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Great Chapter!! Looking forward to reading more and catching up soon.
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Very good chapter. I think Will is going to fuck the Dutchman real soon. Travis is going to really have some emotional problems with the method acting Julian. Don't know if he will be able to get thru it until Will comes home or not. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks @Mark Arbour
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Thank You @Andre Delport for another great chapter. A very nice visit for all the Devlin-Majors family and their relatives they scarcely ever get to see. I look forward for the next instalment of this fine story.
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Wow! Thanks Mark. I had not checked my email last night, so I didn't see the notification you had posted until just a few minutes ago. Great Chapter. "Jealousy" is a great title for this chapter. Ken and JJ are full of it. They both oblivious of how they trigger it in each other.
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Everyone celebrates the Orthodox Christmas, don't they? @Mark Arbour Hint, hint!!
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Last thru lots of it, even if his dick is raw!
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Remember Granger is just 26 and 4 months old. He can still endure a lot of sex at that age.
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Thank you so much @Mark ArbourYou are truly appreciated! I am looking forward to Granger and Daventry's adventure in Spain. I believe Elizabeth is now going to be a lot easier to deal with in the 4-way relationship than Carmella will be. I think she wants to be the main character and center of attention from the other 3 in their intertwined relationship. It's going to be interesting, and hopefully hot!!!
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Thank you @Mark Arbour for the New Years gift. Like Tim I thought you might slip one in for us. You are the best. Keep up the great work.
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He knew that Mark was going to post us a chapter for New Years!
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I believe Toby was still 14 in the first book. I think it is only a few weeks or maybe a month or so later than what the first book and this third book and well before Ralph and Nolan come on the scene. I think Russ mention in the first chapter of this story about Maurice just getting the business from his father and trying to get invited to some of his parties. So he hasn't come on the scene yet like he did in Book Two of "Ralph Breaking Lose" So Toby should still be 14. I thought when the first book started he was Toby was 15 but later on he became 14 and still was by the end of book one. Anyhow sounds like it is going to be a good birthday for Toby. Thanks @Robert Hugill for the great story.
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This third book seems to be just as good as the first two. Maybe Jasper when he is off sailing with his buddies will get lost at sea. Thanks @Robert Hugill for the great stories you bring us. I hope you had a Merry Christmas and you have even a better New Year!
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Like everyone else thank you so much @Mark Arbour for this Christmas present you have brought to us. Very good chapter. Granger got to remanence of some of his past treasured and painful moments while touring HMS Belvidera again. That was great. Keep up the Great work! When I opened this chapter, like always first thing I notice is the date. Feb 09, 1802. That was my Fraternal Grandmother's birthday. She was born exactly 100 years later on Feb. 09 1902. She's been gone 30 something years now.
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Great Chapter. I was surprised that Paolo got to Escorial as quick as he did. Both Carlo and Paolo are big hits with all the family so far. Thanks for the Christmas present at @Mark Arbour You are the BEST!!!
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An old friend and catching up
pickuptoy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in An old friend and catching up
A very good chapter. The meeting turn out the way I hoped, no blaming or animosity from one to another. I can see all 7 of them becoming very good friends. Toby has the personality that I bet he will take on the girls as his little sisters. Getting them interested in ecology and them turning him into a true vegetarian. I also see Russ and all of them becoming very close. Three kids to be uncle too. Very good story, and I am loving the series. Hope it keep going for years. Thanks @roberthugill -
I love sloppy seconds!!
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Humble pie, domesticity and Dragons’ Den
pickuptoy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Humble pie, domesticity and Dragons’ Den
I also had thought Nolan was in his mid to late 20's myself. Not 35. Great story. Keeps getting better and better. -
Boating trip and boyfriend problems
pickuptoy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Boating trip and boyfriend problems
I had assumed that Nolan was going to be on the boat with Ralph and the girls, along with Morrie. I thought Morrie knew about Nolan. -
Making plans and meeting Verne
pickuptoy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Making plans and meeting Verne
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Parents and Photography
pickuptoy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Parents and Photography
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Good start to the new story. Looking forward to reading the next chapter. Thanks Robert.
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Not an end but a beginning
pickuptoy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Not an end but a beginning
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The three men finally fell into a comfortable doze, when Brian was woken by Toby shouting that there was a man at the door. I thought Toby carried Arman a plate of food out to the car for his lunch when Russ had gone to the Mill house to look and purchase the paintings and stayed for lunch. So Toby should have recognized him, but I may be wrong on who carried his food out. I know Arman brought his empty plate back in and thank Gordon's mom for his lunch. Great story, I am enjoying every chapter.
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Another great chapter! Looking forward to reading the next one.
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I hope it keeps going as the story is written, or series where, where we are continuing in others point of view, like Gordon's, or Toby's, or maybe even Russ' and his side of the story and why he has taken so much interest in this family, maybe at times going back and referencing his life before them, how his family functioned, if he inherited most of his wealth, or if he came from little and made his own fortune. His relationship with his brother and his family, on to his relationship with Gordon, Brian and Toby leading him to make them his heirs. But currently I m reading what you wrote almost exactly 2 years ago. I know there other books already written in this series. I look for very long stories, trilogies, or series of stories to read. I hardly ever read a short story or one of 10 or 12 chapters. Mainly 30 plus chapters catch my eye. I am a huge fan of Mark Arbour's stories that are very long and multiple books, "CAP" series, which is in it's book 19 and "Bridgemont" series which in now in book 9, both have been going for many years. And are excellent written stories. As are a few more long or multiple book series. I am looking forward to more of yours too.
