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    Chapter 16

    That was a brutal chapter. Darien completely broken.
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    Chapter 10

    Awesome chapter
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    The Stand Off

    A great ending. Some very nice features to the panic room.
  4. Just corrupt them all and then put them in the incinerator.
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    Chapter 20

    Noah is being manipulative, but he's got every reason to be. But what Noah is planning might be right for everything George has subjected him too, but it's not the way to go about things. Colt needs to talk to someone, before things get out of hand.
  6. Well things are not looking good for Mickey and Kyle at the moment. Rescue party on there way.
  7. That hand job has changed things between Mateo and Adrian
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    Chapter 15

    Ding, Dong, the witches are dead. Ishan was saved and Wylan even more powerful.
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    Clarity

    I'm wondering if that 15 year old kid was there on purpose, to slow Gabriel down. Sean knows Gabriel rescheduled him.
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    Chapter 10

    Thanks for the awesome chapter
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    Wounded

    The tension is building between Ash and Taggart. Taggart is genuinely worried after hurting Ash.
  12. Now we know Mickey backstory and why Hughie and Jesse are so important in his life.
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    Chapter 1

    Thanks for reading 😀
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    Chapter 14

    Ashot is leading the mission, to rescue Ishan
  15. I love the way they all disappeared into the panic room. Will the SWAT leader's plan work.
  16. Thanks for a wonderful chapter.
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    Chapter 5

    A powerful chapter, full of so much emotion. Matt is trying to be a Dad, to Levi.
  18. Some amazing stories on this dive. Thanks @Myr for these wonderful dives.
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    Chapter 1

    Thanks for reading 😀
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    The Call

    Awesome start to the story. Why is Jerry so special, that there were 3 shooters.
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    Chapter 18

    Noah, bottoms for Colt, telling him to go slow as he's the biggest he's ever had. Afterwards Noah, talks to Colt about killing George and how to do it. After the years of abuse he's suffered, Noah isn't thinking straight. There is so much that can go wrong with this plan. Colt should speak to Vincent or his Mum.
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