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Another GREAT chapter. Keep up the GREAT job you are doing!
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I also agree with you on this. I think Blu is really over reacting over this. Same as Bella was over his keeping it in about his Mom. Maybe Kyle should have brought him in about the school part, but I would be just like Kyle on protecting his family. Hell if it takes putting a damn tank out in from of the house to protect it. Do whatever you have to do.
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That's the way it is in the real world. We all live it every day. The good, the bad, and the ugly!
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Somehow I think that Rudolph may be tied into Hiscock or the Church that Hiscock goes too. The church may have contacted him about how to go after Blu and Kyle in the past and the conspiring between them began. Records from the prison my show the contacts and help bury both of them. Cody is melting into the family just fine. He can stand in there with the best of them with his humor!
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Wow! Every chapter just keeps getting better. Keep up the great work on this story. Can't wait till the next chapter.
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Time for Remembrance and Celebration
pickuptoy commented on Dahawk's story chapter in Time for Remembrance and Celebration
Great chapter. I think Cody is going to fit in perfectly. -
The Protected Becomes the Protector
pickuptoy commented on Dahawk's story chapter in The Protected Becomes the Protector
Nurse Ratchet is deprived, because Hiscock is so small! -
The Protected Becomes the Protector
pickuptoy commented on Dahawk's story chapter in The Protected Becomes the Protector
I think this is going to be the main medicine that Cody needs to start a full recovery. Having a family to live for now will get him mentally prepared to face and beat cancer. Nan could just possibly turn to putty with Cody and surprise everyone. But anyway I believe the entire family just got stronger. -
Now that was funny! Great Chapter!
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Great story. Thank you for writing for all of us. In a way I am sorry for the Grandfather Lynton, I don't think he was the one making all the trouble. But wife of his deserved what she got and maybe even more restrictive. Keep more great stories coming.
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Keep up the Great Work! Love your story!
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I have just recently started reading from this site. Last weekend I read the first story about Kyle and Blu and fell in love with them and all the rest of the family and extended family and friends. When you first introduced the twins and Arabella into the story I kind of hoped that Kyle and Blu would somehow influence their lives for the better. Now that you have brought them into the family I want this story to just keep on going for many years. I hope we get to see them grow up. Maybe Kyle and Blu can find one or two others that might need great parents and introduce them to Kaleb and James. Just an idea. Keep up the great work.
