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Thanks Mark. Another great chapter under you belt. Keep up the awesome work. You are the best. Will warned Travis how it was going to be with this Julien character when he found out about the script and that Julian was a method actor. He knew it was going to bring back the bad memories for Travis. That he needed to get with Casey about it or another therapist. Travis brushed him off and said he could handle it. Maybe he won't snap in 2 days.
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As always you have did it again, Mark. Wonderful story. They both survived the war and are together again. Hopefully for a lifetime. But for many it was the opposite. Some one of them didn't come back from the front lines. Some did, but unlike Jack, they were not able to carry their lover back with them. Many for the same reason, the lover was male. Imagine how many Gabriel's that were left behind. Hopefully they found love with others and time helped heal them. I am sure a few never got over it, the Gabriel's and the Jack's too. Thanks Mark.
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I hardly ever read short stories, always looking for long, multi chapters, or trilogies, or multiple books. I was a little bored and going thru some of the past stories I have read and making sure I had clicked follow and rating of them. Mark Arbour is my favorite author on this site with his two fine continuing epic stories he has on GA. So I am going back and making sure I read or re-read some of his short stories and rating them too. I had failed to rate this one when I read it five and a half years ago. "2nd Chance is a touching story of 2 old men that should have met when they were young. Hell I am 68 and same age as they were when they finally met. One was 68 and the other was 69. Read it, you will be glad you did. Thanks @Mark Arbour you are the best.
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Second time reading this wonderful story. I don't read a lot of short stories, but this one is most definitely worth reading at least twice, if not more. I am now 68 years old, the same as Pete was. I loved this sentence from about the 3rd or 4th paragraph. "And sucking dick was something I knew how to do. I’m a pro. If it were a martial art, I’d be a black belt."
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Great Chapter!! Looking forward to reading more and catching up soon.
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Very good chapter. I think Will is going to fuck the Dutchman real soon. Travis is going to really have some emotional problems with the method acting Julian. Don't know if he will be able to get thru it until Will comes home or not. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks @Mark Arbour
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Thank You @Andre Delport for another great chapter. A very nice visit for all the Devlin-Majors family and their relatives they scarcely ever get to see. I look forward for the next instalment of this fine story.
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Wow! Thanks Mark. I had not checked my email last night, so I didn't see the notification you had posted until just a few minutes ago. Great Chapter. "Jealousy" is a great title for this chapter. Ken and JJ are full of it. They both oblivious of how they trigger it in each other.
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Everyone celebrates the Orthodox Christmas, don't they? @Mark Arbour Hint, hint!!
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Last thru lots of it, even if his dick is raw!
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Remember Granger is just 26 and 4 months old. He can still endure a lot of sex at that age.
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Thank you so much @Mark ArbourYou are truly appreciated! I am looking forward to Granger and Daventry's adventure in Spain. I believe Elizabeth is now going to be a lot easier to deal with in the 4-way relationship than Carmella will be. I think she wants to be the main character and center of attention from the other 3 in their intertwined relationship. It's going to be interesting, and hopefully hot!!!
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Thank you @Mark Arbour for the New Years gift. Like Tim I thought you might slip one in for us. You are the best. Keep up the great work.
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He knew that Mark was going to post us a chapter for New Years!
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I believe Toby was still 14 in the first book. I think it is only a few weeks or maybe a month or so later than what the first book and this third book and well before Ralph and Nolan come on the scene. I think Russ mention in the first chapter of this story about Maurice just getting the business from his father and trying to get invited to some of his parties. So he hasn't come on the scene yet like he did in Book Two of "Ralph Breaking Lose" So Toby should still be 14. I thought when the first book started he was Toby was 15 but later on he became 14 and still was by the end of book one. Anyhow sounds like it is going to be a good birthday for Toby. Thanks @Robert Hugill for the great story.
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This third book seems to be just as good as the first two. Maybe Jasper when he is off sailing with his buddies will get lost at sea. Thanks @Robert Hugill for the great stories you bring us. I hope you had a Merry Christmas and you have even a better New Year!
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Like everyone else thank you so much @Mark Arbour for this Christmas present you have brought to us. Very good chapter. Granger got to remanence of some of his past treasured and painful moments while touring HMS Belvidera again. That was great. Keep up the Great work! When I opened this chapter, like always first thing I notice is the date. Feb 09, 1802. That was my Fraternal Grandmother's birthday. She was born exactly 100 years later on Feb. 09 1902. She's been gone 30 something years now.
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Great Chapter. I was surprised that Paolo got to Escorial as quick as he did. Both Carlo and Paolo are big hits with all the family so far. Thanks for the Christmas present at @Mark Arbour You are the BEST!!!
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An old friend and catching up
pickuptoy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in An old friend and catching up
A very good chapter. The meeting turn out the way I hoped, no blaming or animosity from one to another. I can see all 7 of them becoming very good friends. Toby has the personality that I bet he will take on the girls as his little sisters. Getting them interested in ecology and them turning him into a true vegetarian. I also see Russ and all of them becoming very close. Three kids to be uncle too. Very good story, and I am loving the series. Hope it keep going for years. Thanks @roberthugill -
I love sloppy seconds!!
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Humble pie, domesticity and Dragons’ Den
pickuptoy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Humble pie, domesticity and Dragons’ Den
I also had thought Nolan was in his mid to late 20's myself. Not 35. Great story. Keeps getting better and better. -
Boating trip and boyfriend problems
pickuptoy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Boating trip and boyfriend problems
I had assumed that Nolan was going to be on the boat with Ralph and the girls, along with Morrie. I thought Morrie knew about Nolan. -
Making plans and meeting Verne
pickuptoy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Making plans and meeting Verne
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Parents and Photography
pickuptoy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Parents and Photography
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Good start to the new story. Looking forward to reading the next chapter. Thanks Robert.
