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Perhaps medical examination and evaluation, plus police investigation will reveal what caused Angela Prentis to turn into a (pardon the pun) Tasmanian Devil and destroy the website and office. Perhaps she was 'hearing voices'. Good to see Mum reinvigorated. Still waiting to hear the outcome of the "serious illness" of Edwin's 'cousin and next in line to inherit the title from Robert, that had Robert rush back to Scotland. Still say you've a plan afoot to have Edwin suddenly become 'Earl'. Next?

A really good start of the story of Arik's journey from boyhood into the initial stages of a potential loving relationship with Ethan. Looking forward to coming chapters.

Okay Nurse Ratched, since you're in near-absolute control of this story, (or are you?), we'll let you lead us on. For now. But at some point, the inmates (readers) may rebel.

Bill: Thank you (and your editorial team) for bringing us another really good chapter. Your TCH series has helped me (and others) get through some tough times, and TNG Book 4 is continuing to do so with our current global crisis. So Thank You! Glad to know we'll be getting a 'check in' to see how things are with Frankie. Stay safe, well and socially distant. And emulate the Lone Ranger - wear your mask to protect others. Tony

Wow! This chapter featured so many stories it was almost a novella on its own. Very well written and informative about aspects of living in and dealing with the Covid-19 pandemic. Having lived and worked in NY it's all too familiar. Let's hope, both in this story and our 'real' world (that seems like a nightmare), that things improve. As long as people, everyone and everywhere, pay attention to doctors. Don't be CovIdiots by partying, gathering in close crowds, beaches, etc. Wear the damn masks, social distance, and maybe we'll get through this.

In my mind I can hear Brayden bitching to his chauffer about being stuck in traffic behind a bus. Karma (and Kat's call) got his ticket punched by a Circle Line tourist bus.

Authors / Writers should always bear in mind the famous (and often mis-stated) quote by Wm Golding: "Give the reader what they want". With a following line that usually says, "Just not the way they expect it", or sometimes "in a way that works for everyone".

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Sorry I'm sooo late to this book. Some pandemic caused havoc. Great chapter about dealing with problems, overcoming and moving on. It was nice to know Teddy kept visiting Grandma Sullivan's grave through the years. She certainly reminded Teddy that she was watching over then with that sudden gust of wind shoving him towards the house. (I wonder if her name 'Florence', was used in remembrance of Florence Nightingale, credited with creating modern nursing in the late 1800s during the Crime an Wars, and who became known as "The Lady with the Lamp", in reference to her nightly rounds, carrying an oil lamp, while tending to 'wounded soldiers and wounded souls'. Wow, 2030 and no self-driving cars to mention. Yay! And it appears we beat the pandemic!

Thank you for a nice conclusion to a very good story, and a good epilogue too. (especially as it leaves the door open just a crack). Looking forward to what's next. Stay safe, and socially distant (either on the boat oar in the wine cellar).

Looked forward to reading this chapter. Overall good story line but some glaring errors present. Editors exist to make writers look good because they're supposed to catch things, IF they do it write! (That last word is a glaring free example). Trying not to ruffle any feathers, here we go. Beginning at first sentence; Maipo Valley (NOT Malpo) is Chile's most well known wine region. Concha y Toro (NOT Tora). Is the largest wine producer in all of South America, founded in 1883. I previously lived in Nassau County (NOT Counyt). Finally, "When we reach Florida, we are going to stop at the Marina..." Unless the name of the marina is 'Marina' it is not capitalized. that error repeated numerous times. Other than that, it's a good chapter. Next?

Okay, there is something odd happening. In this chapter the sound of bagpipes startled the boys and "All three boys..." . Three boys? As an editor I tend to keep track. In the order the 'boys' join Billy's boat we first meet Akela (22 but looks 16). Next to stay on board is 16 year old Liko. Third to join the ship/story is reappearance of 24 year old Kana with injured foot (Akela calls him "my brother"). Last to join Billy is Malo (Akela's other 'brother') after bringing baskets for fruit. So, what's happening? By my count that's four. Is this like somebody's memory test?

And just when will Emily reveal to TJ that his doctor/therapist is actually his Uncle? Or are they still afraid it could cause TJ to have a complete mental breakdown? Wait, you mentioned TJ getting hit after running out of restaurant and into traffic.??

Another good chapter, but a sporting term error starts 2nd paragraph, with this: "After the early lunch, we set off to play a game of golf." Golf is historically steeped in rules, regulations, etiquette and terminology, nowhere more so than at R&A. While golf is a game, you play A Round of golf. Whether 9, 18 or 72 holes. (if you watch a tournament, they refer to 1st, 2nd or Final Round). As one wise (Australian?) once said, “Golf is the closest game to the what we call life. You get bad breaks from good shots; you get good breaks from bad shot, while playing a round". Looking forward to coming chapters. Tony Ps: During this ongoing (for some time to come) pandemic, golf is one of the few sports that offers you fresh air, exercise, and easy social distancing, (only wearing mask indoors at the clubhouse). Fore!

