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  1. Smile ? Will a heavenly event melt a Glacier? Or send 🐍 after Kai? (Perhaps be a cobra, Kai?) Sorry, it's Friday bad puns. Have a good weekend J. A
  2. Maybe there was something lumbering around back in Abe's day to help erect those "Lincoln Logs"? And was Abe truly honest as he shared a bed with his "good friend" Joshua Speed for 4 years in Springfield IL? Only to become suicidally depressed when Speed left? Kind of sounds like a bad circumstance for Brendan and Tyler to fall into. (Perhaps Brendan's father will break down, spend the money to add a kitchen and full bathroom to the room over the 3-car garage, turning it into a proper 'Carraige House' for Brendan?). As for your closing chapter comment: "I know I said this was the last chapter, but I kind of got inspired and to bridge the gap between Part One & Part Two, there will be two more chapters. Next Tuesday join us for Nana's House"; will Nana be a prim and proper lady of the manor, or will she be a rebel like her grandson? Someone who would financially endow and encourage a 'free spirit' artist like Brendan? Tuesday can't arrive soon enough.
  3. Ask and you shall receive (prepare to be amazed, amused and absolutely "blown away"). As a bit of a teaser, I can tell you other flavours are available, including a really decadent MOCHA chocolate for those who prefer that ?. www.whipshots.com
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    Chapter 7 S3

    To @drsawzall comments about the coins etc., some 1854 - 1870 $3 gold coins with 'S' mint marks in Proof Condition sold for $100,000 - $260,000. As for Gladys Kravitz, aka Duncella, first suggestion for "Proof" would be use a doorbell cam that can be turned on by cellphone, BUT, CO 'Evidence Laws prohibit video / audio recordings without 2-party (Louella's) consent if camera's are on private property; UNLESS if the recording is made on or from Public Property. So doorbell / cellphone cams a hard NO. HOWEVER, mount a CCTV micro-cam (lipstick / spy) on post holding up mailbox next to curb or sidewalk, first 6-10 feet next to 'public' street is Public Property and a recording may be ADMISSABLE. As always, consulting with a lawyer might be advisable, and a really good one may be (dare I say it 😉?) worth their weight in gold. 🙄. Just find one who runs marathons and is whippet thin.
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    Chapter 45

    Life proceeds on the mountain, Not sure we can call it "Mount David" since we don't know if he and/or David Snr bought it all, thereby stopping 'Cabin Construction Company' from its development schemes. Or is it 'Crystal Mountain' next to 'Crystal Lake'? Or an indigeneous / Indian named mountain? David's building and proper development of his properties (sewage etc) continues with the cabin / home for new 'Uncle' Bobby 's brother, wife and son. Bobby temporarily moved in with David (leading to a long term 'partnership' or is that too soon to tell with Bobby still in school?). Thank you @CLJobe for this continuing 'Book II' in the David McLavic family tales.
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    Chapter 7 S3

    Hmm. “Yes, it is. What does it look like to you?” “It looks like a wolf that’s been in a shitload of fights.” “Do you think it might be the evil skinwalker in his animal form?” “Yeah, that’s very possible, even though we’ve always spotted him in his human form.” So more questions about a potentially "wounded wolf", and seeking help?
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    Breaks

    “Mom!” He tried to call out, but still his voice refused to work. He couldn’t move, although the frozen concrete had disappeared with the older boys. “Walter needs me, so I’ll leave you alone.” His mom’s voice was moving away. “No, no, no! Don’t leave me!” Henry’s silent pleas didn’t bring his mother back. 🥺😳😥 'Henry, only half coherent, felt utterly and completely alone, ... and his despair dissolved into numb resignation. Henry simply didn’t feel anything as the momentary light faded. His heavy eyelids slid closed, and he slipped into the silent, all-consuming darkness'. NO ! OMG poor Henry. After surgery to save his life, and still at risk of losing limbs (or parts of), due to: '"Poor child was found wandering alone, badly beaten, nearly naked, and well on his way to freezing to death. The nurse that brought him up said she’s never seen so much frostbite damage on a single body before." Henry, still heavily sedated, would be in ICU and on constant monitoring would automatically sound alarms 🚨🚨🚨 as his heart raced and blood pressure increased due to his semi- unconcious reaction to hearing his mother's voice. That would immediately have that "senior nurse" and trauma team race to Henry's side and with the curtain momentarily pulled back Angelica would have seen Henry's face and rushed to him, or at least screamed his name. Which Henry would hear and bring him back from the brink of... 😦😮
  8. Professor "I am the most important person in the world, and no other mathematician comes close" is like many I've had, that likely wore elbow patches not on their sartorially perfect coats but on their knees. (Too often it's not what they know, but who they blow, that assures their tenure. And once they have that, nothing short of a school funding threat can dislodge them. With the exception of a psychopath shit cannon who couldn't spell 'Ivy League' let alone attend/graduate one). Methinks Tyler and Brandon will works things out, or at least find dètente, perhaps with Devin along for the ride. Less ménage à trois and more three musketeers. As to whom plays the role of D'Artagnon? Dylan? Billy? Ou une quelle surprise, Christine? Ou, la la!
  9. Or misconfabulation?
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    Chapter 13

