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  1. chris191070

    Chapter 11

    The heroes take one path, there friends and companion take another. They will meet up again, but not before they have faced many challenges ahead.
  2. Simon and Martin might join the mile high club on the flight home.
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    Chapter 3

    Is that covered by Olles notes or is it a deviation that upsets his plan.
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    Chapter 3

    Isn't cream what Axl gets when Oliver gives him his tip.
  5. So we discover that the client is Martin's biological Father, with an interesting back story. That's quite an impressive offer that has been made to Martin and all confirmed legitimate by Simon. Simon and Martin give each other a helping hand, which helps Martin to sleep. Martin has many issues to think about.
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    Chapter 3

    I thought Meringue with fresh cream and strawberries
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    Chapter 3

    We the readers need something light and fluffy, before we dive back into President Will Carter. I'm looking forward to Jason’s story with intrepiddation as I know it's gonna be a hard story to read.
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    Chapter 3

    You have got to love Orel. He's a good brother to Oliver.
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    Chapter 3

    So the pizza delivery protocol worked. Oliver and Axl talked and kissed.
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    Chapter 8

    Theo and Elias are gonna use the Maxim gun on the Fenians. Theo and Elias 250 Fenians 0
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    Chapter 8

    Jack taking the message back to town. Theo, rescues Elias.
  12. Kilby is gonna slip up about his activities, especially as he is planning a weekend away with a client. The young lovers separate, as the circus prepares to move on. Francesco and Wanda not wanting to leave the circus.
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    Chapter 10

    That was a hot party cruise. Jody got some more fantastic sex .
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    The Promise Mark

    Roux and Jay are cute together. Now they have completed there bond. They will start out and look for Iris. Thanks for a wonderful chapter
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    Reunion

    It's great to see the return of Coradiel. Arlo should have shown better control with Godwin.
  16. chris191070

    Chapter 6

    Thanks for reading and your wonderful comments 😀
  17. chris191070

    Chapter 6

    Thanks for reading and your great comments 😀 Thanks for reading and your great comments 😀
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    Chapter 6

    I like Hank and the fact that isn't pressuring Jesse is good to see. He is helping Jesse by making decisions and then letting Jesse decide. Jesse has a traumatised background, that is making him skittish.
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    Chapter 6

    Thanks for reading and the great comments 😀
  20. chris191070

    Chapter 6

    Thanks for reading and the great comments 😀
  21. chris191070

    Chapter 6

    “No way,” Jimmy protested. “If he’s like a father to you, this doesn’t make sense. There’s got to be a mistake, or at least, a misunderstanding.” ‘Well, that’s Roland in the picture, unless he has a clone.” “Maybe there’s a rational explanation. Please don’t condemn someone you love before you have all the facts. Look how I was so quick to condemn Louie until I realized that our love was brotherly and strong, but it was different from the true feeling of passionate love he has for you,
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    Chapter 2

    Orel trying to settle Axl and Oliver up together is a masterclass, in sausage delivery protocol. Orels plan should bring highly successful.
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    Chapter 2

    Aiden and Marshall Lee are good together as friends and now boyfriends.
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