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The mysterious Mr Kahn
pickuptoy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in The mysterious Mr Kahn
He most certainly does! Very good story. Will check the others out later! -
The mysterious Mr Kahn
pickuptoy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in The mysterious Mr Kahn
Thank you so much for the info. I am thoroughly enjoying this story and am sure I will love his others too. Yeah I looked some of the names of the towns he has brought up and see they don't exist, but some similar show up in Northern England so I have assumed that too. I have always liked following stories on Google Earth as I am reading them. From locations to restaurants, Hotels, venues, etc. Just something I like doing. -
The mysterious Mr Kahn
pickuptoy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in The mysterious Mr Kahn
Thank you @Summerabbacat so do you suggest I go back and reading "Going Back"? Are they paralleling and crossing each other? Or are they just completely separate stories? -
The mysterious Mr Kahn
pickuptoy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in The mysterious Mr Kahn
I think Russ from their first meeting with Brian and Gordon he felt like they were someone he could trust. No bullshitting or beating around the bush people. Like others comments on here I think he is lonely, don't think him and his brother and his family are very close at all. I believe when not working or entertaining clients and associates he is very lonely. Brian, Gordon, and Toby are the ones he think that can fill that void. Somebody he can both mentor, advocate, and likely spoil. I don't think it is with any malice at all. I feel it will really help all in future. Great chapter, great story!! -
The mysterious Mr Kahn
pickuptoy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in The mysterious Mr Kahn
Another very enjoyable chapter @Robert Hugill. Still no appearance from Deirdre and Jasper, perhaps they have gone to visit Colin's mother and Miles. I imagine they would all get along famously. Jasper and Miles could bemoan the state of the nation with "all these bloody queers" getting recognition for their unnatural lifestyles. Jimmy could join in the conversation and bitch about that "shirt lifter" Owain. Who is Colin, Miles, and Jimmy? Are they from another story by Robert Hugill? Do I need to read it before I go any farther? I thought this one was the first in a series? -
Another Great chapter!! I like how this story is going.
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Great Chapter! I like Carlo. Travis may have a real threat with him. Thanks @Mark Arbour
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I think Kostas knows about the gaps and holes between the back of the workshop and the hidey hole. He probably knows Noah has been watching and assumes he is showing Toby. He gets his rock off knowing he is being watched. Glad Toby now has Noah. I think they will become great friends, maybe more. I am enjoying this story.
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I think I might have liked being in the security business instead of sales in another profession. Or I might want to go and interview them about hiring one of those guys.
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I can tell this is going to be a really good story. I look for long stories, especially when they are linked in a series. @Robert Hugill And like I tell other authors when I like their stories. You are appreciated for what you do. Keep up the great work.
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Funny!! I live in the Deep Sought of the USA. It is surprising what you see today. Small towns are just as amusing as Atlanta, Charlotte, Nashville and other large Southern cities. I stopped and bought gas at a convenience store out on a rural highway a few months ago. The guy working behind the counter had his hair up in a bun. earrings with big red fake rubies, red lipstick and a day old stubble beard ruby read beads on and a white blouse with lace on it. I'm 68 years old and never thought even 10 years ago I would see that in my lifetime.
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That is exactly how I read it also. Drew was only stating what Toby said. Drew just wants to have a party. I think he wants to show off his new found Grandson to he buddies also.
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I am really getting into this story. The more I read the better I like it. I bet Gordon's parents love Toby. Him into nature and helping to save the planet and them old hippies and what has been described of them. I think he is going to love them too. Thanks @Robert Hugill great job.
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Thanks @Mark Arbour for another terrific book. I look forward to the next one. Great Job.
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“I have a theory on how this will play out,” Cavendish said. They were interrupted when the food arrived, but as soon as the servants were gone, the conversation continued. “I will share it with you as long as you will bear me no malice if I am wrong.” “Of course not,” Granger said, to which Daventry nodded. “I think they are going to treat this much as your expedition to France,” he said. “They will appoint Charles to be the ambassador, then they will send George along with him to make introductions.” Cavendish was right on with his theory. I love how George handled St. Vincent. I don't think anyone else could have pulled it off with ease like he did. Thank you @Mark Arbour
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I agree that it is someone we know or friendly connection that has some pull high up in the government. Thanks @Mark Arbour another 2 story holiday gift day. You are the best.
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I believe it does have one, but Will said, "We could go into the dining room but Ken is setting up dinner. That will happen at 7:00,” I explained. “The other rooms are all being used as bedrooms, so this is probably the best place for us to meet.” The other rooms would have people’s things scattered around. Jake got seriously irritated when a gust almost blew some of his papers away. “We can go up to our room,” Travis offered. I gave him a dour look, because we’d just had sex and the bed was all messed up. Still, it was the biggest one available. “I’ll run up and get it set up.”
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Oh, I am also glad that Frank and Isidore were not invited on the trip. Maybe the bitch will see she isn't as important as she thinks she is.
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Great Chapter @Mark Arbour I just hope everything works out so the family is not in any danger from repercussions from any of it. And a plea-bargain can be done for Big.
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No! His blueblood Bostonian heritage will always be a problem with being with Will.
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For now I would say so. They are so young, I doubt it will last very long, but I do see they as friends for life whether or not either of them live a long one or not. I am a fan of them both. But do see them in a long term relationship.
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Thanks Mark for this latest update on my favorite story of them all. Looking forward to you next chapter. You are certainly appreciated.
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Another great chapter Mark. Wow what a web you spin. Can't wait for next chapter.
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Very good chapter. I was worried something might happen to Brad and Petrovic like what happened to the other Suburban. I agree with @Gary L and hope Joaquin Rubio will take out Fellows and all the others. I liked how Will stood by Preston when Finn was throwing his barbs at him. Thanks Mark you are the best!
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I love it! Thanks for posting @chris571