    Thank you @irivera for this chapter. Sometimes you find who you need just when you need them. Jonah gets an answer to his prayers? Better Caputo than Kaput?
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    Chapter 6 S3

    I was going to comment about Devin and Mac getting a puppy ('Can we keep him'?) But realized that's too crass, especially after what Clint's Dad told Mac & Dev. At some point things will get resolved, hopefully with a empathetic talk between Mac, Dev and Clint. 😥 Great story so far, but the shape-shifting 🐺 "Evil Skinwalker" still apparently tracking them?? Is it possible that this former 'person' was good in real life and is trapped between Good and Evil and trying to communicate with Dev and Mac for help? Like injured wild animals that sometime seek human help?
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    Chapter 43

    Yet another well-written, detailed and heart-filling chapter @Andre Delport. Just as Ryan and Drew are juggling the myriad of tasks that are part of operating the Devlin-Majors hospitality empire, both on land and at sea; a poignant family reminder takes center stage with the anniversary of the tragic deaths of their children's mothers Beth and Nicky on that fateful ferry crossing in the Scottish highlands. (my Scottish roots know the area all too well, but we'll nay focus on the crossing ). As time passes, and the children grow up, their heritage and the Mums who will never get to share in their lives comes back to remind Ry and Drew of the promises they made when laying Beth and Nicola to their eternal rest, to have the children spend time with all their grandparents, no matter how far flung they are in the world. And so arrangements are made that span the globe (and rack up some travel 'miles' points for the "munchkins") . First, using part of the children's Easter school break to travel from Cape Town to visit Nicky's parents in Singapore, then onward to Scotland to see Beth's parents and Clan Cameron. Second, will be a Caribbean cruise aboard the 'Texas Lass' courtesy of their 'other' grandparents Joan and Dan Kinley (during the Northern Hemisphere summer). When the children return home, they'll have plenty of memories to use when writing their "What I did on my vacation" essays. Thanks again André. Looking forward to coming chapters.
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    Chapter 44

    Thar's gold in them hills. Hmm, wonder what's next? David signing away his designs and rights might give the Corporation an idea of where those 'rocks' come from too. Better that David (Jr and Sr) keep cards in their own control for the foreseeable future @CLJobe. Nice chapter.
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    Chapter 5 S3

    It certainly can, and I've experienced first hand the effects a heavy rain can have on the 'hydralics' of white water rafting. BTW, you clip would actually work well with the soundtrack of Barber of Seville.
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    Chapter 42

    With his architectural career path is already clearly chosen, David is helping Bobby advance his education, both through textbook learning and guiding via 'hands-on' experience. Their relation continues grow into a life long one, in much the same way that Uncle Joe affects David. Story contunes to develop well @CLJobe. Perhaps even a Book II, 'Crystal Lake'?
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    Family

    "Walter Samson III hung up the phone, only then realizing he had made a huge mistake. He hadn’t yet told his wife about the attack on their eldest son". Of course not, because she may not be aware that her dear husband and loving father had ordered the murder of his scion, heir and namesake. Or she is aware and lives in fear of her husband? 😲 Is there also a strong possibility that 'WS III' is one of the few key "players" in the "decks of cards" involved in the use, abuse, murder and sale of boys, and he escaped being caught 🤬? (that resulted in Liberty Academy being established). At the very minimum, WS-III is a Waste of Skin that deserves a colonoscopy using a tunnel boring machine. Or a vasectomy using dull pruning shears and NO anesthesia. (IMHO). Paging Dr. Lechter.
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    Chapter 3 S3