Very good chapter. We're learning more (character development) about Billy and his 'sons' Akela, Liko, Malo and Kana. But you failed to mention which bed Liko slept in. Now, with the 'island boys' discovering the Peter-Charles one boat-slip away from them in the Mexican marina , the fun really begins when they meet Glen, Kevin and their 'crew'. Yippee!

Having visited my ancestral home in Scotland, and played The Old Course at The Royal and Ancient, young Sir Edwin is in for a challenge if he and Robert play that course. (instead of adjacent courses)*. Challenges due to the winds, the rough (need a Sherpa), the hazards (especially 'The Wall') and God forbid they hit into the 10-foot deep 'Hell' bunker. Oh and the double greens (one green serving two holes). Other than that, an easy day on the links. Afore ye go! * Some large brash 'golfer' with a bad hairdo, spray tan, and dodgy score-keeping wants to 'trump' the 'R&A' by building a "Terrific new HUGE course" across the road and said "The Open" should be played on my much better course". Bullocks! Looking FOREward to next chapter, hopefully soon so we don't get TEEd off.

Aww, 'The End' came too soon. I was hoping for more adventures in paradise, or at least living large in la-la land. Oh well, guess you're saving that up for next installment? Great story though (like I'd forget to tell you that).. Hope you're staying well, 'distant' and wearing a HOG mask when required (as a bandana is proven not to be 'medically' sufficient, according to a Hatley riding I.D. Dr friend). Tony

Guessing Akela is the oldest but still a young teen. Where do the other 'sons' rank in ages? Is Kana the youngest (between Adam & Peter) ? Can't believe coming into port in California ICE/ Imigration didn't have a field day over Billy's new 'sons'. "In vīnō vēritās, in aquā sānitās" applies! Tony

Wow, Rita's proving to be a 'hands on' owner of the resort, much to Carlo's benefit. This family seems to have all the 'attributes'. MILF, DILF and whatever acronym works for son Anthony, who I'm certain is anything but 'little'. Hmm, Carlito's way?

Good having Emily's version of events. Meanwhile back in the.'Black Abyss' , Mini and his dad continue their talk. Hopefully big TJ's undying love will help Mini to recover. Looking forward to more great chapters.

Ah yes, but what has proven to be the unfortunate case in virtually all of these situations, there are people 'higher up' involved in slave trade and other crimes, who will do anything to protect their 'property'. Billy and his 'sons' haven't seen the end of this, nor the worst. Very good development chapter. Tony

Geoff: What a remarkable chapter to close TBC5- Beautiful Boy with. Thank you! Your continued ability to build stories around endearing, true-to-life characters like Noah and his entire extended family, and the situations they find themselves in, is what keeps bringing me back to read your stories. As I've mentioned previously, I have my own real Noah (my nephew Noah) in our family and who is on The Spectrum, and just approaching college, and understand all the challenges that brings. But as your Noah said in his speech to his graduating college class, "A disability is actually a different ability". So now, Noah's life goes on, with him in a unique position to share his education, experiences and life lessons with a younger AS person in Jonah Prescott. I'm sure at some point (in book 6, 7, ?) you may give us a brief glimpse into Noah and Billy's ongoing married life. And I look forward to that. But for now, it's on with Greyson's story. Thanks again for your great writing. Tony

Okaaay: Thinking about investing in a "Way Back Machine". First, although Chapter 57 of Peter-Charles says "The End", the story is listed as 'In Process' and not 'Complete' (says he with baited breath). Still a good chapter, wrapping things up, and bringing us forward to? New book titled Grandfather II, which had me look for a book called Grandfather I, until I realized it's the boats name. Boat's in the (south) Pacific where Scuffy & Peter-Charles hailed from. Boat owner/capt in Chaz (shirt for Charles. Hmmm? Plot thickens? Please Sir, can I have some more? ;-)

Thank you so much for another wonderful chapter, (with another 2 dozen to come?), and a very special one. Although the boys are growing up, each holds a special place in Kevin and Glen's hearts (and in mine too). But especially the youngest, first with Peter and now with Adam. But with Adam, there is something extra-special that was revealed when his brief life history became known ; that for the first three years of his life Adam was not just unwanted but was also unloved! When I read that my heart wept. Adam's one small word - 'Pappy' - meant, and means so much. All his hopes, his need for love and acceptance in a real family and home. One he's found with Kevin and Glen, as well as his brothers. While this story is fiction and therefore 'imagined', there's not much that feels 'real' in a pandemic. I hope and pray that there are 'real' Kevin and Glens out there, for the all too real millions of children in need of food, shelter, love, and caring, and sometimes a safe lap to cuddle into. Thanks again for your writing. Stay safe. tony.