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Thank you for the Great chapter. Story getting better with each one. Looking forward to reading more.

Me too. May still happen, he did marry Will's mom, but again that didn't work out at all.

I think you did a very good job with Will. I believe he is grieving about as much as Liam, he is just looking after him the very best he can. He did look up about grieving and on the internet and probably using a lot of what he learned from it. Very good story so far. Look forward to reading about the road trip.

Sad first chapter, but I think it has the makings of a really great story! Look forward to the next chapter.

Thanks Mark, another very good chapter. Keep up the great work!

Another Great HOT! HOT! HOT! Chapter Mark. I love 3somes, MMF or MMM. Never done a FMF, so I can't speak from experience on that one. Looking forward to Chapter 12.

I was wondering the same thing.

Great Chapter Mark!

You actually made some very good points there. Made me go back and re-read JJ's part. Doesn't say what time Will called, may have been early morning, but regardless Kris actually works for a living and gone all day. Normally working late at times, but did get home 10 minutes before their arrival. Jacinta should have told them that Kris had just gotten home from work. What if Will and Travis's limo had gotten caught up in heavier traffic than normal. Wouldn't have been a big deal with him. And I agree Will should have explained what the plans were for the evening when he called JJ. So maybe I will take back the "Little Bitch" remark I made earlier. But I still think boot camp would be good for him. Will and Travis might be good candidates for boot camp too.

Well after I had began to warm up to JJ, he falls back into being a little bitch again. Maybe he need to join the Army or Marines and go through basic training. Might be the best thing for him to ever be a productive member of society. I am wondering how Jack's other woman is going to act toward him coming back from being in Athen's with Claire. She can't be real happy with that. Thanks Mark, Great Chapter. Waiting to see how the web will spin.

You may be right about Calvert being at a good place to get information and inside scoop on a lot of things at court. But the Treaty and peace didn't last very long. May 1803 it all started again.

Great chapter Mark. Even though his isn't getting a ship any time soon, Calvert seems to have landed at a safe spot for now. It would be great if Carmella and Sofia turned out to be lovers, and Granger could work out a very nice arrangement with them so he does have a beard. By the description of her carriage she may be tight on money. Being a successful opera singer is one thing, but making enough to support her, Sophia, a maid and two footmen and all their expenses has got to be pretty expensive. Carmella being associated with George could really boost her star power and status. I bet George would make sure she could travel in style in a plush carriage too. Sophia might be good as a beard for Cavendish or maybe Calvert if the Royal Princesses tires of him. Hey Granger could fall into a pile of shit and still come up smelling like apple pie. Thanks for the chapter Mark. Keep up the great work. You are appreciated.

I was pleased with how the visit went by. I think kris was really a big hit with Jake and Stef. And Kris seems to have impressed Brad too. I hope he become a lot more involved with the entire family. I have my doubts about Will and Travis being a couple for very long. Thanks for the chapter Mark. Keep up the great work.

Wonderful story! Sorry that it has ended. I am going to keep my fingers crossed that we might hear more from all these guys sometimes in the near future. @Mrsgnomieyou are a very talented author. Keep up the great work. Note! Would have like to have known how Loe and Lars parents died, suicide, accident, or murdered by some of the low life organization that they had climbed in bed with.

Great story. I started off reading and commenting on each chapter, but have been just so busy that to ever get thru the story, I just gave up on that and decided I would just wait until the end. Love all the characters and the story line. I hope we get to see a lot more of some of these guys in the near future. Thank you so much @Mrsgnomieyou and other authors are greatly appreciated for what you do. please keep up you great work.

But it may be after St Vincent has a conversation with the King that he weighs his options and may as @drpaladinstated figure out it is better to have powerful and influential ally, than Chalmers that really is an unknow. Granger did a really good job of building the Kings opinion of Calvert in the past weeks with some of his past feet's. And the King also got to witness in person Calvert's brave escape from the French. St Vincent may not like it, but he is not a fool. If this was a historically true factual story about George Granger and St. Vincent was to go forward with his barring Calvert and possibly exposing the accusations for why. His time as Admiral of the Fleet from the history we now know may have been a lot shorter period of time. As popular and loved by the public as his character is portrayed, and St. Vincent brought these charges up. He would probably have to be surrounded by armed guards anytime he wasn't in the walls of the Admiralty. Great Chapter Mark. You are truly appreciated. Keep up the great work.

I have never been a JJ fan at all. But I do believe he is beginning to mature a little, and I think Kris can be very good for him and help develop JJ in his self esteem, and drive, and goals for the future. I hope Brad doesn't come in and stir up a bunch of shit, but I really don't think he will. I believe Jake and Stef will step in if he does. Kris may be a big hit with all 3 of them. But this family lives in drama half of the time. Great chapter Mark! Looking forward to the next one.

Well maybe this series will continue on for many books and we will be able to keep up with all the different story characters for years to come. LOL! I'm and old man and hope any future one comes faster!.

Great first chapter. I look forward to reading the rest of this 2nd in the series. Thank you @Mrsgnomie

I have really enjoyed this story. I was hooked from the very first chapter on. I actually found and read @Mrsgnomiestory "Dichotomy of Love" first and thoroughly enjoyed it. Now I am looking forward to reading Jay and Loren's story next. I am hoping their story will keep us updated on Matt, Seamus and the boy's along with Perry and Kyan and their kids from "DofL" too. Thank you @Mrsgnomiefor all your work. Plan on going back and reading your other stories from the past before this series.

Well hopefully before the end of the story he will also adopt Aidan too.

I don't think the summer back home for Matt and Aidan is going to go over very well with Seamus. But also think that if Matt does do this, that after just a couple or 3 days he is going to be so miserable missing Seamus he will have to do some modifying with his time with his dad. I also think Aidan will start acting up because of not seeing Seamus for so long. Great story. Glad I found "Dichotomy of Love" read it and really enjoyed it and decided I would read more of @Mrsgnomie stories. Very impressed with her work.

Wait! When did Seamus also become Adrien's legal guardian. I don't remember ever reading that. I may have missed it but I don't see how. I know Matt got his papers saying he was.

I am completely hooked on this story. Very well written and storyline. Keep up the great work @Mrsgnomie

I am really liking this story so far. Like a lot of others have commented, I have a feeling that Matt and Seamus are going to get very close. I expect Seamus to start showing up a lot more at this particular property he owns. He may not have gotten the scope on Matt and his situation from Denise after their first meeting. He probably thinks Matt is the straight father and not know of Matt's situation. But when he does get the scope, I bet we see a lot of him from then on. Look forward to reading the next chapter. Loving this story so far.