    I suspect either Clint at 11 is just curious about how other "boys" have "developed", or he has an inkling (nascent idea) of his possible orientation. In any event, Mac is handling the situation well, and with sensitivity. As will Devin if the three of them discuss it. Another great chapter @Bill W. Thank you.
  18. "The Pen is mightier than the sword" (and other cutting remarks). Some suggest 1839 original version had 2nd and 3rd word together?
  19. In my 'salad days' I too liked exploring places in the dark of night. 😢 Abandoned and neglected places built by masons and other craftsmen in the 1900's or earlier, to last a lifetime. But decades or centuries on, stone walls slowly succumbing to the ravages of time, as Mother Earth works to reclaim the land. Trees pushing up through stone floors and walls to stand above missing or partial roofs. Only Moonlight or torch / flashlight to guide the way. Sometimes chancing upon others in furtive moments they thought private and secret from prying eyes, disapproving or hopeful glances. 😒
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    Insecurities

    The 💡 went on as I read the first sentence @empath. Glad to have Chicago and Liberty Academy back, and sooner than I thought, BUT, and it's a big one (though not Karcrashian 😆), does that mean one (or more) of our beloved 'brothers' at Liberty or their "protectors" are the target(s) of The Wolf? As for "The Cuntess", is it really Rebecca's fault that she just Can't Understand Normal Thinking? Or is she just a product of her environment and upbringing? That's like saying being a "Karen" is inbred. (Inbreeding 😲?) Qian needs to pay more attention to his "spidey" sense, especially when it's practically screaming at him. Same applies to Devon. 🚨🚨🚨
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    Prologue

    Methinks the answer, on a Chicago Christmas Eve, is both Da, & отец. A Russian 2 for 1. Something to Put-in your stocking? Repayment for the sins of the father and/or the Depression era greedy grandfather? Wow, sleeper agents. Many childless couples in the USA (and other Western countries) in the 80's and 90's adopted Russian / USSR orphan children (including many from Chernobyl area of Ukraine) for a price. But the price they paid then to"adopt" a child, may not be the ultimate price they are paying now; as the loving parents of Matthew paid as "... the life slipped from their sorrow-filled but inexplicably forgiving eyes". 😢😭 How many more?
  22. Thank you @Lee Wilson for a well-written, albeit a little convoluted ending, "but in the end, the long and winding road leads you back..." (Seems fitting). It is shame that Gen'l Chen seems to get off scot free. Thought perhaps particles of what he dumped from the chopper would get sucked back into the air intake for the cabin and the chopper would dive into the China Sea and disintegrate. And no doubt he's carrying some e-wallets full of CRYPTO or DOGEcoin to start over in Seoul. Perhaps KARMA will take care of Gen'l Chen, when a bus full of Infectious Disease doctors in SK for a Coronavirus conference hit and kill a Chinese man who is too busy looking at his Huawei cellphone as he steps off the curb and in front of the rushing bus. Shame about the 99.6% of 150 million population wiped out along the Eastern Seaboard and NE, but seems one 'fictitious' POTUS finally did "Drain the Swamp"; just didn't figure he'd be circling the drain 🕳️, with a plug that didn't fit. 😲 When you revisit our Boys - George, Lionel and Larry (Lorenzo) from Clinton 5 years later in 2030, (of course in GA Fiction-verse that will be Fall 2025), when you can provide a nice wrap-up, HEA and Epilogue. 🤔 In non-related thought, interesting watching Pope Francis' funeral today that he really did try to remain true to his Jesuit "average Joe" roots. No fancy red shoes, or lavish funeral, and his coffin driven to his final resting place, in the back of a working person's Dodge Ram pickup (although painted as a White Popemobile). He also died with less than €100 having refused annual Papal salary of €340,000 ($465,350 U.S.). Died a pauper not a Millionaire. 😇
  23. Major News outlets (with REAL journalists) report that 🇨🇦 Vets beat other nations health & human services provisions hands down, with Rx prices also much lower. As for "online surgery", "remote' surgery is being done more and more, with surgeons via video link, so it's available for 'select' procedures. Just not Dr. Bobbitt. 🗡️ 😳
  24. Bonsai ?
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