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  1. frigidjason

    Epilogue

    Please do , hopefully it wont be the wedding my mind pictured, another twist like your cliffhangers I hope
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    Epilogue

    Really really great story. Thanks for writing it, gonna miss looking for new chapters. Would be ironic if Noah's mom was at the wedding crying and he realizes its her.
  3. Powerful stuff. Well written and extremely well said, and very very real. Unfortunately change is guaranteed. Thank you for sharing.
  4. A good solid start, may things get better and better. Thanks for sharing your writing. Perhaps find an editor, someone who can help you with tidying up terms, tenses etc, your basic story is good in my opinion, writing however is not my forte.
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    Chapter Thirty

    Ethan is writing the next chapter, perhaps this is a new story
  6. In my humble opinion, Noah's mom knows he is gay and is using emotional blackmail to force him into the closet.
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    Chapter 21

    I am no good at writing, my skills therein are no good. Your tale/story was awesome in my opinion. Thanks for sharing it.
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    Chapter 14

    Your writing and story get better each chapter Keep up with the good work. Thanks for sharing with us
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    Chapter 10

    Very very sad.
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    Chapter 8

    The plot thickens...... Keep writing , the story improves each chapter.
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    Chapter 5

    Glad to see the two boys know about each other. Thanks for sharing your writing, enjoying the pace of the story and the lingo.
  12. Perfect chapter ending, love reading this story. Thanks for writing it.
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    Chapter Seventeen

    Ditto Superbly written thus far, cannot wait for more.
  14. frigidjason

    Three Things

    I agree, perfectly written.
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    Chapter Twelve

    Took a few long awaited kisses but the penny finally dropped, they both deserve the best. Love the story keep typing away...... hopefully few cliffhangers and some twists to come.
  16. frigidjason

    Chapter Ten

    Absolutely wonderful cliffhanger Next few lines better be good .......
  17. frigidjason

    Chapter Nine

    Brilliant chapter, keep up the excellent writing. I check everyday for an update on this story.
  18. frigidjason

    Chapter Eight

    Poor Noah, Jordan always pops up at the lip lock moment.😀 No peace , or is it fate...... 🤣🤣 Perhaps Jordan should follow his heart ❤️💋
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    Chapter Six

    Vice Versa perhaps...
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    Chapter Four

    Sebastian smells a rat me thinks. Great writing, keep it up
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    Chapter 1

    Awesome writing, so sad yet beautiful.
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    Judas

    Hope there will be chapter 2 soon.
  23. Taken long enough, better than online meet that's for sure. Hope that was the prince Adam was looking for!
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    Chapter 12

    One very large step forward, they all just might have found true friends
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    Mistakes

    Really nice chapter
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