happy inside.

I know, it's been years but could you do a couple of chapters to finish off some of the story lines? Does Dad find love again? Does August turn his boyfriend? Do Victor and Chris finally marry? Are the demons finally beat? Does Chris ascend?

Sir, I sincerely hope this note finds you in good health and happy surroundings. I have just completed all 117 chapters for the fifth time and it draws me as the first time I read it. I hope life has treated you well so you could hopefully produce another chapter...or ten. If not then just thank you for creating such great reading.

I think, and I do have experience, you did a stellar job. You wrote some silver truths in this chapter. Respectfully, Robert

Thank you, thank you, thank you. This is the fifth time reading this story and I'll probably read it again in six or seven months. Ok, I get it, life goes on...I hope you and yours are doing fine and I hope and pray you all had a great holiday season. If you're not going to continue writing how would like to edit and re show them. I would consider it an honor to do the editing for free.. I would do it in appreciation for your gift to all of us. Robert

You cannot be serious. Ending the story after only one more chapter? Why is it when you find a really great story the author just stops at the worst possible time. We still have the trial, graduating, college, marriage...please do not end it this way

You cannot be serious. Ending the story after only one more chapter? Why is it when you find a really great story the author just stops at the worst possible time. We still have the trial, graduating, college, marriage...please do not end it this way

Very short but very fulfilling

Miles was so vibrant and fun. I don't see why you killed him off but you must have a good reason. Nobody has actually dead so a plot twist is coming.?.?